whaley

@whalekeeper

I simply mean what I described. 👍 I’m not sure how it compares with the rest of your feedback discussions… I have very little context. XD

Okay. I did just post a rewritten version above. So you can also read that and see what you think.

Thanks for the link by the way! I can’t guarantee I’ll read it soon, but now I have it on my rada…

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@whalekeeper

my apologies, if you make the earlier chapters available then I will read them 😋

Everything I’ve posted so far should be available in that last link I posted (I just did the link for the chapter a little differently when I was asking for ideas to end it). If you click on Contents in the top left corner, you should get a list of all…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Well, to be honest, I don’t know a lot of pree-teens who like to play dress-up and repeat whatever their sister tells them to say.

The funniest thing is, my most reluctant actor is actually perusing film now that he’s an adult!

@theducktator  @whalekeeper

I don’t know who asked the original question. lol.

I have done several screenwrites. I used to film with my brothers and friends, and we even got one on disk. I still have the stories around her somewhere. Sadly, my biggest two never got filmed because that was the year all my guy actors were done dressing up and…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Aw, Barnes is trying to be the comforting grandmother to everyone!

@theshadow @whaley

Tenz&Reid

Tenz peeked out from where he hid his face, studying the pictures. Slowly, he unfolded himself, tenderly reaching out to grasp the packet. He studied the pictures much longer this time, looking up every once in a while with his blue…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

 

I’ve written two scripts for plays, but not films…not yet…unless you count the really silly one I wrote years ago that never made it on film…

I’ve discovered for myself that writing scripts is SUPER fun!

@whalekeeper

Has anyone tried writing a screenplay? Or wants to?

I’ve written a script for a small adaptation of Taming of the Shrew, does that count?

@whalekeeper

Thanks! We probably will watch the BBC version. It’s Challenge 2 homework for me as well.

@esther-c

@rae

@loopylin

@ellette-giselle

@trailblazer

@savannah_grace2009

@stephie

@grcr

@jonas

@hybridlore

@highscribeofaetherium

@freed_and_redeemed

@mineralizedwritings

@whalekeeper

 

I don’t know if any of you can, but I thought I’d just ask a bunch of people if they wanted to join the Animal RP. I know some are already…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I know!!! It’s so sad!

I was freaking out when I wasn’t able to get on and the home page was dying.

 

@keilah-h

My dad contacted them through their Facebook page before I was able to get on. He should try that.

@whalekeeper

I just decided to read that chapter completely out of order. I’ve only read up to chapter 5 besides this, I think, and that was a while ago. XD I can give some feedback about this chapter, as someone who read it without any context whatsoever. 

You know that reading books like this is the number one cause of cancer in domesticated fr…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper @loopylin @theshadow  @arcticanimals and @theducktator

The unfortunate argument/misunderstanding between Ellette and I has inspired me to write part TWO of my very very very short story, to make it a very very short story instead! (And a shout out to keilah, she…[Read more]

@rae @whalekeeper

Emeline

“So! Now that we’ve eaten and rested. I think it’s high time we find the mysterious inhabitants of this castle. Why don’t we go exploring?” Barnes suggested after consoling Hugo.

“Finally!” Rowen exclaimed, getting to his feet.

“Thank you for the meal, Ms. Barnes. Let’s get moving, Tenz just needs a few minutes. I ap…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h  and @rae

ATTENTION EVERYONE! I believe all of you have gone and gotten a potato! So now it is time to summon the NEXT group! 🤩🥳😁😂

(If you have not gotten a potato, you may go after this group is done 😁)

The group is!,

@whalekeeper @loopylin @theshadow and @arcticanimals

you…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

yeah, true.

and haha, unlike some of the other authors, my characters abandoning their half-baked resemblances of morals isn’t gonna be surprising to me, especially if they go against each other at any point.

 

I let my charries on a loose leash ok??? lol

@esther-c @keilah-h @whalekeeper

Making our own website would be cool.

I have no memory of joining kp and making my account. Did we have to send in an application email or something? What was it like?

@whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium

I know, it is really sad 🥺

Yes, Whaley, I do remember that! It lasted for like a week or something 💀

You know what’d be really cool is if we created an offshoot of Kingdom Pen since it’s not super active in articles and stuff. Like all of us in the forum who are interested start a website similar to KP and…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Could you tag me when you post the next sections? I don’t have a character in this but I still enjoyed reading it. 😊