Kingdom Pen | Jayna Baas | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/booksbyjayna/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Jayna Baas. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 5695d4571194791c1e53037baf15f5ae Ellette Giselle posted an update: @booksbyjayna Hi! I believe I met you when I started an […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/185014/ Sun, 29 Sep 2024 00:25:07 -0400 @booksbyjayna

Hi! I believe I met you when I started an account on Good Reeds so that I could write a review for Freedom’s Fire!
I had NO IDEA you were also a KPer! That’s great!
I just wanted to say hi!

]]> 5 ba4ac14d071bc4aa38dddc7695101f4b Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-chat-chat/page/303/#post-170667 Fri, 22 Dec 2023 00:36:02 -0500 @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whalekeeper @euodia-vision @hybridlore @loopylin @trailblazer @rae @janellebelovedpig @felicity @karissa-chmil @landric @booksbyjayna  @everyone!
I DID IT!! I’M DONE WITH THE ROUGH DRAFT OF MY FIRST NOVEL!!!!!!!

Oh my gosh this is so…[Read more]

]]> cceed3ea2c544f5ad79a40ebc086a1de Allison posted an update: @felicity @booksbyjayna @starshiness @livingwoodchronicles @la […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/156965/ Fri, 27 Oct 2023 22:51:47 -0400 @felicity @booksbyjayna @starshiness @livingwoodchronicles @landric
Hi! I haven’t seen you guys active lately, how are you doing?🤗 If your busy, I totally understand, but I just thought I’d say hi!😊

]]> 20 fbb1f80a290d376331d99898a983e662 Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-chat-chat/page/236/#post-154214 Fri, 18 Aug 2023 20:36:25 -0400 @booksbyjayna

Thanks you! I just checked out the link, its pretty helpful! I am going to go for around 60,000 as that seems right for a YA dystopian. Thanks again!💗

@esther-c

Thank you! :)💗

]]> aea8cf971ae50d8be851a7f6d57641a9 Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-chat-chat/page/235/#post-154163 Wed, 16 Aug 2023 23:45:54 -0400 @esther-c @booksbyjayna @freedomwriter76 @janellebelovedpig @whalekeeper @everyone!

I think I may have asked this question before, but how long should my book be? I looked it up and one website said it must be over 70,000 and the rest mainly said has to be 40,000??? I am only at around 15,000 so far but don’t want to make it to long or to short😀…

]]> 2e5d32342b30af4578f4c6ab0ec93c13 Allison started the topic Quotes! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/quotes-3/ Wed, 28 Jun 2023 21:23:33 -0400 @esther-c @smiley @janllebelovedpig @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @highscribeofaetherium @booksbyjayna @everone!

I have been looking up quotes online a lot more lately. I think they are all so beautiful! I use them to start off a chapter, put at the starting of a book or just memorize them. Have you guys found any you just love? Have you…[Read more]

]]> 1a73285c32016653876ddfdba08531b9 Allison replied to the topic How long should my book be? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-long-should-my-book-be/#post-149051 Tue, 27 Jun 2023 23:32:49 -0400 @booksbyjayna

Thanks so much for helping out! I will definitely try both of your and @freedomwriter76  tips! 🙂

]]> 1ff28ac33dd5ace8e756787862d67bf2 Allison started the topic How long should my book be? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-long-should-my-book-be/ Tue, 27 Jun 2023 21:05:18 -0400 @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @booksbyjayna @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @lydibug @smiley @highscribeofaetherium  @everyone!

So I am working on my WIP (Which isn’t very long because I am starting from the middle) And I am very motivated to do it! My question is, how long should it be? I feel like I am rushing things a bit to…[Read more]

]]> 1b297523eaa4b128587649802db540d8 Felicity posted an update: @freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @esther-c @godlyfantasy1 […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/142727/ Sun, 11 Jun 2023 19:55:41 -0400 @freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @esther-c @godlyfantasy12 @acancello @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @loopylin @theloonyone @thearcaneaxiom @koshka @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @mineralizedwritings @sarahsmile @sarafini @euodia-vision @janellebelovedpig @booksbyjayna @whalekeeper @theloonyone @charityanne @s…[Read more]

]]> 14 bae726652c6f30147b55a8ae00a3ffb2 Allison posted an update: @esther-c @elanor @euodia-vision @felicity @hybridlore @hannah […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/141793/ Mon, 05 Jun 2023 17:19:27 -0400 @esther-c @elanor @euodia-vision @felicity @hybridlore @hannahn @janellebelovedpig @booksbyjayna @karissa-chmil @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @kyronthearcanin @kathleenramm @sarahsmile @starshiness @Everyonehere!!
Everyone, I just wanted to say thank you so much for being here on Kingdom Pen. It always makes me smile to see what everyone…[Read more]

]]> 8 e8a0ca1dd6feb9abf37c6119273aa143 Esther started the topic Too Cliche? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/too-cliche/ Fri, 12 May 2023 17:42:30 -0400 Alright… my WIP has a problem…

It’s too cliche.

