@acancello
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Allison posted a new activity comment 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Its been different, Ive never moved before so it was a bit rough over the first few months, but one we joined a home school group and met a few people it got a little better. We have a few friends close by which also made it a little easier (Close by as in 30 minutes, buts thats close here) XD
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Allison posted a new activity comment 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Good job!!🥳 🎆
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Allison posted a new activity comment 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Jean. She was captured and later hospitalized. And…. well…. the book took a shocking turn and now Vikii does die 🙁 And Jean. I feel so bad!! Hugos life will never be the same.
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ALLISON!!!! Poor Hugo!!! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME??? TO HIM?!?!?
okay now I have to read your book. PLEASSE post some of it so I can read it XD-
Heres when I introduce him…
The grinding grew closer and soon enough, Hugo Walton pulled to a stop beside us, flipped his board up, and skillfully caught it.
“You’re not driving?” Sam asked.
“License suspension.” Hugo shrugged, not looking one bit ashamed “No big deal.”
Sam nodded, “At least you’ll get it back, right?”
Hugo shrugged again,…[Read more]-
And when you kind of get a glimpse of his personality in the beginning
Windy Pines was an average town in the thick of an ancient pine forest. The population was just under five thousand so the town itself was smaller and more spread out. Windy Pines High was more in the urban section, whereas our houses were in a neighborhood deeper into the…[Read more]
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Allison and
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Allison posted an update 10 months, 3 weeks ago
How late did everyone stay up? I made it to 2:15 ish
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I made it to 12:30 XD
ALSO…I looked at your pinterest board (Hugo’s to be exact)…AND WHO GETS IN THE HOSPITAL?!?!?-
Jean. She was captured and later hospitalized. And…. well…. the book took a shocking turn and now Vikii does die 🙁 And Jean. I feel so bad!! Hugos life will never be the same.
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ALLISON!!!! Poor Hugo!!! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME??? TO HIM?!?!?
okay now I have to read your book. PLEASSE post some of it so I can read it XD-
Heres when I introduce him…
The grinding grew closer and soon enough, Hugo Walton pulled to a stop beside us, flipped his board up, and skillfully caught it.
“You’re not driving?” Sam asked.
“License suspension.” Hugo shrugged, not looking one bit ashamed “No big deal.”
Sam nodded, “At least you’ll get it back, right?”
Hugo shrugged again,…[Read more]-
And when you kind of get a glimpse of his personality in the beginning
Windy Pines was an average town in the thick of an ancient pine forest. The population was just under five thousand so the town itself was smaller and more spread out. Windy Pines High was more in the urban section, whereas our houses were in a neighborhood deeper into the…[Read more]
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Oh! And this one, when you see how he can still be fun. If you want I can post more later, these are all in the beginning.
Hugo sat down next to me on the floor and we all began to talk about the week.
“You want to hear something exciting?” Sam hooted after Jean told him her command, “Ask Hugo!”
“Ok, what are you hiding?” She poked, fiddling wi…[Read more] -
Last one (You dont have to read them all, sorry I posted so many XD)
This one is told by the main character, Shauna. The blankets at the foot of my bed shifted and Sam pulled the diary out, “Keeping secrets?” He teased, flipping the pages open and leaning away from me.
I lunged for it, not worried about the so-called ‘secrets’ but more of the bit…[Read more] -
Don’t apologize! You could post a hundred snippets and I would read them all!
I love it!! Especially the last two… <333For some reason I thought Jean was Hugo's OLDER sister!! I don't know where I got that lol!
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Really??? Wow, thank you!
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Here one of the super sad scenes I wrote before Vikii…. Vikii dies 😭
Vikii sighed, her breath shaky, “I think I am dying.”
His face fell, I could see his world crumbling inside him. “V-vikii.. I… I…”
“Hugo stop. We’re making it too dramatic.”
“You’re making it too dramatic,” He shot back, with a laugh in the back of his thr…[Read more]-
And this one is in the hospital. And shows a bit about Hugos past.
“We’ve got to get in now!” Sam whispered, “Should we break the window?”
“With what?” I shot back, near tears.
He opened his mouth and shut it, looking crestfallen.
“Electronic touchscreen deadbolt…” Hugo muttered, turning the sparkling silver handle back and forth. He pressed…[Read more]
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I mean…duh! You’re writing is AMAZING and if you don’t publish it I will be SUPER MAD and hunt you down and hold your charries hostage until you do!!!
Wait so are Shauna and Paxton dating? I never knew if that was the case or not.
And Hugo+Vikki….<333 IT'S SO SAD!-
Lol!! Dont worry, I’m publishing hopefully this year!
Paxton and Shauna are sorta dating. They met in Hampton and Shauna had an instant crush on him, he didnt seem to care for her at all.
Over the course of the story, you get to see how Paxton is actually a lot more calm and gentle only around her.
Near the end, Paxton (SPOILER) reveals that he…[Read more] -
ALLISON! how are you so good at coming up with plot twists?!?! I could never!
