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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
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Arien replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Great topic!
@felicity @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth @theloonyone
This is all so great you guys! I like the cat ballerinas too. 🙂
So unfortunately, I do not have the first book I started to write . . . I was 7 or 8 and I was getting bored during my sister’s cello lesson so I started writing The Mystery of the Queen’s…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Ooh, this is a really good start! I understood the setting, appearance, etc.
Thank you!
My one question is why the Dickensons were so cruel to them. Is it just because they are a burden they didn’t want?
I think part of it is that the Dickinsons are mean people to start with, but yeah, they didn’t want to have to care for two babies (…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 4 months ago
I agree, Boromir was originally a good guy, though he did get corrupted by the Ring. But he repents and dies a very noble death, in true tragic hero fashion. I haven’t seen the movies, but from what I understand they did do more on him, which is good, it just seems like they completely change Faramir’s character, and that makes me…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I also would like to share my first story that I ever wrote down on my own. It was entitled “Mr. Strawberry.” (I might have been 4 or 5 when I wrote it?) Here goes:
Mr. Strawberry was a strawberry. Now he is a He.
That’s all.
I couldn’t think of how to express that Mr. Strawberry had turned into a man, so I had to do with “now he is…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! It’s honestly fun *evil writer laugh*
How are they going to make up? I’m sure you know though 😁😂
Ehh–actually I don’t. Quite. Yet.
I also saw that you said romance is only a subplot. What is the first genre?
Hmm, I don’t know exactly what the genre is. Fantasy, but anything more specific than that I don’t know. B…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@theloonyone @everyone else
Hey there! I’m a little late to this but . . . I have something to share. (lol I have a lot. I saved everything from when I was little)
I think I was about 7 when I wrote this story. My dad lovingly typed it for me and I sent it to all my relatives for Christmas. (my grandpa still mentions it–how good it was.…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
😲 Barret wearing cats? I need that in my life!!
Sadly I have hardly any old writing left 😥 I got rid of stuff cuz I was trying to move out of a childhood phase I thought was embarrassing.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Thanks! And Yeah 15 I find is kinda the perfect age for a lot of characters. Not too young to be helpless, but still needs people a bit more than somebody older.
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
“Julius? Julius, hey, this is my sister, Everly.” Kaine says, motioning to the girl beside him.
“Hello, Everly. Nice to me…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Really! That’s so the opposite of me. I’ve actually written without a plot before. Like a have this writing of a girl sitting on her balcony feeling sad because of moving or something, and it’s just a description of being sad (That was back when we wanted to move)
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @freedomwriter76
If I forgot anyone, I’m so sorry, I’m just so bad at remembering tags🤦🏻♀️😬😂😅.Wow. I am so behind😅😂. Y’all, thanks for not forgetting me! I’ve been doing school, and then I started a new Christmas love story/and maybe mystery? book (Which is so good, by the way. It’s called The Noel…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Lol if either of us have something to add to the art talk we can just tag each other in the art sharing forum 😂 I’m sure we are getting on somebody nerves here 🤣
Yeah better to be cold then breathing in the fumes XD it’s not as bad as a sharpie but it builds up in the air as you work on a piece, you start to feel like you’re in a…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Ok…. I found some old art 😂
Sadly I have discarded the really old stuff, I’m curious what it was. I shredded my diary in like 4th grade, really disapionted I wanna know what was in there 😭😭😭 Like I wanna read it again sooo bad. Just imagine the pure cringe of younger me writing about a crush like I want to read it!!!
Lol anyways…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
italicizing emojis?! 😮
This is very new to me!
🤩🤩🤩
Hey you can bold them too!
😋😋
Its not a big difference, here are the normal ones.
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You only started writing this year and you’re already this good!? 😲😲😍
Thanks! I’d wanted to write for awhile before, I simply had no plot. I did like hearing my sister tell me about her story t…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I’d love to hear what you think of them if you get them! I like them alot, but they are very inky, so beware of the bleeding XD
You might already know this but they smell really strong. Like open a window they are pretty bad 😂 I have to stop sometimes if I feel like I’m getting a headache, I used to have a chemical sensitivity and…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
“Baby’s are cowards, I’m being brave doing this!”
LOLOl
Bunnyland lol.
Now I wish I had more old writing. I only started writing this year so I don’t have any 😭
Oh but I did do this thing where my sister and I would make up my little pony oc’s, and I think we were trying to always come up with cooler names for them then eachoth…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
He’s 15! And thanks! <3
I can’t tell you how much I appreciate you warning me 😁 I was concerned about joining the castle because well… it is…
rather violent?
XD
I know somebody from story embers, where the character castle idea originated and it’s mostly humorous (ok there was a poor traumatized boi just like any rp) but…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Ooh, I love your drawing! They drew them really well, and how did you get the color to look so good!?
Thanks! I use a ohuhu 48 set of alcohol brush markers and a warm grey artist loft for shading. The ohuhu skin tones are too dark, so I have a couple random ones from micheals I use for that and then use the ohuhu for shading. I don’t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
the boys and Cammie are still in the room with the trap door, but Kaine ran off. The girls were dropped into a dark room with a tunnel leading off somewhere.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Lol I wasn’t kidding! 😂 I figured they can choose the severity though, I don’t want to injure somebody charrie even if they deserve it.
@theloonyone @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @anyoneelse
Lol so I finally got around to a drawing of Everly and Kaine!
I changed there last name to Fairchild since, but now you guys know what…[Read more]
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