Sort of…

And I don’t know if it’s unique enough. At first I thought it was, but I read something about the dystopian genre, and now I’m not so sure.

So there is this e-book thingy that I got from Story Embers and in it, readers answered some questions about certain genres and other writing stuff…[Read more]

]]> 7528e8627527f64e98cad0bbcd806442 Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-chat-chat/page/122/#post-142996 Fri, 12 May 2023 15:53:32 -0400 @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @kyrothearcanin @janellebelovedpig @landric @booksbyjayna @godlyfantsay12 @hybridlore @everyone who wants to join!

I just came up with a few questions we could all answer to get to know each other better! Please add more questions and tag more people 🙂

  1. Whats your favorite color?

    2. …

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]]> 0fe437607a52be00dd1fcff7d59aa4d9 Allison started the topic Craft ideas!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/craft-ideas/ Tue, 09 May 2023 12:35:37 -0400 @esther-c @euodia-vision @janellebelovedpig @lightoverdarkness6 @kyronthearcanon @mieralizedwritings @sarahsmile @elanor @booksbyjayna @landric @everyone!!

I had a great idea! I’m sure everyone here dreams of having a library of their own someday? And if not maybe a reading room, a garden or a small space to hang out . Just some place you dream…[Read more]

]]> 2f3089ce72874ff70438c73b1e3a548d Allison posted an update: @esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @freedomwriter76 @janellebe […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/137065/ Fri, 28 Apr 2023 21:44:48 -0400 @esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @freedomwriter76 @janellebelovedpig @booksbyjayna @landric @lightoverdarkness6 @sarahsmile

Hi everyone! Im officially back on Kingdom Pen! We now have internet and I can be on here more often! I missed you all and cant wait to see what you all have written! Our family move went amazing and im so thankful to be…[Read more]

]]> 3 44ffdf3a6d0a3ebd23efd5d33de174ad MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I finished my short story... publishing advice? in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-finished-my-short-story-publishing-advice/#post-141030 Mon, 24 Apr 2023 02:57:54 -0400 @starshiness @otherworldly-historian @booksbyjayna

Thanks for the advice guys! I got a critique (Harsh but very informative lol) and I might not be ready to publish yet… lol.

]]> 99fc43b3d8e85665b0bf1006814f2a31 Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-makes-an-allegory-impactful/#post-140886 Sat, 22 Apr 2023 15:32:20 -0400 @booksbyjayna

Thank you so much!

Yeah, those are great points about Hind’s Feet on High Places that I hadn’t thought about. I’m so thankful our Lord doesn’t just pop on the scene when we’re desperate, but He’s there every step– joy or trouble. I’m excited for the scene in my allegory where Little One realizes she was never as alone as she felt.…[Read more]

]]> c98b188887b733db69eb488f2dac6217 MineralizedWritings started the topic I finished my short story... publishing advice? in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-finished-my-short-story-publishing-advice/ Thu, 20 Apr 2023 20:30:53 -0400 Hello yall! You heard that, I’m basically finished with my short story. It just needs a tad of editing. I was originally going to publish to KP, but my mom brought up the point that if it isn’t copyrighted, it could get stolen. so here’s the deal. I know nothing about this whole thing, and I’ve put a lot of effort into this story. It’s going to be…[Read more]

]]> b4f134eb22d646145377f7a6185f3b88 Felicity replied to the topic New Book Release! in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/new-book-release/#post-140406 Tue, 18 Apr 2023 16:32:05 -0400 @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @theloonyone @esther-c @hannah-beth @thearcaneaxiom @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian @awesumfaith @janellebelovedpig @booksbyjayna @eudio-vision @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @sarafini @whale-keeper @keilah-h @80sTrish @solfyre @gwyndalf-the-wise @katherine…[Read more]

]]> 9d3da0d2018675a1bd82a5d583a12c6c Allison posted an update: @esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euod […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/134632/ Wed, 05 Apr 2023 04:07:30 -0400 @esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Hi! Im not going to be on KP to much this week. We are driving cross country and getting to our stops pretty late. Ill be on as often as I can, but it might take me a while to reply!

