WalkByFaith

@grcr

I tried a half-hour ago and it still doesn’t work :(((

@grcr

I can’t add a pfp either ever since i joined!!

@light-warrior-pen

Thank you so much💗 That made my day!

Oh, and since you have the characters and plot figured out (How did I not see that??🤣) Just make sure Its to to elaborate and complicated and you add lots of details and description!

@esther-c

How fun! I have written a ton of plays when I lived in a neighborhood with a lot of kids even one about the board game “Clue.” I still write some now to preform when I see them all again, my longest being around 17 pages. I can try to help you out, 🙂 I think some good tips would to have everyone have around equal lines, if they want.…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks! 😀

@trailblazer @light-warrior-pen @hybridlore @freedomwriter76

Here it is!

Before I could think any further, I collapsed on a bed, and fell asleep. I had a dream, one that filled me with pure happiness. It was the story of how my parents met. The story was told many times and each time, mom could not ever stop laughing and dad still felt a little…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Good job! That’s so exciting!!

@smiley

I’m not sure maybe anything between 3 and 4? When I finish writing I will definitely fix it up though 🙂

@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c

Thank you!

@thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper

Okay thanks Whaley! And yes number 1 is Rishona.

@thearcaneaxiom

Right, she represents Eve, but is she literally Eve? Is Earth here the same Earth we know, and therefore the story of Adam and Eve is really just a translation of Rishona’s story?

Well I think that Rishona is literally Eve in my story, and Earth is the same earth we know but I think what I was going for is that there’s no Adam a…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

“What is magick?” She tested out the foreign world, mulling it over in her mind.

“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. Rishona bristled at his mocking tone. Her stomach clenched, and she ground her teeth as her jaw hardened defiantly. What was this emotion, she wondered. She had never felt this way before. N…

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@trailblazer

I will! (Once I write it, lol!) I have the perfect idea in my mind so I will work on that once I finish this chapter in my WIP. 😀

@highscribeofaetherium

I looooooovvveeee your new pfp!!!!!💗 💗 😍 👍 💗

@light-warrior-pen

Thank you! I also played it in my mind as I was writing and was very proud of how real/funny it sounded!😂

And the most sweetest twins in the world! They are just soooooooo adorable! 💗 😍

@esther-c @whalekeeper@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @hybridlore

Now since pics are working, here are some of my new boards!

This is Vikii, my sweet girl! I still cant stop feeling bad about all she will be going through in my WIP😭

@s-tastet
Oohh, I know, AD30 is really good!! I don’t know many people who have read it, though. Have you read AD33 yet or no?
Ooh, awesome! Yeah, me either really, but I don’t mind a little!
Oh goldens are amazing!! They’re just so beautiful and have such a good temperament. I’m not sure what breed I’d be.

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue.  And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped me realize things about myself I never have before!

And about the paragraph you wrote….

“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. The dismissive comment trigge…

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@overcomer

I think the second one,

“But I am neither bird nor wife and my dreams

Are shining, a full moon tonight:”

Has a better flow to it  🙂