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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yess my poor girl.
And yess. I do love Roger so much (especially in chapter 27 we show him being SUPER SWEERT and i’m dying of feelsss) our morally grey character that is the fan favorite, BUT Nathaniel aka NATE AKA CINNAMON ROLL BOI will always have a special place in my heart.
Oh yes. I got a message the other day of one of my…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 loll i’m not gonna say names, but it’s ok. I just think when I publish i’m going to send him a note and say “To the guy who said I could never publish: Thanks for the motivation. :)” bc yes, spite was a great inspirer to never give up.
But thank you!!
And actually I think awhile ago, like a lonnnggg while ago I sent in chapter 4…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
OH and our Villain >:) General Seznick

(This snippet of what will be done in a future chapter 0.O)
“Stop me?” My harsh laugh echoed through the warehouse, “Silly little girl, don’t you know? You won’t be fighting me. You’ll be fighting them.”
My smirk grew as the kids, the other soldiers, she knew and grew up with surrounded her with…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago

“I’ll find you, Grace.” I whispered through the tears.
Was it a pledge or a plea? A desperation to be enough or a doubt that I ever could? Would I find her just to loose her again?
No. I couldn’t. I won’t.
Two stone heads burned in the back of my mind, two names scrawled on top.
No. I couldn’t lose her too. I won’t be the only one le…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago

“Till death do us part.”
Sickness. Dearth too soon. Closing with another promise.
“I’ll keep her safe, I promise i’ll keep our baby safe.”
Intruders. Cornered by soldiers. Gunshot killing my sunshine.
“No, please not again.”
Pain. Crushed by guilt. Anger coursing through my veins.
“You’ll pay. You’ll pay for all that you’ve done.…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Also, (I’ll reply to all yall in just a sec) here’s the graphic/aesthetic of each of the MC’s and a lil kinda about them snippet.

Who was I? Was I anyone before? All I had were foggy memories of white walls and pain, and some sinister feeling that I was missing something. Did I have a family before being in this camp? Was I somebody? Or am I…[Read more]
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KattheWriter started the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.
I thought he had changed.
I thought he cared.
He did it.
The thing I never thought he would do.
I felt like I was in a haze.
The noise of chains met my ears.
He said he understood.
He helped me.
How could he?
I staggered and gripped the bars harder.
He said he would…[Read more]
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KattheWriter posted an update 3 years, 8 months ago
I just finished Chapter 27 of my book! 😀
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Elizabeth replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@devastate-lasting Eyyy, long time no see! I’ve also been pretty absent from the forum the past *checks watch* year I guess, so I’m in a similar boat as you, lol. Good to see you around again! How’s life?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h They never really do explain the science, do they? I would definitely have appreciated more of an explanation—no wonder poor Sophie is so confused by it all! Plus, the whole “unmapped stars” business…doesn’t seem very scientifically accurate, no?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper I read through the series in, like, two weeks? Over a year ago? So my memory is a little fuzzy 😛
Overall, I would give series was a solid B+. Like, there were things that irked me (for instance, some of the humor felt…off. Like, Sophie’s supposed to be saving the world and struggling through all these things, and the next page is…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h I think it’s super awesome that you write fanfiction!! The world definitely could use more quality fan works in it—they’re so much fun, and I admire the people who can write them (like you!) I also think that’s super neat that you’re writing from your own experience/frustrations. I don’t have autism, but I have a brother who does, and f…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
@arien Whoa, sounds like you have a lot of book-loving people in your family!!! I can only imagine the family reunions… *jealous sigh*
Heh, I think I talked about that story in a different thread—basically it’s about a girl who suddenly inherits a kingdom (and a MASSIVE debt from the previous rulers), and has to go on a quest to plunder a drago…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@sarafini Oooh that sounds fun!! I’ve heard my brother mention it but I’ve never been super clear on how it works. Do you need to sign up for anything, or could one do it through Kingdom Pen?
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Elizabeth posted an update 3 years, 9 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Hey Kads!!! Long time no see! How’s life? 😀
Am I correct in remembering that you’re a fan of FF7? Bc I FINALLY got into it myself (unfortunately I still have yet to touch the original, just the remake :/) and need someone to nerd out over it with.
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CRIIIIII IM JUST SEEING THIS NOW HAHA
yessss im a ff7/kh fan!! you like kh right?! i’ve gotten a lot more into the kh fandom over time (still have yet to play any of the games myself tho big sadddddd but my word i love the characters)
do you have any way i could talk to you offsite? i’m never on KP anymore (except for the odd stalk of the…[Read more]
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@scripter-of-kingdoms lololol no worries—I too am a KP Lurker™️ 😛 Yes I would love to talk offsite! I’m on Goodreads (Elizabeth W) and @writerlexi1216 has my email address if you want it!!! (I’m not hip with the kids enough for social media unfortunately, but I’m always down for an email or GR message!!!)
I do like kh!! (Though “like” may be an u…[Read more]-
@lewilliams AHHH YAY HI HEHE
yes that sounds awesome!!! i’ll ask her for it ^.^ (haha no worries, i don’t have social media either LOL)
I LITERALLY KEEP HAVING DREAMS ABOUT ROXAS AND VENTUS IT’S CRAZY i dreamed about ventus last night for some reason 😭
and yesssss oh my goodness what do you think of ff7?? sephiroth TRAUMATIZED me when i was like…[Read more]
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ROXAS AND VENTUS MUST BE PROTECTED AT ALL COSTS
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@lewilliams also oh my goodness but i just noticed your tagline is sephiroth’s line from ff7r
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hey everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@booksandbeakers Hello Caitlyn!! Welcome to the forum! I’m Elizabeth, infrequent forum poster and Resident Old Person; it’s lovely to meet you. *offers cookies* That’s so cool you’ve been published!! And yesss, science is so cool!! What aspect do you like best? (My brain wanted to ask “what genre of science do you like?” but I don’t think…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
@arien I feel like I have a similar backstory to you (also yay, Boxcar Children!! I love that series)—can’t remember exactly when/why I started to write. I read a ton as a kid, and played pretend with my brothers almost as much, so it just seemed a natural progressions of things. And no need to be ashamed of a cowgirl + horse phase! I def…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka Aahhh I see!! That makes a lot of sense—thank you for explanation!
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