]]> 5 5ef42af3e24d1787d178ca04a75ec1e4 Allison started the topic The story game.... in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-story-game/ Fri, 31 Mar 2023 22:54:58 -0400 @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @kyrothearcain @janellebelovedpig @landric @booksbyjayna @euodia-vision @everyone who wants to join!

I made up a fun game that we all can play! So its crazy easy… Step one, im going to post a sentence, paragraph, huge piece etc of unfinished work. Then one of you are going to add the next piece…[Read more]

]]> 8e41af6666155d87fca96dfff9238208 Allison posted an update: @esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euod […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/134153/ Thu, 30 Mar 2023 19:15:07 -0400 @esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Thank you all for the prayers! The move has been going great! We leave in 5 days! Saying goodbye to everyone has been hard, but better because I know I will see them again. I just wanted to let you all know that I will be on…[Read more]

]]> 4 0d21affda7b6da7e21929dd2182e82e4 Esther replied to the topic No Boring Scenes?? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/no-boring-scenes/page/2/#post-138788 Wed, 29 Mar 2023 19:19:21 -0400 @booksbyjayna

You’re good! 🙂

]]> ba5381c26a2710afc717f21ac295d50e Keilah H. replied to the topic Theme Music for the Scene You’re in Right Now in the forum Music https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/theme-music-for-the-scene-youre-in-right-now/#post-138786 Wed, 29 Mar 2023 19:16:36 -0400 @booksbyjayna Ooh, this is fun.

I will say that most of the music I’m listening to while writing is soundtracks from other movies… I got inspired for a whole fanfic that way which had nothing to do with the story the song’s supposed to be for……

]]> 72632c14c55560aa6831702776f770e3 Esther replied to the topic No Boring Scenes?? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/no-boring-scenes/#post-138725 Tue, 28 Mar 2023 22:07:47 -0400 @booksbyjayna

I’ll keep that in mind! Thanks for the piece of insight!

]]> d49c068836ab5bceb0191f8290682759 Esther replied to the topic Theme Music for the Scene You’re in Right Now in the forum Music https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/theme-music-for-the-scene-youre-in-right-now/#post-138719 Tue, 28 Mar 2023 21:49:39 -0400 @booksbyjayna

Oooh fun!! I’ll have to hop on here some time when I’m actually writing. XD

]]> 133aac9a4a3ff95b6f97b86efad1d1b9 Allison posted an update: @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @solfrye @lightoverdarkness6 @felic […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/133619/ Fri, 24 Mar 2023 23:46:18 -0400 @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @solfrye @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwriting @landric @booksbyjayna
Hi everybody! I am having a hard time right now because we are moving and leaving a town I have lived in my whole life. I feel like crying all the time although I know this move will help my family and me. Just asking for…[Read more]

]]> 10 2c8925cdbb7789785b5a15890e0b2de6 Allison started the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-scrapbook/ Tue, 21 Mar 2023 20:20:22 -0400 @esther-c @lighoverdarkness6 @loopylin @janellebelovedpig @power @booksbyjayna @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper and everyone!

I had a great idea! We all should do a scrapbook! Just post a little bit or a lot whenever, you do something your proud of in writing! Share your characters, story, great ideas, want to thank somebody or just leave them a…[Read more]

]]> 80f021148bfb657743ea94fbd7bbfabd Allison replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/bookworms/page/3/#post-137633 Sun, 19 Mar 2023 15:57:05 -0400 @booksbyjayna

Yep that does! Thank you! I was just wondering because I know a family who is also Christian and they have smaller kids in there family. Thanks again!

]]> 2623867f28496515c728eb7c8aced26c LandriC replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/bookworms/page/2/#post-137533 Sat, 18 Mar 2023 20:55:17 -0400 Hi @ancello!

Here are some of my favorite series….

  • Viking Quest by Lois W. Johnson. This one is about a brother and sister who get captured by Vikings and convert them to Christianity eventually. They’re great!
  • Redwall by Brian Jacques (MY ALL TIME FAVORITE) Pure simple awesomeness. Nuff said. Read it and then tag me with your thoughts if…

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]]> 8eeb33749cd21b0aa69f69b2fb9c2afb Allison replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/bookworms/page/2/#post-137532 Sat, 18 Mar 2023 20:48:34 -0400 @booksbyjayna

I am totally going to  read your book, it sounds amazing! Just one question, what reading level is it? Amanda Dykes… She sounds familiar but I don’t think I have read anything by her yet 🙂

]]> c7f9244279bc41f4a44e8c51b2d59213 Allison started the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/bookworms/ Thu, 16 Mar 2023 23:58:45 -0400 @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @booksbyjayna @whalekeeper   and everybody who is interested !

I love reading and writing so much and love to talk about it! So I have a few questions for everybody!

