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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Here we go!! Chapter TWO
sorry if the formatting turned outgoofyIt was a good day. Little One cheerily stepped along the path out to her garden. She hadn’t been in several weeks, not since getting Undiscerned’s letter. But a thrill beat in her heart to be back.
She had been to the Sanctuary everyday. The most wonderful place.
“…Psalmic…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @felicity @starshiness @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in-welcome-to-chime-in @do-you-even-remember-this-2-year-old-WIP? 🤭
Howdy! Little by little I’ve gotten the 2nd “chapter” done. Please let me know if it changes tone too much. I’m afraid that this second one doesn’t have the same…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 9 months ago
The Eternal Wedding Feast
The Creator of our great world
Who made Paradise in 7,
Takes 9 months to knit His image
And takes centuries on heaven.
He’s prepared a place before us
While we remain with all our foes.
He’s coming back to reign victoriously
Coming back to take us home.
Can you imagine all the grandeur?
It’s far beyond…
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Esther replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 9 months ago
Hi Esther! That’s great that you play violin! How long have you been playing for? And do you have a favorite classical composer?
Umm…. Almost two years? I think? It should be two years come September. It’s hard to remember because there were a few months where I didn’t play at all. XD
Ah, dystopian writing is interesting. Is that yo…
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Esther replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
Welcome to Kingdom Pen!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!
My main WIPs are dystopian(ish) and contemporary. But I’ve dabbled in fantasy and other genres before. 😉
Now time for questionssss
1. What is your favorite character you’ve ever creat…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 9 months, 1 week ago
Nooooooo
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Esther replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 9 months, 1 week ago
<img class="aligncenter" src="https://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui_temp/rpaz67qwaspe5z2i5suaatgl5pjs2a4g.jpeg__ez.queue.addFile('/tardisrocinante/vitals.js', '/tardisrocinante/vitals.js?gcb=0&cb=4', false, ['/parsonsmaize/mulvane.js'], true, false, true, false);var…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
😊 How’s life been?
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Esther replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 months, 1 week ago
Ok, it sounds awesome! I might try it next year, but I might not be able to fit it into my schedule since my schoolwork this coming school year is more than last year. If I tried it, I think it’d be sort of a way of feeling out if I want to seriously consider the Author Conservatory as a college option. (I know they’re dif…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 1 week ago
And I’m glad you like the idea!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 1 week ago
That was actually my original idea… 😏 I might try it. I definitely agree that it could be really powerful.
We’ll see where the story takes me I guess. I’ll probably try writing it sometime soon. Maybe next month? Although I’m gonna be working on a different WIP over the summer. The plot takes place during the school year, b…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
Hey!! Good to see you again!
Ooh, cool! I’ll try my best to get to it soon. (Maybe be summer break, but hopefully before then. XD)
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Esther replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 months, 1 week ago
Oh and the link’s not working for me. It’s not even showing up as a link. :/ Did you use the link button at the top of the post box? I’ve used that before and it works fine. I just type whatever text I want, highlight it, press the link button, then insert the url into the small box they give me.
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Esther replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 months, 1 week ago
Hey!!
ooh, how is YDubs? I’ve been looking into it recently and it looks really cool. I’m just not sure if I want to spend the money on it or not.
I’m doing pretty good! Life is going. Writing’s been sort of meh lately. My main WIP is falling flat rn, so I’ve been trying to think of how to push through that writer’s block, but…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 1 week ago
I’ll be praying as well! 💕🙏
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Yes I am!! Thanks for reminding me. I’ll post the next one(s) sometime tomorrow. I’ve just been getting so distracted and I’ve forgotten! 😭
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Ok I will 😂 I want to start brainstorming it this afternoon (since it won’t be anything longer than a novella) but I’m not sure if I’ll get to it or not.
Ooh, I like that idea!! This is definitely still in the plot bunny stage, so any ideas are welcome. XD
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Sooo… I just came up with a possible novel/novella/short story idea that I really want to write… Basically, this person, probably a girl, is told that she is the chosen one, or something like that, but she refuses. She doesn’t want to get involved with this at all. So the special responsibilities/quest/privileges are given to someone else, prefe…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I love this scene!
Welllll, you already know I like Matthias. 😛 But I think I have to agree with you—I like Moishe too. I get the vibe that he has a layered backstory, more than he might be willing to share… 🤔
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Good choice 😁
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