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Ruth replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Twitch, BEWARE of falling projectiles coming through the roof!
Alpha Grath
Crashing through roofs was not ideal. Breaking through floors and catching yourself on a beam was not ideal either, plus it hurt.
“Achlys, where am I?”
“I can’t find you, Alpha.”
Joy, off the radar. Alpha pulled himself up and turned to sit on the beam.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
No, sorry, I won’t be. I don’t do those type of things yet, though I’m planning on finding a writing mentor this summer…plus a thousand other things.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I guess we’re ignoring my last rp then…that’s fine, it was kinda weak anyways.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Hey, that’s amazing that you’re coming back to KP!
I don’t think we’ve really met…but I’m Sara (if you hadn’t already deduced that by my profile name…XD)!
I write mostly fantasy, but a little sci-fi and contemporary and basically whatever lol
I’m excited to get to know you on here!
Oooh I loved that…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Alpha Elqin Grath
Alpha is the son of my Antag of basically everything in my Wond that I write! Somehow, someway, everything that wants to destroy my Realn circles back to him. Alpha hates him to the point of murderous intentions.
I won’t go into his backstory, since you’ll figure it out soon enough.
He has pitch black hair, pallid abab skin.…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
LivÂ
She pursed her lips. What an awkward question!
“Well…” she bit her lip. “What exactly do you want to know?”
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Ruth replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Thank you 🙂
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Ruth replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
True. I’d enter him under Alpha Grath though, since in the other rp I worry if I’m confusing ppl.
Yeah, I think he’d do best.
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Ruth replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Notice how everyone seems to have a similar style when they first start writing?
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Ruth replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m still debating adding someone…I know who I would add, just I’m…idk,
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Nahim
He probably should have stopped to at least take a deep breath to clear his head. Why he had given a terror bomb to someone who knew nothing about them. He looked over at Nora, she was farther away from Fennin than Nahim. Good, if it goes off by accident, it’ll hit me first. I need to keep it that way.Â
Nahim unholstered his gungedal, t…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic How many stories/books have you written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
First Drafts? Novel drafts, about one and a half. Short story drafts, one.
Revision drafts? One. And one in progress.
Finished? None
Reworking? One short story.
Ideas? Hundreds.
Novels I plan to publish before I’m thirty? Six.
Genres? Fantasy/sci-fi. I used to write historical fic when I was around eleven. Had a series planned.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
To rp or not rp, that is the question, that is the key. Even rhymes still 🙂
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Should I rp?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic How many stories/books have you written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ve only ever finished two long stories.
One was about four kids who go to another world…It can be found in the topic “what’s the cringiest thing you’ve ever written”.And one was about a broken family who learns to love each other. I’ve never posted ANY of this.
I have a huge binder full of stories I’ve started but never…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c Hey…I was wondering if you’ve looked at my writing yet? (I’m not trying to nag you or anything XD just wondering if you still wanted to do it?) I know you’re probably busy…but just wondering (:
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Heyy! I’m Sara, though most people around here call me…well, they call me Sara. XD
Anyways, I’m a chocolate consuming, emotionally unstable, sleep deprived, algebra loving, public school attending freshman!
Here are some random questions:
Do you ever talk to yourself?
Have you ever subconsciously narrated parts of your…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @esther-c @trailblazer
Okay…I think I’m just not good at saying what I mean. Let me try again, haha!
But Esther has a good point of view, that publishers are also looking for well-written material to a degree, because readers like good writing, and therefore good writing will sell. I’m not saying all readers have quality taste, but…
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Ruth replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
One book that I found interesting is The Moon is a Harsh Mistress by Robert A. Heinlein. It’s sci-fi, but it is about a revolution on Luna against Terra, and the parallels are brilliant! I actually have a clearer picture of what it must have been like in some ways in the revolutionary war. Beware, Heinlein is not a Christian. T…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
 So ummm…. There’s a reason they reject you… it’s because your writing’s not good enough (for the most part). So yeahhh… And if you’re going to be a good writer, you have to learn how to deal with rejection. If you can’t, then… I’m sorry. XD Anyway, that’s just what I was thinking during the whole video and I wanted to rant about i…
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I don’t mind being nagged. XD But yeah, I’ll start reading it this week and try to give you some feedback as soon as I can. 😊
Hey! So I just read the first two chapters of your book. Love it already!! I have some feedback to give, but I was wondering what kind you want. Like, do you want to know things about the characters, plot, prose, setting, etc.? Are there specific questions you want answered? I don’t want to give you feedback that you aren’t looking for. 😉
It really doesn’t matter, haha! Just your overall thoughts! 🙂
Ok, cool 😉