@trailblazer
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Psssttttt
*motions you over*
Do you wanna read the first chapter of a fanfic I’ve been playing around with for a while now??
It’s the Dystopian one I’ve discussed quite a few times, and since you’re the one most active and since I know how much you like fanfics, would you like to read it?? 👀
I’m gonna post it, but you don’t…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh dear! Well, if you want to, you can send me your email, and I can share the Google Docs file with you. That’s totally up to you, though.
Sorry that the link isn’t working! I hope it’s not like this for everyone.
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh, no! Sorry, just forget what I posted above. That’s not what worked!! I don’t know why the new link doesn’t open with you just clicking it. However, this is how I got it to work. I highlighted it by lightly clicking it, not so it would open, but just so it would highlight the entire line by itself. Then, I copied it (using…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh, I clicked the new link and it says there’s an error, but if you click and hold with two fingers, the option should appear “Open Link in New Tab.” If you click that, it should open. Of course, I’m using a mac. I think it’s a right-click on a PC to get the options panel.
Let me know if this works!
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
file:///Users/barrydurmaz/Downloads/Into%20the%20Mind%20of%20Liberty/IntotheMindofLiberty.html
Okay, I’ve posted it here again but made it clickable. Does this work?
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Are you using an iPhone or a computer? On my computer, it works fine. If it’s not working on your computer, I’ll have to find a different way to post it.
Hey, Esther, is it working for you?
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh my goodness… Say Love by JoJo is such a perfect song for my character Belle (to her husband Walt)…
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Well, a lot is going on concerning family relations. Not ones in my immediate family, but with our other relatives. My grandmother is moving out here soon, so a lot is going to change. There are going to be a lot of opportunities to deny myself and serve and love others. There’s also still tension concerning some other matters in the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
😊 How’s life been?
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Yes! I’m glad to be here, again!
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Esther replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 2 years, 3 months ago
Ok, it sounds awesome! I might try it next year, but I might not be able to fit it into my schedule since my schoolwork this coming school year is more than last year. If I tried it, I think it’d be sort of a way of feeling out if I want to seriously consider the Author Conservatory as a college option. (I know they’re dif…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
And I’m glad you like the idea!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
That was actually my original idea… 😏 I might try it. I definitely agree that it could be really powerful.
We’ll see where the story takes me I guess. I’ll probably try writing it sometime soon. Maybe next month? Although I’m gonna be working on a different WIP over the summer. The plot takes place during the school year, b…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@esther-c I love the story story/novella idea…a lot!
But I am going to maybe go against the norm here😂
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I think it would be more powerful if she wasn’t redeemed.
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Hear me out.
If she was a fairly good person in the beginning but allowed jealousy to consume her, though she can be redeemed if you want,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Hey!! Good to see you again!
Ooh, cool! I’ll try my best to get to it soon. (Maybe be summer break, but hopefully before then. XD)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 3 months ago
Three hundred characters huh? That’s amazing!! And I love the newspaper idea that’s so creative!
Thanks 😁
My favorite color is probably a nice light blue or sea foam green.
Nice!
If I were going to write a new book now, I would start with characters because I like to get a feel first who I’m working with.
Oh, that’s a good reaso…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks a lot! And no pressure! It’s not like you have to read the entire thing! Whatever you wish to read.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Hey! I’ll try to read it and give you any feedback I may have as soon as I can!! 😄
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 3 months ago
Hi!! Greetings from Burne!!
I’m -GRCR-! I’m a fiction fantasy-ish writer, an avid artist, a journalist for my fictional newspaper, and a character lover/creator that has over three hundred. I enjoy listening to music and imagining my characters singing the songs.
Welcome to KP! 😁
Here are some questions for you!!
What’s your…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
@esther
Sorry, everyone!
Thank you, Trailblazer, for helping me!
Here is the link to read my book:
file:///Users/barrydurmaz/Downloads/Into%20the%20Mind%20of%20Liberty/IntotheMindofLiberty.html
Make sure you copy the entire line.
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