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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Please tag me whenever you need to, so I can return the favor <3
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Exactly. Even if you don’t like his personality, at least you have to give him kudos for turning a new leaf. Right? *Twirls skirts indignantly*
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Erich is such a…
I don’t know what to call him, other than a rogue XD
Oh my… Did pirates raid your hometown? Did they steal all your gold and force you to bake raisin-less cookies for them? …Or were you the pirate?
I’m going to assume there was some sort of pirate which prevented you from returning. There had t…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I hope things get better for you – and I’m super sorry you missed another competition. You don’t deserve it. Praying <3
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I love Thorin so much 🙂
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
*Comes back days later* XD
Heeeyyy thank you guys so much for the input 🙂
The only thing I could say about it is that I never have felt personally connected to Seb. He’s the only one I’ve read a lot of. He is super cute and quirky, but I never have related to him. That being said, I haven’t read any emotional scene…
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
XD Isn’t it so funny when you realize your own habits? And that’s not a bad one either, because you obviously write them really well.
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ofc <3
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @calyhuge @keilah-h @whoeverwantstogivemewhatfor
I was wondering if you guys might want to help me out 😛
I don’t get very many critiques. Not because I’m perfect, just because that kind of stuff hasn’t been dished out to me lately. I would love to have some more to work with, because altho…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I LOVE how Lesli just embarrasses Tauren with her genuineness XD She can be bold when she wants to. Such a mood, on both sides.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Of course <3 You should not try to pretend those feelings aren’t there. It will never be fixed all at once. There’s a time to be positive, and a time to recognize those feelings – a healthy dose of both at once.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I’m sorry if I sound too happy. Things are not automatically fixed for you. But now there’s something new that helps put a few puzzle pieces together… and I hope that comforts you a little <3 I’m sorry things are still messy, but God’s still there.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
That’s amazing!! I mean, sad, but in a good way now, right? ❤❤❤
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Enid replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I’ve just chosen not to put “good” magic in my story, because that’s just what I believe and what I’ve been taught (and because I’m not sure if I’m mature enough to do otherwise).
That’s a perfectly valid reason, and I recognize trying to convince you of anything is just not what this conversation is for – which is fine 😊
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
There’s just this dumb stereotype that all intps love/are really good at science. I hated science in high school. I do like math though.
I wondered about that. I guess there are stereotypes associated with every type.
Like mbti types? I have a lot of enfps and entps, but I haven’t actually taken the test for a lot of my cha…
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Marcel
Instead of summoning his cloud, Marcel valued variety and ran with them on his own two legs.
That got old fast.
By the time they stopped, in a temporarily abandoned classroom, Marcel was puffing and wheezing, cheeks as red as roses, like a guinea pig with asthma.
“Do you kids -” he choked out, ” have a-a habit…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I want my allegories to be recognizeable for Christians, and its okay if others see it too, but it’s not going to follow the Bible exactly, and hidden to some extent.
Yeah, that works 😄
But I think that “powers” and special abilities are okay, as long as it doesn’t have spells or involve witches, or basically anything that th…
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Enid replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
*Picks up skirts and runs after you* Wait wait wait I just joined!! New characters are totally welcome!
Oh no it’s okay, Seb is more than a little selfish sometimes. It was perfectly sensible for Clement to call out 😅
Yeah I was hoping to back off so Freedom could chip in.
…Please don’t tell me you h…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Heeeyy I agree with you, our stories are so hard to explain XD
I found your allegories very easy to follow… I don’t know if that was your intention, but that’s how it read XD If I showed your prologue to a non-Christian friend, they would recognize it as the Creation and Fall story. I have no idea how they would react,…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@tharcaneaxiom
About the Golden Compass – the movie is not good at all in adapting the book. It tried to follow the plot too tightly, without capturing the essence of the story. But I digress.
The book takes an anti-Christian position, but its points are actually extremely valid when it comes to looking back at what the “church” has been, how…[Read more]
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