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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom : I’m sorry I made that look so confusing!
thanks @jonas for helping me!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@cloakedmystery
really???? i’m gonna try it…
‘The process I described would also give you green lines.’
i hope it works lol
*me casually making a fool out of myself on KP but oh well its ok 😂*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
I should have done that but I saw other KP users quoting people with “green lines”, I know I sound like a little kid, haha but idk how else to explain it! So I clicked ‘quote’ and you can see what happened 🤦♀️
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hybridlore replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
@s.tastet
Hi!! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
I’m hybridlore, or Hybrid, an (also!) homeschooled, teenage girl and Christian! Nice to meet you!
I play the violin, love to read, and mostly write in science fiction or fantasy worlds, though my current WIP leans more toward the dystopian side.What are your favorite books/series besides Harry…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
um apparently i did something wrong, hope this still makes sense? sorry, this was my first time quoting someone…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
okay i’m gonna attempt to quote, something I’ve never done before so bear with me if this doesn’t make sense at all:
Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Those are good, I cant choose either. Probably 2 and 4 and 7. But then I also like 1, 3, 5 , 6 also 🙂
Wait you like to work out???🤯 I looove working out🤣 My brother thinks I’m crazy, but I think its fun, 😀
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Allison replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Oooh! I loooove Harry Potter! Which book is your favorite? I absolutely can not skateboard at all but can roller skate.🤣 I’m not a big fan of fishing, my brother loves it so he makes me do it with him, but I also love to go shooting with my dad, we have a big property and a shooting range in the woods! 😀 Nice to meet you!
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Allison replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Welcome! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m also homeschooled and I’m in 10th grade. I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
@acancello
Awh, thanks so much for reaching out in the Chat Chat. That means so much. Life is good and God is loads better!
I didn’t hop on KP much in July because on the 3rd I found out that God opened up a brand new opportunity! And I had just three weeks to prepare a 45 minute talk! It was my first time speaking to women and teens at a…[Read more] -
Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hi! I haven’t seen/talked with you in a while, how are you doing?💗
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Allison replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
I don’t know how I missed this, but want to say that I love this poem! The lines…
“And what dreams do I
Hold close in my heart?
Is the sailing of my boat a start?”
and
“But I am not a bird nor a wife, and my dreams
Are shining, a full moon tonight:
The darker my night, the
Brighter my dreams,”
Those are perfect, beautiful…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you!
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Ooooohhh!! This got interesting fast! XD
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you guys! I’m glad you like it!😂
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hybridlore replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years, 1 month ago
@acancello
XXD that’s hilarious! I wouldn’t worry about it, it seems realistic enough. -
Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @hybridlore @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76
Here is a short description on how my main characters parents met, do you like it? Does it seem real?
Susanna (Anna) and Blake Smith are the parents to all the Smith children. They met at the grocery store in High school when Blake, who was stocking the shelves at the time, was high up…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Rose in Wonderland: A Novel Idea I’ve Been Developing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
@crocheter12 I love this idea! I would totally read this!
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That is so amazing that you had the opportunity to speak aloud, it must have been so exciting! I’m so glad you are well, and I missed talking with you on here 💗
I’m doing good, been pretty busy with school and working around our property. We have 27 pets, if you count all of our chickens! I have the opportunity to volunteer at a library, which I…[Read more]
@acancello
It kinda funny how it’s similar: when I was first driving, my parents were juggling lessons and unpacking from our move.
Ooh, how’s the library going? What do you get to do? This new semester God has brought so many new people into my life, so I’m slowly trying to make new friends. (And it’s cool how He has answered my prayer for…[Read more]
@janellebelovedpig
Hi! So, I actually did not volunteer at the library (I’m still going back and forth with the idea) But have actually began to consider getting a real job next year when I’m 16. Yikes! Lol! The problem is I have no idea what I want to do/become.
The good thing is, I joined a Christian homeschool group and there is sooo many…[Read more]