  1. I am looking for book recommendations (I like action packed and super exciting, also sometimes a bit of romance)
  2. Did any of you publish any b…

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]]> 6a814cc41992b2d4569b96822aa620a6 Allison replied to the topic Writing Prompts and writers block busters! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-prompts-and-writers-block-busters/#post-136549 Sun, 12 Mar 2023 22:56:51 -0400 @booksbyjayna

Yep, I probably should have done that.  😀

Ill just tag some here 🙂

Sorry I didn’t tag anybody sooner. I didn’t quite know how to do it 😀

@MineralizedWritings @Freedom @TheArcaneAxiom @Janellebelovedpig @Solfyre @ightoverdarkness6   @Esther @Jayna Baas,

]]> d592e0294235422a49ab4057b791d6f0 Esther replied to the topic My Villain Needs Some Help in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-villain-needs-some-help/page/2/#post-136492 Sun, 12 Mar 2023 17:52:49 -0400 @booksbyjayna

To be honest, reading in your genre is one of the first “rules” of good writing, partly so you’ll understand what readers expect and partly so you’ll know what’s out there (major themes, tropes, etc.) and avoid repetition. So yeah, you might want to start there.

Yep… I know… I just really need to do it. 🤣 (And I’ve read in like ev…[Read more]

]]> 944bb4e5a4e54773000511cd41d4881b Esther replied to the topic My Villain Needs Some Help in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-villain-needs-some-help/page/2/#post-136480 Sun, 12 Mar 2023 16:45:28 -0400 @booksbyjayna

I know nothing about dystopia, and it looks like you’re getting some good answers already. But one thing I would suggest regarding Len’s title is to take a look at other books in your genre and see what the standard practice seems to be. If fans of dystopia are used to this type of character having a title, they’ll probably expec…

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]]> 8ef19392a7af8e79fa16d9ccdae1788e Esther started the topic My Villain Needs Some Help in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-villain-needs-some-help/ Sat, 11 Mar 2023 15:58:54 -0500 Ok guys. My villain needs some help. Or rather, I, as his author, need some help. I need to decide on his evil title and part of his motivation.

First, some background on him: (Warning: There are a few spoilers. Read at your own risk.) (Another Warning: I do mention murder a few times.)

Derek Len desired peace. It was all he wanted. All he…[Read more]

]]> e287b7419a18e79e50c7d83876d514bd soleilnaia replied to the topic Wix or Wordpress? in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wix-or-wordpress/#post-136305 Fri, 10 Mar 2023 05:11:57 -0500 @booksbyjayna

It looks like Dreamhost is significantly cheaper than Bluehost for the same or better benefits, so I plan to go that route. Another thing to keep in mind (something a family member pointed out to me) is that software and other online products often go on sale for Cyber Monday, so that may be a good time to purchase things like the…

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]]> e5a704e54cd05b00486fee048f75624f soleilnaia replied to the topic They all said to start here... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/they-all-said-to-start-here/page/3/#post-136304 Fri, 10 Mar 2023 05:09:24 -0500 @booksbyjayna

Thanks! If you like historical fiction, I’d love for you to check out my website or newsletter (my website is in my signature at the bottom of this post).

I’ve actually checked out your site before. It’s quite well done. 🙂

It will be interesting for you to find out how you approach a novel. And it’s perfectly fine if you don’t figur…

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]]> 28e34a2be6e1266d2d4d283827615f41 SarahSmile replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-14/page/2/#post-134111 Tue, 21 Feb 2023 22:57:08 -0500 @booksbyjayna

Are you a plotter, a pantser, or a tweener?

I think I’m between plotter and pantser. For all the main stories that I’ve actually made any progress on, I’ve started with a loose outline and intention to write and then begun to flesh out the MC/MCs and worked from there.

]]> 619568b62c4f8338a544cad7b64ff675 soleilnaia replied to the topic They all said to start here... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/they-all-said-to-start-here/page/2/#post-133547 Sat, 18 Feb 2023 06:06:35 -0500 @booksbyjayna

Hello! It’s nice to officially meet you 🙂

Honestly, I was kidding about the dystopia part. I was just surprised because the first three people who talked to me were dystopian writers. But historical fiction is AMAZING! I’m glad you’ve found your niche 🙂 I hope you have fun with the contemporary fiction stuff, too.

I love…[Read more]

]]> 76cc5af2519e232a44f6b6bb62ae2ac2 Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-place-to-share-write-whatever-were-working-on-worldbuilding-plot-etc/page/5/#post-133220 Thu, 16 Feb 2023 22:13:32 -0500 @booksbyjayna

That Philemon retelling sounds super interesting!!

