Daisy Torres

@joy-caroline

AWESOME!!👏👏👏

@elfwing

(I’m sorry for not replying sooner) I would love to be your beta reader, but I’m afraid I am too busy at the moment!

@kathleenramm

One of my new favorite books, Ignite by Jenna Terese! It is amazing!

@lydia-s

Ooo!! Thank you! I definitely will incorporate some of the things you mentioned into my website! I really like the idea of character quizzes!

Thanks so much! And I will certainly let you know when I launch it!

Also is there anything, in particular, you would like to see on my website that isn’t on others? Or any specific posts you’d…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Oh, phew! I’m glad it was helpful! You are very welcome! My Pleasure!

Yes, definitely read The Hidding place!

I hope that link about forgiveness has something useful in it. If not, there’s  lots of other posts like that on that blog that touch deeply into the psychology side of writing. I read stuff on there all the time.:)

I…[Read more]

@daisy-torres i love it!  wanna read it now…

@kathleenramm

yes, poor Colin. It also shows how critically important parents are; if you don’t teach your child to be confident and  a little independent, they literally cannot do things for themselves. And yes, he’s not a character I want to relate to but I can and it is encouraging to see his transformation!

as for my writing style… it was…[Read more]

Okay great! It looks lie it went through. Here’s the rest!

Also, I try to remind myself of this: just remember you don’t have to get it perfect the first time, just write it down. But that’s easier said than done too! Then you can go back and read your draft and see where you need to tweak it. Besides, what are beta readers for. *shly raises hand…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Ok! Let’s try this again! I’ll try sending smaller sections. It looks like my post didn’t go through.
First off, I think Keziah will be an amazing addition to your novel!!! I really like her struggle with forgiveness and many others will too!

Okay, I have my top tips or things to consider:

Keziah story/arc reminds me of Corrie Ten…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Glad to be of service!

Les Miserables is on my to-read list! I already know the story fairly well, but I’m looking forward to reading the actual book. Have you ever read The Count of Monte Cristo? It actually has a sort of similar story to Les Miserables.

Haha, I totally get having waaaay too many books to read! *glances at a pi…[Read more]

@daisy-torres ok all good totally understand!!! But yeah if you want to in the future just lemme know 🙂
@nova21 ok no problem and thank you for the suggestions!! 🙂
@godlyfantasy12 fantastic!! just email roseoakauthor at gmail dot com when you’re ready and we’ll go from there! 😀

@kathleenramm

never have, probably never will. not because i don’t like it, i just can’t XD  i wish i had some tips, but all i can give are just the things Gracie already said. XD

@elfwing

i’m so sorry, but i’m really busy with my job.  I wish I could, and your story sounds fun! i love fantasy.  wish you the best of luck.  you might be able to find more beta readers on Story Embers, or you can search for the “ultimate beta reader list” on Recent Topics.  I can’t remember the tags off hand.  good luck! <33

@godlyfantasy12 haha thanks! i wanted to do it but i felt awkward only posting my own lines XD

@issawriter17 @gracie-j @anyone-else

“Thorne, we came to talk.” Lyn called out, standing on her tiptoes, as if that would help her voice carry. A muffled reply proceeded from the back. She groaned, walking to the entrance of the other room and mot…

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@akbaer

hahaha whales can be pretty intimidating.

I love board games!  My little bro and me have a Memory rivalry (which isn’t rlly a board game).

ooo Gollum impersonation sounds like my sister!🤣🤣 that’s her favorite pastime.

archery sounds awesome!  I bet you’ll be amazing!  My BFF is super good at archery PLUS she is basically Jennifer…[Read more]