Annika C.

@daisy-torres

Ooo, I LOVE this!!! ❤  It was funny in the beginning and really intense at the end, which I love!  And I like Tessa’s character, and of course, the antique roadshow guy.  Overall, it was really well written and I can’t wait to read the next chapter!! (which might be awhile because I’m pretty busy today, so….)  Thanks for sha…[Read more]

@daisy-torres Ah usually they’re from songs that I’m currently listening to, but the signature doesn’t allow me enough space to credit it. The one I currently have is from a song called “So ist es immer” by Hiroyuki Sawano! I really encourage you to check it out; it’s a beautiful song!

@abigail-m Thank you!

Ah, here is the next duo of the Jehayi, Jacob Aster and his partner, Legend, one of the Vyrn (one of the very very few magical species I actually created, actually)

@gracie-j @writerlexi1216 Ah thanks!

@daisy-torres Left some comments! Awesome job!

@scripter-of-kingdoms DUDE THAT LOOKS AWESOME! That looks really good!

@scripter-of-kingdoms I’d doodle anime stuff on my own, but in art class I’d draw stuff like this…

(Weird crop to get my real name out)  Sometimes I still doodle anime eyes but that’s about it.

@scripter-of-kingdoms I could say the same for my writing! XD If I didn’t do writing so much I would still draw…but I had to quit some years back when I started high school…

@kathleenramm

Ooo, fun idea!!  Let’s see…  None of my characters in Lioness are very fun/nice/not-scarred (heh heh 😬), so I’d probably be someone from As Dark As Mist and Shadow.  I think I’d be Murin, because she’s an awesome spy with an awesome sidekick who lives in an awesome place with an awesome attitude.  And she rides horses all the ti…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms They look way better than the stick figures I used to draw XD

@kathleenramm Just one day? Lit.

Uhm.

Hoen Matthias. He’s warlord of the south, lives near the beach, can make anything that he’s seen before. Oh, to be ridiculously rich and to live a comfortable life…and also essentially no tragic backstory that I can think of just yet…it’d be kinda lonely though. At least I’ll have time to write.

@gracie-j Literally lol.

@scripter-of-kingdoms Dude how do your old drawings still look so good?

@godlyfantasy12

Congrats!!

Well, I’m still trying to balance two writing projects, as well as alpha-reading for Kayleigh.  My entire grade at my school got sent home because of a COVID case, so I have plenty of time on my hands now, lol!!  I’m not very far into either of my WIPs (about two chapters each), but since I have the time, I’ll p…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver I’ve finished reading over and giving comments! Thanks for sharing!

@writerlexi1216

I love this sooo much!!!  Great job, Lexi!!! 🎉  To answer your questions,

1)  I really like Caira’s character, especially her internal monologue!!

2)  Yes, I would!!!  I really love the idea of the “Prodigy” and Deek… I mean, what else is there to say?

3)  I think the pacing is great!!

Great job!!!!! 💛

@writerlexi1216

Hey Lexi!!  I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!!  Super excited!!!!  Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🎊🎉😉

@e-k-seaver

Hey Em!!  I loved your story!!  Sooo good!!  I don’t really have many critiques, just watch out for some repetitive words.  And maybe give Celeste a stronger goal/personality trait?  I felt like I was reading from Melia’s POV a lot of the time (which wasn’t necessarily a bad thing 😉) cause Celeste isn’t a bold character.  I say this…[Read more]