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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
Thank you! My verse is just starting to feel right, if that makes any sense.
The voices are saying that. Would removing the punctuation clear that up, or do I need to do something else?
(YES, the author appreciates it very much!)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
Welcome! 😉
*Note* I was wondering the same thing as @anatra23. Is it a dialogue?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
The author of this poem, who at the moment is doing the dishes and thus can’t access her phone, has requested I tag a few people to look over this. (I think that’s what she said.)
@anatra23 @power @abigail-m @anybody-else @yes-you-reading-this-right-now 😉
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
I knowww! Yeah, it’s definitely make it or break it for me too. Uhhh Marvel. XD you love it and you hate it.
Ugh, I know they’re all so good! I love Cap and Spiderman. Especially spiderman XD.
Ohhh my gosh Black Widow!!! I love her movie, it was even better than I expected it to be! Gahhh they’re all so good! I love black panther too…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Nice to meet you, @anatra23
Yeah, WFS is so good. I’m nowhere near Andrew Peterson’s level of writing expertise. I have listened to some of his music, and that’s pretty good. I like his books better, though.
I like classical music too. Some songs are really fun to play. As I said above, I self-taught myself for one year when I was first starting…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, for sure 🙂
I used to write a ton of
cringe worthyshort stories, but I think I got kinda tired of writing them XD. I’ve just been working on my main project, although I would like to get back into writing short stories cuz they’re good practice. But yeah. *shrugs*What about you?
Ikr?! Yess pasta is…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Very cool!! I like writing the endings too, it’s satisfying, although I have trouble not drawing it out too much or making it too happy XD
Oh cool! She’s actually the one who pointed me to KP and encouraged me to join the forum. That would be so cool! Yeah, she’s inspiring!
That’s so true (about…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
That’s awesome! I’m pretty new to writing seriously, so I’ve never actually completed a novel yet.
I think my fave part about the writing process is character arcs. I love finding my charries unique voices and being able to write them in their different journeys. What about you?
I love spider-man! Are you excited…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh that sounds SOO cool! I’d totally read that! That’s cool that you write with your sister too! I have 4 siblings, but none of them like to write XD. Although, my little brother is one of my main beta readers, which has been interesting lol.
That’s awesome! I haven’t written many short stories (mostly cuz when I do, they end up…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic What's a story that you worked on for while but completely scrapped later on? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 11 months ago
Ah, yeah. I think we’ve all have written stories all too similar to the traits you described.
Out of all the things lacking in House of Mages, what area do you think you’ve improved the most in writing since then?
@anatra23
Haha, that’s hilarious. It kinda reminds me of the first story I wrote which was literally just the story of…[Read more] -
Issabelle Perry replied to the topic When is it okay to defy the government? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 12 months ago
YESS!!! I had actually watched two before number one, but it’s been a while since I’ve seen it, so I DEFINITELY need to do a re-watch too.
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic When is it okay to defy the government? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years ago
Of course!!! 🙂
THEY ARE!!!!! I’ve seen one and two. Oooo that’s a hard one. I don’t know if I can pick one. I really LOVED number one because Shane Harper was in it, but then again, I just adored the plotline of number two following the teacher. I don’t think I can pick. XD I’m just gonna say both of them. Which one’s your favorite?
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic When is it okay to defy the government? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years ago
That was a REALLY great example you gave, Anatra!!! (And I LOOOVE God’s Not Dead!!!!)
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Faith Q. started the topic When is it okay to defy the government? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years ago
Okay, y’all, I’ve got a dilemma on my hands.
To give you a bit of background information, my main character (Emeric Dertok) has recently come back into society after eight years of living the life of a hermit. He’s working for the King (Jornan), who charged him with the task of tracking down spies trying to sabotage the government. But as enters…[Read more]
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin replied to the topic Anime Nerd/Chat in the forum Film 3 years ago
I don’t like anime. It’s too nerdy for me. I’m not a cringe weeb. I’ve moved on to greater things.
That said, I only like Attack on Titan.
And maybe Full Metal Alchemist.
And To Your Eternity.
And Erased.
And Death Note.
And The Promised Neverland.
And Your Lie In April.
And Hunter X Hunter.
But other than that, there definitely isn’t any…[Read more]
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin replied to the topic Help. I Just Don't Get the Appeal of the Wingfeather Saga in the forum Fantasy 3 years ago
@anne-of-lothlorien @christi-eaton @gretald @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h @anatra23 @joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @elfwing @elanor @e-k-seaver @trahia-the-minstrel @william-starkey @abigail-m @whoever-likes-the-trashfeather-saga
Okay. I’m going back to the gym now. This was way too much nerdy book stuff for one day.
IT’S LEG DAY BABY LEZZ GOOOO!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Anime Nerd/Chat in the forum Film 3 years ago
@kathleenramm It’s been a while since I’ve read it, so honestly I don’t remember. Probably Phil, haha. You?
@anatra23 A friend introduced me to Rightstuf Anime that has super cheap manga, only thing is after buying from it you’ll be tempted to buy a ton, because people usually buy in bulk from there.
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Kathleen replied to the topic Anime Nerd/Chat in the forum Film 3 years ago
Yeah, once I heard about the massacre of season 2, I just had to pretend that season one is the only one that exists. It’s so tragic about what they did with the second season. Haven’t watched it, just heard about it. So it’s a good thing that season one is good enough to stand alone. Seriously, you should watch it if you…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Anime Nerd/Chat in the forum Film 3 years ago
I know, right?! It’s the best. And it has one of the most satisfying endings I’ve ever seen.❤️ Did you know, that because it’s kinda in the anime style anyway, it’s the only anime-style western program the Japanese acknowledge as an anime? Or I’ve heard something like that, anyway.😁
We get our mangas off Book Depository. It’s in E…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Anime Nerd/Chat in the forum Film 3 years ago
Yo, I’m so glad this topic exists. Anime/ Manga is so fun to discuss.
I’ve only just started watching Anime last year, and my favorite was Erased for awhile, but just last month I watched Promised Neverland and took it it’s place as favorite. The characters are my favorite out of all the anime I watched and the writing was spectacular.…[Read more]
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