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@savannah_grace2009
Really????😅-
@acancello
YES!-
😂 💗 Its not just me, everyone on here is great at it!
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My plot twists always feel so…cliche!!
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I dont think so! I feel like they are better than mine 🙂
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Really? XD
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@savannah_grace2009
Yep!
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Allison posted a new activity comment 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Lol! I started a few years ago with my Dad. When he had back problems he stopped eating it and things like chips and other junk foods. It helped him a lot and I decided that I would do the same to improve my overall health because I’m super active. I felt better after I stopped. But thats just my personal opinion, its…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I know it’s not the best habit…but when I’m sad or depressed I eat ice cream and stuff like that…we have tons of ice cream and cookies and Grandma brought popcorn cake and khuchen (a German dessert) and I just made brownies…because we already don’t have enough sugar….lol
Yeah, I used to do that too. Though after I stopped eatin…[Read more]
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Allison posted a new activity comment 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Thats great that your sister came home!
Yeah… school. We start tomorrow, but thats great cause I think I start drivers ed soon!
I’m doing good, this year seems like it will be better though. Im not saying 2023 was a bad year, it was just really different with moving for the first time and all. And on top of that, my grandma who is still in CA…[Read more]-
I start school wednesday 🙄
oh, that’s great that you are starting driver ed soon!
I forgot you moved! How has it been in the new place? Making some new friends?
I’m glad your grandmom is doing better now.
Yeah, editing and rerwitting can actually be super fun once you get into the groove of it.-
Its been different, Ive never moved before so it was a bit rough over the first few months, but one we joined a home school group and met a few people it got a little better. We have a few friends close by which also made it a little easier (Close by as in 30 minutes, buts thats close here) XD
And yep! Editing is getting more fun once you get into…[Read more] -
I’m glad you’ve met some people! I used to home school, it’s great you’ve found a group to join. Good luck in your new place! <3
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Allison replied to the topic Hello, Humans! in the forum Start HERE 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Hi! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I am homeschooled and in 10th grade. I love dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, gaming, talking and a lot more 😁! I am writing a dystopian and post-apocalyptic thriller novel now. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! Alright, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not a…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic New Year’s resolutions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@anyone
If anyones interested, I eat really healthy and have a whole bunch of recipes on my blog (Most of them are, I did make a few for my brother)
acancello.blogspot.com
And if you are interested, I can post more 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m so sorry about that, thats rough. Ill be praying <3
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Allison replied to the topic New Year’s resolutions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Happy New year!! Those are great goals!
Some of my resolutions are….
- Learn to drive
- Publish my novel
- Learn to think before I speak (I do that most of the time, but I usually have the perfect comeback…)
Thats all I can think of now, Ill post more later!
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Allison and
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Allison replied to the topic I’m new here! in the forum Start HERE 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Nico is good to! And Talia, but for some reason I like Luke a lot XD. I’ve just read the Percy Jackson, I never could get into the Heros of Olympus. Oh! I also like Zoe.
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Allison posted a new activity comment 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Hi! How are you doing? How was your Christmas?
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Hello! It was actually pretty good, my sister is home from school. My school starts back on the third, unfortunately. I was just doing some writing, trying to figure out a transition point in my book as the pace kicks up. How about you? Also, how is writing going?
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Thats great that your sister came home!
Yeah… school. We start tomorrow, but thats great cause I think I start drivers ed soon!
I’m doing good, this year seems like it will be better though. Im not saying 2023 was a bad year, it was just really different with moving for the first time and all. And on top of that, my grandma who is still in CA…[Read more]-
I start school wednesday 🙄
oh, that’s great that you are starting driver ed soon!
I forgot you moved! How has it been in the new place? Making some new friends?
I’m glad your grandmom is doing better now.
Yeah, editing and rerwitting can actually be super fun once you get into the groove of it.-
Its been different, Ive never moved before so it was a bit rough over the first few months, but one we joined a home school group and met a few people it got a little better. We have a few friends close by which also made it a little easier (Close by as in 30 minutes, buts thats close here) XD
And yep! Editing is getting more fun once you get into…[Read more] -
I’m glad you’ve met some people! I used to home school, it’s great you’ve found a group to join. Good luck in your new place! <3
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 4 weeks ago
I get $25 to spend right? Ill get close 😀
Ok, I pick….. Marcurious and Ottoline, Sef, Lilitu and Cassian and Natalia!
These are fun, I might make one for my characters.
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Allison posted an update 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Just when you think you are done, remember to CLOSE THE DOOR!
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@acancello
Heyyy, I was wondering if you could post the link to your pinterest account again? Pinterest kind of glitched for me so now I can’t see who I’m following and I really like seeing your boards! (sorry this is super random XD) I couldn’t find where you already posted the link sooo sorry about that haha-
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Tysm!!! 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Ill pray for you! Hope your feeling better <3
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Thanks!! 😆😄