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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j THANK YOUU!!! That makes me so happyyy!!! Yes! I’m working on it now!!
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Katherine replied to the topic Hey! I am new, and love fantasy fiction, in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
@lucy Hi, Lucy!!! 🙂 Welcome to the Kingdom!!!!! I love fantasy fiction too!!! Have you read anything by Jennifer A. Nielsen? I saw that you like Chuck Black. My sister, @issawriter7 , likes Chuck Black’s books. What books have you read by him? It’s nice to meet you!!!!! 🙂
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Yay!! Take your time though <3
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Awww thank youuu!!! That literally makes me sooo happyy. Honestly, I don’t mind sharing more chapters, I just don’t want to fill the critique forum with a whole novel loll. If you want though, I could just share it to my home page? Idk, I just don’t want people to open up the novel critique section and see nothing but my book XD
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
……… I think this was the best chapter so far…….. SOOO goooood, but really sad!! And I adore the description and suspense. You also used all 5 senses, which brought the chapter to a whole other level. The mystery, intrigue, beauty… I’m sooo ready for the next chapter!! 💛💛💛 (is that going to be the last one? that’…[Read more]
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Katherine replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Hi!!! 🙂 I saw you had tagged me for your story, so I came over here. Then I saw where you had posted the link to the first chapter. All this to say that I just read Ch. 1 and it was awesome awesome AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 Literally, there are not enough words to describe how amazing it was!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Thank you!! I’m trying to make myself write a haiku a day, but I always end up forgetting, so I’m going to try doing this for ten days and see if it helps lol.
That makes me really happy to hear you say that!! I’ve loved writing it so far!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Yay!!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Where do you find motivation? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Thank you so much! 🙂
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Btw, how do y’all get those green format lines on your posts? When I posted my lines, they got kinda messy:)
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Those are AWESOME lines!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hey! I am new, and love fantasy fiction, in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hi Lucy! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m Abigail, wonderful to meet you:)
You live on a farm too? *high five* and *second high five for owning a temperamental pony XD *. Well, she’s pretty good actually, but whenever I want to ride one way, she decides another way is better. That and she is apparently fond of ducking under trees with very low…[Read more] -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hello Gigi! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
*High hives* that’s awesome that you starting your first novel:) I’m Abigail by the way, it’s great to meet you. Your WIP sounds so cool (I am a number one fan of Peter Pan retellings! Have you ever read The Starcatchers Trilogy?)
What is your number one favorite setting to write in? (I ask almost…[Read more] -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hey! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hello Karilyn! It looks like I’m a little late in welcoming you, but welcome to Kingdom Pen! 😀
That’s super cool that you like horses (my all-time favorite animal:) Which is your favorite breed? Coat color? (personally, my two favorite breeds are akhal-teke and Friesian). And a Bernese Mountain Dog and a Border collie?! Those…[Read more] -
Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-vbhn_QpzMJ_xlGO1Sb6epYzGJIB0HY55BwPVctj3Dk/edit?usp=drivesdk
@anyone-who-wants-to @nova21 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j
After this I’m planning on putting up one more chapter. Thank you to everyone who stuck with me on this!! I’m so grateful to y’all!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j I will!! It’s up right now, and I’m about to add the next one as well <3
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Thank y’all so much, @nova21 @devastate-lasting!! If y’all ever need the favor returned, just let me know <3
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ella replied to the topic I can’t figure out some cool names for my character! in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
to reply to your question on another topic, I might publish my book, I haven’t really thought about, lol!! probably, if it’s good enough. 🙂 Oh, and #1 is called Lioness (for now) and #2 is As Dark As Mist & Shadow.Â
Thanks, that means a lot!! ❤
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ella replied to the topic I can’t figure out some cool names for my character! in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
If it helps you, go for it!!! I think it’s a cool idea, maybe she can do both? Or if not, than mind reading’s pretty awesome by itself!! 😄
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