Ava Blue

Rude, Wyoh. Just rude.

I think it worked? It’s a drawing of Lois @anyonewhocaresimtoonervoustoactuallytagpeoplern

Ok so I have no idea what I’m doing with this, but I’m going to try to share a drawing with a link? https://www.canva.com/design/DAF_sqkLfFg/-se1nV_WKnhIbQAZlNI_FQ/edit?utm_content=DAF_sqkLfFg&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

@freed_and_redeemed

hehe I’m teasing. My brother and I like telling each other “Don’t die. It’s bad for your health.” whenever we’re sick or accidentally trip and fall or something XD

@freed_and_redeemed

Everytime you do this –

🫠

I lose it.

@keilah-h

I know, it was funny 😛

@freed_and_redeemed

That’s great! Careful not to accidentally delete the email draft!!

@keilah-h

What about telling will spoil it? WHAT ABOUT TELLING WILL SPOIL IT?? That’s the definition of spoiling!! 😆

@loopylin

StOP speaking TRUTH 😝

@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper Y’all need to stop being sick. It’s bad for your health.

@freed_and_redeemed

Yeess, this season is so bad 🙄 I hope y’all get better too! (And I won’t rush it lol)

@everyone

S’up.

I will not have the next part out soon, because I have caught two terrible-horrible-no-good-very-bad viruses back to back 😖

Am on the mend, but I was on fire for three days and it felt like I was growing laser eyes the hard way.

Will probably update next week instead, as I now need to catch up on school and hurriedly prepare f…[Read more]

@keilah-h

but did anyone fall to Mundy’s venomous teeth or tail barb?

I can’t tell you!! 🤣 You gonna make me spoil everything!

not trying to be greedy or demanding (sorry if I sound that way) but do u have the next chapter ready yet? I (and probably everyone else) really want to see what happens next.

I really appreciate the enthusiasm ☺️ U are…[Read more]

@stephie

Very intriguing! (I tried to find a synonym, since everyone else has used that word, but it’s a good word.) I like your character (as much as one could like a character who’s trying to murder someone), and I’m hoping for a redemption arc. I’d love to read more!

@freed_and_redeemed @esther-c

Glad you’re okay! We are okay too, (haven’t heard from the grandparents, but I assume that means their house is still standing 😅), and I’m very thankful we avoided both tornadoes and hail, especially since our car is too big for our garage. 😅

@freed_and_redeemed

Love those scenes you posted!

Please pray for my family. We are under a severe thunderstorm alert, and my grandparents are under a tornado warning, and are currently in their basement.

@princesachronicle22

Ok, well I’m definitely no expert on this, but I will try to help.

I think he should probably be someone from outside the city, because that would then make her curious and maybe ask him things about what it’s like outside. Also, I think it would be important that he either doesn’t know or doesn’t care that Nikari  can ma…[Read more]

@trailblazer

That was so sweet! I love sibling relationships. And I tell one of my brothers he needs to take a shower all the time. 😂

@freed_and_redeemed

Yeah, ofc, to everything you said 😂

I don’t personally relate to Riker’s abuse, or Leon’s anger against God, but I do understand them.

I second Koshka’s point! That’s how I would summarize my opinion.

@freed_and_redeemed

I honestly don’t think I can answer that, lol.

For me, the two have very similarly structured POVs and voices – which is totally a stylistic thing since they are supposed to parallel each other. But that makes it harder for me to choose XD

The main difference is their internal struggles. I also can’t say I enjoy one con…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh, interesting question…

Well my kneejerk reaction is Riker because I feel so bad for him but honestly it’s got to be Leon.

Here’s a couple reasons why:

Leon feels realistic. He’s lost his spouse, been in the concentration camp, and now has to start over. It makes sense he might become a alcoholic.

Leon’s character arc…[Read more]

@magicalstories0611

Thanks! I’m glad that helped!