Right now… well… I should be editing my draft…

Which I’ll probably actually go do right now. XD

]]> 7ce39ad680adb11f4ecea121497888a6 MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-place-to-share-write-whatever-were-working-on-worldbuilding-plot-etc/page/5/#post-133217 Thu, 16 Feb 2023 22:11:20 -0500 @booksbyjayna

Cool! I’m working on my second book (totally different structure/feel than the other ones I’m working on) It has a hero reaching rock bottom moment too, still working out the kinks (as in I haven’t even started outlining XD)

]]> 279b3015a95524e6143388a753760afa Euodia replied to the topic Cheesy or not? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/cheesy-or-not/page/2/#post-132713 Mon, 13 Feb 2023 15:33:55 -0500 @booksbyjayna

Ooh, that’s very helpful. Thanks so much!

Okay, question, so you mentioned that the whole ‘brainwashing’ thing isn’t that realistic, so would you stick with that even in a fantasy story? Where brainwashing could be very realistic? Or not?

]]> a54dbbffee021df54ed7f794cd27354d Esther replied to the topic Beta-readers?? in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/beta-readers/#post-132525 Fri, 10 Feb 2023 18:44:28 -0500 @power @otherworldlyhistorian @sarafini @foltih-feolin @felicity @mineralizedwritings

Thanks for offering, though I’m not looking for beta-readers quite yet. 😉 Your enthusiasm is encouraging, though, and I’ll remember y’all when I’m searching for beta-readers. 🙂

@joy-calle

I watched Abbie Emmons’s video on beta readers and she recommend…

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]]> 28737d0c74314ea039baae3a257c2b73 Esther started the topic Beta-readers?? in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/beta-readers/ Thu, 09 Feb 2023 20:15:03 -0500 @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicl22 @joy-calle @gracie-j @r-m-archer @booksbyjayna @loopylin @theloonyone @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @devastate-lasting @elisahvet-pidyon @koshka @anyone-interested @anyone-that-I-have-forgotten-to-tag

Ok. I have a question.

So once I’m done w…[Read more]

]]> 10c181d962d61fdec75a1e4d4544048f Keilah H. replied to the topic Any other Signposters here? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/any-other-signposters-here/page/2/#post-131889 Mon, 06 Feb 2023 20:51:39 -0500 @booksbyjayna Nice! I’ll have to come back to that sometime. (Bookmarked KP’s email telling that you sent this, lol)

]]> 4f2cf3267726ba6debfb29090364550c Esther replied to the topic Pretty Prose, Please! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/pretty-prose-please/#post-131801 Mon, 06 Feb 2023 00:42:01 -0500 @sarafini

Ok, thx!

I have yet to figure out my style. I’ve been trying to read articles on style and such but haven’t written enough to figure mine out yet. I know that I do much better writing in 1st person instead of third person but that’s as far as I’ve gotten.

Yeah. In all honesty, I still need to figure out my style as well. Like, my olde…[Read more]

]]> 264d903498c51323efaff13211823a4f Esther replied to the topic Pretty Prose, Please! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/pretty-prose-please/#post-131745 Sun, 05 Feb 2023 18:04:39 -0500 @booksbyjayna

All that was super helpful!! Thanks so much!! 🙂 🙂

@theloonyone

That’s a great idea! I’ll have to try that!! Thx!

@elishavet-pidyon

I’ve seen it work and will definitely be personally implementing it as much as I can.

(After all, it’s another excuse to read Prince Caspian again…)…

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]]> 712f4454d4540cb6bacd944ff08fecc5 soleilnaia replied to the topic Wix or Wordpress? in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wix-or-wordpress/#post-131721 Sun, 05 Feb 2023 03:45:10 -0500 @booksbyjayna Thank you so much! This is awesome 🙂

]]> 1b57f437bf781258b5bf508efde6ff3e Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Pretty Prose, Please! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/pretty-prose-please/#post-131719 Sun, 05 Feb 2023 03:42:31 -0500 @esther-c

Oof. I also have difficulties with this. (I think every author does at some point.)

I’ll just echo @booksbyjayna and say keep writing and study the authors you want to emulate. I’ve seen it work and will definitely be personally implementing it as much as I can.

(After all, it’s another excuse to read Prince Caspian again…)

]]> d433c9a38d3d6db3ad10fd315ded9bdc whaley replied to the topic Any other Signposters here? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/any-other-signposters-here/page/2/#post-131692 Sat, 04 Feb 2023 22:36:22 -0500 @booksbyjayna

That is awesome! Thanks for this so much, I’ve already got a few ideas! Now I need to copy-paste this into my documents… 🙂

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