@beth-torres
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Esther replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @trailblazer
Oh… oops. XD I didn’t know this would start a whole discussion. But that’s okay! It’s really interesting to hear y’all’s opinions.
I wasn’t necessarily trying to say that publishers aren’t looking for a good book. I’m just saying that publishers can be really harsh with what they accept and what t…
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hybridlore replied to the topic How many stories/books have you written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Unless it was a historical fiction or something, which doesn’t allow that sort of thing.
Fawkes and Romanov by Nadine Brandes are both historical fiction with fantasy mixed in. They’re both really good.
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hybridlore replied to the topic How many stories/books have you written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I have only ever finished a flash fiction piece, a short story, and a cringy picture book when I was like seven. But I have a ton of started and abandoned ideas, ranging from like a page long to 20k words. I’m not sure if I’ll ever finish any of them, but I might go back to some eventually.
Now I lean towards softer science…[Read more]
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HighScribe posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
If you finish a book and immediately want to flip back to page one and read the whole thing again, you know you’ve found a keeper.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic How many stories/books have you written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’ve only ever finished two long stories.
One was about four kids who go to another world…It can be found in the topic “what’s the cringiest thing you’ve ever written”.And one was about a broken family who learns to love each other. I’ve never posted ANY of this.
I have a huge binder full of stories I’ve started but never…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic How many stories/books have you written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
What genre do you lean to when writing?
Oop, I didn’t see this question.
I agree with my brother, fantasy and maybe sci-fi. I wouldn’t even have any idea how to write contemporary or historical fiction.
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HighScribe replied to the topic How many stories/books have you written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@ellie-wingfeather
Exactly zero. (Unless you count the super cringey ‘Pontoon Boat Catastrophe’ which I wrote when I was seven. It can be found in the ‘what’s the cringiest thing you’ve ever written’ topic) -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
@esther-c Hey…I was wondering if you’ve looked at my writing yet? (I’m not trying to nag you or anything XD just wondering if you still wanted to do it?) I know you’re probably busy…but just wondering (:
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I don’t mind being nagged. XD But yeah, I’ll start reading it this week and try to give you some feedback as soon as I can. 😊
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Hey! So I just read the first two chapters of your book. Love it already!! I have some feedback to give, but I was wondering what kind you want. Like, do you want to know things about the characters, plot, prose, setting, etc.? Are there specific questions you want answered? I don’t want to give you feedback that you aren’t looking for. 😉
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It really doesn’t matter, haha! Just your overall thoughts! 🙂
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Ok, cool 😉
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 10 months ago
Heyy! I’m Sara, though most people around here call me…well, they call me Sara. XD
Anyways, I’m a chocolate consuming, emotionally unstable, sleep deprived, algebra loving, public school attending freshman!
Here are some random questions:
Do you ever talk to yourself?
Have you ever subconsciously narrated parts of your…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 10 months ago
@whalekeeper @esther-c @trailblazer
Okay…I think I’m just not good at saying what I mean. Let me try again, haha!
But Esther has a good point of view, that publishers are also looking for well-written material to a degree, because readers like good writing, and therefore good writing will sell. I’m not saying all readers have quality taste, but…
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Ruth replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 10 months ago
One book that I found interesting is The Moon is a Harsh Mistress by Robert A. Heinlein. It’s sci-fi, but it is about a revolution on Luna against Terra, and the parallels are brilliant! I actually have a clearer picture of what it must have been like in some ways in the revolutionary war. Beware, Heinlein is not a Christian. T…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 10 months ago
So ummm…. There’s a reason they reject you… it’s because your writing’s not good enough (for the most part). So yeahhh… And if you’re going to be a good writer, you have to learn how to deal with rejection. If you can’t, then… I’m sorry. XD Anyway, that’s just what I was thinking during the whole video and I wanted to rant about i…
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hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 Hey! I’m really interested in Abbie Emmons after seeing you guys mention her. I’m going to check out her channel, and maybe her book 100 days of sunlight. Have either of you read it?
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Oh awesome!! She can have some really helpful stuff, but take it all with a grain of salt, because I feel like not everything she says works for every writer. (Like outlining your entire novel before writing it). But yeah, super helpful stuff. 😊
I’ve been wanting to, but haven’t gotten the chance yet. She has a sequel to that and I believe it’…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 10 months ago
I don’t know too much about that time frame, and I haven’t read any books in it that I can think of right now. Also, I have pretty much zero experience writing from male POVs, so I wouldn’t be much help there either, lol. But it does sound like a cool idea, and I would love to read it once you start it!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 10 months ago
@trillianwingfeather
Hi, nice to meet you! I’m hybridlore or Hybrid, a Christian homeschooler, high school sophomore, and science fiction writer. I also love the Wingfeather Saga, and I’m rereading it right now! 😁 My favorite character is probably Podo, but I like them all xD.
