Aranel

@acancello

Oh my goodness! I can’t believe I forgot your tag, haha! This is funny XD

@allison @grcr @thearcaneaxiom

Thanks guys!!! (:

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes! I’m so happy! It FINALLY got published!!

@whalekeeper

Look, I never wanted to make you feel like you were less capable of handling criticism than the rest of us. My points about God and self-publishing were more directed towards everyone on the thread, but even so, I got hung up on the details and misunderstood you. That was my fault, not yours, and I apologize ❤️

I’m sorry I made you f…

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@acancello

Ummmmm……that’s like one of my nightmares…like my biggest fear is evil scientists experimenting on me!!!! (I know, I read too much lol)

Maybe you could tie into the machine factor with your title? Idk. I’m also pretty bad at coming up with names XD

@esther-c

It’s totally fine! I understand, life gets busy! 🙂 No rush!

@esther-c

In case you haven’t seen the RP yet…I RP’d Liv’s response to Fynn’s awkward question, lol

@acancello

So…what exactly is C.H.I.M.E.? Like why are they taking people? (I understand if you can’t tell me…but one, I really have wanted to know ever since you told me about your book, and two…it might help me help you with the title!)

@esther-c

I think you’re trying to say that if God’s will is for you to write and publish this story, then sometimes you have to self-publish because traditional publishers won’t accept it… is that what you were getting at? Correct me if I’m wrong. XD I see what you’re saying though. This is probably where prayer is really important (I mean, it al…

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Actually @rae  RP’d last…so it still is Freedom’s turn.

@jonas

I think it’s Freedom’s turn?

@kyronthearcanin

Hey, that’s amazing that you’re coming back to KP!

I don’t think we’ve really met…but I’m Sara (if you hadn’t already deduced that by my profile name…XD)!

I write mostly fantasy, but a little sci-fi and contemporary and basically whatever lol

I’m excited to get to know you on here!

@mineralizedwritings

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@esther-c

Liv 

She pursed her lips. What an awkward question!

“Well…” she bit her lip. “What exactly do you want to know?”

@ellie-wingfeather

I’ve only ever finished two long stories.
One was about four kids who go to another world…It can be found in the topic “what’s the cringiest thing you’ve ever written”.

And one was about a broken family who learns to love each other. I’ve never posted ANY of this.

I have a huge binder full of stories I’ve started but never…[Read more]

@trillianewingfeather

Heyy! I’m Sara, though most people around here call me…well, they call me Sara. XD

Anyways, I’m a chocolate consuming, emotionally unstable, sleep deprived, algebra loving, public school attending freshman!

Here are some random questions:

Do you ever talk to yourself?

Have you ever subconsciously narrated parts of your…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @esther-c @trailblazer

Okay…I think I’m just not good at saying what I mean. Let me try again, haha!

But Esther has a good point of view, that publishers are also looking for well-written material to a degree, because readers like good writing, and therefore good writing will sell. I’m not saying all readers have quality taste, but…

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@esther-c

 So ummm…. There’s a reason they reject you… it’s because your writing’s not good enough (for the most part). So yeahhh… And if you’re going to be a good writer, you have to learn how to deal with rejection. If you can’t, then… I’m sorry. XD Anyway, that’s just what I was thinking during the whole video and I wanted to rant about i…

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@esther-c

Livia

“I had people I hung out with, but they weren’t really my friends. I could never really be close with them, because we had to hide our secret from the government,” her eyes wandered for a moment to Lukas and Callie dancing across the room. She tore her eyes from Lukas and back to Fynn. “So I know how you feel.”

@trailblazer

Oh wow!!! This is a really cool idea!!

I’m not really sure how you want your story to go…but I would really recommend developing your characters before any plotting! Figure out their character arcs and internal conflicts. (Abbie Emmons on YouTube really helped me learn why internal conflicts matter! But if you do watch her…[Read more]