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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Really? That’s awesome! Like ice cream with berry cobbler awesome!
What was the skit about, if I may ask? My siblings and I are doing a time traveling Children’s Church program about different kids in the bible. (We call it Purpose Kids.) I’m the mad scientist that created the Time and Space Quantum Warping Device, and we’ve…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Does this sound remotly interesting to anyone? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 years, 1 month ago
I don’t think I’ve ever read dystopian, but that sounds interesting.
What do you mean “doesn’t end in a successful rebellion?” (If it wouldn’t spoil it)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Does this sound remotly interesting to anyone? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 years, 1 month ago
I think it’s most interesting! I’ve never read dystopian before, (I know, strange, right? 😉 ) But your idea definitely holds quite the potential.
I love the idea of someone surrounded by lies finding truth in God’s Word, and although I’m not sure what you mean by the rebellion being unsuccessful, it’s very intriguing. Okay,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Why don’t you go ahead? Not to sound weird and stalking, but Freedomwriter isn’t on.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Viktor
Did the Dorwinian women fight? Viktor frowned and glanced over at Alyona. She shook her head.
“I don’t know.” Zlatan interjected. “Zey could be some villians of zis place.”
They could be anybody.
“I’ve never heard of any lady guards.” Viktor shrugged.
A door creaked open not ten feet away from them. Viktor s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
And I accidentally tagged myself… brilliant.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka
Mikkel
Weapon ready, blood hot, heart solid stone. A small weathered door stood at the end of this passage. Mikkel pressed himself to the wall as close to the door as he dared. He felt Riker and Ezra beside him.
Voices…young voices.
“Are there any female guards that you know of?” a girl. “If not…p…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 4 years, 1 month ago
Wowsers.
What type of medic? (If you know that yet)
I am seriously thrilled with the prospect of the medical side of war. I have started research for Cecelia, my other MC for Seas of Fury, and it’s nuts how much this field has grown in the last wars.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Greetings! (Since I don’t think we’ve met, I’m called Elishavet around here, and I write mostly realistic medieval fantasy but also poetry, children’s church material (coauthored with siblings), and the random fanfic. I love to read a whole spectrum, however, and have been known to spend far too long with my nose in…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello world! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
Ah, black tea almost begs for cream.
It certainly is interesting, although for me it’s a lot easier than historical fiction, the genre I started out in.
Flash fiction is basically extra-short short stories, often only a few paragraphs long, like character sketches. It’s quite amusing, besides being good for writing…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Viktor
More soldiers?
They were like a lost sheep surrounded by hunting jackals.
Or walls of flames.
And dogs.
Viktor shook his head.
He didn’t know what they meant by Nyx hearing anything, but apparently the tiny fox was incredibly intelligent.
“Do you know what they were singing?” Viktor rubbed the back of his…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
This is getting awesome!
The Brothers
“Singing.” Vulkasin grinned.
Nyx came back, placing his tiny self between Lyn and the building.
He turned to the Mynclaises. “Is it usual for Ocran’s gaurds to sing?”
Alyona shook her head.
He turned to the fox. “Could you tell the type of song?”
Ara…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Ah, yes. That would make sense.
Poor Nyx! XD
So… Would he and Alyona get stuck together? Or Alyona and Lynn?
Awwwww. ❤️ That would be an honor. 😉
Oh, the dear little fuzz ball.
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello world! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m Koshka, and I write historical-nonmagical-fantasy. And poetry, flash fiction, ect.
Interesting! I don’t read dystopian myself as I haven’t been able to find one that didn’t make me ill.
Now for questions:
Do you like hot tea? If so do you prefer it with cream?
What are your favorite…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Absolutely! I’d actually love to separate the siblings again, since I’m playing with it being a huge plot point in my book.
So… Maybe Alyona gets caught?
And Viktor is with the group still?
And they get to see another part of him. XD
This would also add pressure to find Ocran before…..?
But I don’t know. What do y’all think?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
That sounds good to me!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
By the way, the Vulk brothers speak with a rough Russian accent.
The brothers
“Let’s review what we know.”
Vulkasin’s groan was cut short by a look. His brother was in high order all right. More plans.
“Ze Lord of zis place ran into Lyn, and isn’t too happy about it. Ve need to be careful…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Sounds good!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I think we should meet up with the others. If the numbers are too much at the moment, Alyona and Viktor can get separated from the group and rejoin before the Ocran Battle.
But I do want them all to meet @freedomwriter76 ‘s and @koshka ‘s characters.
This is fantabulous!
By the way, the far building Viktor keeps referring to…[Read more]
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