What do you like about your genre/style of writing and what books…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Cole…he’s in 19th Century Roleplay. This was my intro post for him:
Alright…I’m gonna call my Cole from the ashes of my life where he lies, brush him off, and shine his medals.
Cole was my hero as a young child, he did every brave deed I could think up, in a WWII setting. I don’t remember him much, since when I hit the mark of ten or so…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 10 months ago
Hi! Nice to meet you, Trilliane! I’m Bridget, aka HighScribe, aka the resident slightly insane sword-obsessed book hoarder of KP. I’m a homeschooler, and a high school freshman. I mostly write fantasy, and I’m working on a fantasy universe with multiple planets with my brother, @Jonas.
Now the traditional quest…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, sometimes it helps to have two POVs, and other times it’s not necessary. I’ve become so accustomed to it though, that when I start coming up with a story idea, my mind naturally creates two POV characters. XD
Glad I could help!!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Fynn
“That’s really nice to hear. We know a few people whose experiences are similar to ours, like Callista and her family. Except,” his gaze drifted over to her, “she’s had a much harder time of it than me. In fact,” he tilted his head, “I’m not sure how she does it. She’s been through so much, yet when someone else is in…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Nerp, still not working…
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That’s “The Westing Game” by Ellen Raskin for me! Have you read it?
@acancello
No, I haven’t. I’ll have to look it up.
I am currently rereading Wind Daughter by Joanna Ruth Meyer for the… fourth… time, I think in the last week and a half since I first read it… so um… yeah, I think I’ve achieved a new level of insanity 😅
Dont worry, I read the Westing Game three times in a row and had to seriously force myself to stop XD
@acancello
Yes, I’m definitely going to forbid myself from reading this book again for… a while lol.
I let my friend borrow it, otherwise I would be reading it right now instead of Harry Potter (For the billionth time, those never get tiring 😀 )
@acancello
I love HP!
@highscribeofaetherium
Yay!!! Now I can ask you questions XD
Top five favorite characters
You can go to the yule ball with someone, who?
Least favorite character?
Favorite book?
Favorite movie?
I loooove the golden trio and the Weasley twins.
GEORGE WEASLEY <3 XD
No charac- wait… Dolores Umbridge
I cant pick a favorite book XD
and I really liked #7 part 2 and 2 for the movies
Oh and last question for now 😀
Secret favorite character….. Mine is….
Draco Malfoy
@acancello
Hmm… fav characters… let’s see, Lupin, Sirius, Dumbledore, Luna, and… hmm… idk, honestly, who my last one is. I do like the Weasley twins, too. I really don’t LOVE any of the main characters, but I appreciate them all.
Oh, um, hehe, um, er, can I take young Lupin? I’ll go with him. (Remind me to delete all traces of this conversation…[Read more]
LUPIN!! Hes my #1 favorite Defense against the dark arts teacher. (Yeah yeah, Lockharts #2) XD
Oh! I forgot about Neville! I honestly cant pick a favorite. All the ones you picked are amazing to, especially Luna and Sirius!
Yessssss!! Young Lupin <3 I would have gone with Fred but…. 😭 😭 😭
The only reason Malfoy is 'Secret' is cause no one…[Read more]
Um… Angelina, right? I think?
Yes; I think they did pretty well, seeing how much they had to shorten them. But I feel like three through five were just not done well, and even if they were longer they still would not have been very good. I really dislike Dumbledore’s second actor, he was not a good choice for the character (like how he pra…[Read more]
@highscribeofaetherium
Yes he does! I nearly cried when I read that….
Yeah, thats one thing that bugged me in the movies, Dumbledore was to mean. Do you know about the Wizzarding World website? They have the best quizzes and puzzles! Also what house are you in?
Im a Gryffindor, but my next house would be Slytherin….XD
I’ve taken a couple tests, though I don’t think any of them were official, and I think I’ve gotten every house except Hufflepuff lol.
I do know about the website, but I don’t think I’ve ever visited it-
Ooooh, I just visited it real quick and it looks super cool!! I’m going to waste wayyyyy too much time on there bwahahaha!!
Its the best one ever! Have fun!!! (Ive spent waaayy to much time on there too XD) Ill share my patrounus and wand in a sec..
Ah! Here it is!! My patronus is a Beagle and my wand is Sycamore wood with a dragon core 12 ¾” and reasonably supple flexibility
Wow, that’s very detailed! There must be TONS of wand options.
I conquer whole heartedly!
What book did you finish?
It was Wind Daughter by Joanna Ruth Meyer. I’ve read it, erm, about four times in the last week and a half… heh… heh… XD
The house, wand and patrounus (I think thats spelled wrong.) Are all great quizzes with so many options! If you do it, let me know I want to see which house your in, lol!
XD Felt.
Well I’m totally looking it up now