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@s-tastet
Oohh, I know, AD30 is really good!! I don’t know many people who have read it, though. Have you read AD33 yet or no?
Ooh, awesome! Yeah, me either really, but I don’t mind a little!
Oh goldens are amazing!! They’re just so beautiful and have such a good temperament. I’m not sure what breed I’d be.

@highscribeofaetherium

heh heh… I don’t think I can retrieve it… 😅

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue.  And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped me realize things about myself I never have before!

And about the paragraph you wrote….

“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. The dismissive comment trigge…

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@highscribeofaetherium

oh… I see… 😒

@thearcaneaxiom : I’m sorry I made that look so confusing!

thanks @jonas for helping me!

@jonas sorry got your tag wrong

how did i forget that??? sorry i’m tired

IT WORKED!!!

@cloakedmystery

really???? i’m gonna try it…

‘The process I described would also give you green lines.’

i hope it works lol

*me casually making a fool out of myself on KP but oh well its ok 😂*

@jonas

I should have done that but I saw other KP users quoting people with “green lines”,  I know I sound like a little kid, haha but idk how else to explain it! So I clicked ‘quote’ and you can see what happened 🤦‍♀️

@s.tastet

Hi!! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
I’m hybridlore, or Hybrid, an (also!) homeschooled, teenage girl and Christian! Nice to meet you!
I play the violin, love to read, and mostly write in science fiction or fantasy worlds, though my current WIP leans more toward the dystopian side.

What are your favorite books/series besides Harry…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

um apparently i did something wrong, hope this still makes sense? sorry, this was my first time quoting someone…

@thearcaneaxiom

okay i’m gonna attempt to quote, something I’ve never done before so bear with me if this doesn’t make sense at all:

Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam…[Read more]

@s-tastet

Lol

Same. I love third person.

Creating the characters first is always fun….

🙃

@s-tastet

Hi there! I’m Julia, or GRCR! I’m a fiction writer and artist (and a journalist for my fictional newspaper lol)

Welcome to KP! 😁

As is the tradition, here are some “ask the newbie” questions:

If you have any characters, how many do you have?

Which perspective do you enjoy most: first person (I walked), second person (You walked)…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

Oh boy… what is gonna happen… 😃

Once again, I have one question: Is Willow in the house with Kydon in the first paragraph?

@kydonandwillow

Ooooohhh!! This got interesting fast! XD

@acancello
XXD that’s hilarious! I wouldn’t worry about it, it seems realistic enough.

@crocheter12 I love this idea! I would totally read this!