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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
and mostly about orphans (of course)
The orphan thing is real. I did it too. A lot 😂🤣
but it is on paper…and y’all, I didn’t even know how to do paragraphs when I wrote this lol!! The “chapters” are short one page paragraphs and…there might be 10? 12? Idk…but yea!
Ugh, that’s what I did too. 😩 It would all be one big paragraph. I…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 12 months ago
I agree, Boromir was originally a good guy, though he did get corrupted by the Ring. But he repents and dies a very noble death, in true tragic hero fashion.
YES! Yes, this exactly. And I love his relationships with Aragorn, Faramir, and Merry and Pippin
I haven’t seen the movies
They are wonderful!! 😁
it just seems like they completely c…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 12 months ago
Ehh–actually I don’t. Quite. Yet.
Understandable 😂😂
Hmm, I don’t know exactly what the genre is. Fantasy, but anything more specific than that I don’t know. But basically the plot is
Okay, cool! I love fantasy, probably my favorite genre. And naw, it doesn’t sound silly.
And a disclaimer: though I do write about “magic,…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
(lol I have a lot. I saved everything from when I was little)
Haha, same! And even though they all sat and did nothing for a while, I’m glad I can bring them out into the open now. Beware, they’re a little dusty.
I think I was about 7 when I wrote this story. My dad lovingly typed it for me and I sent it to all my relatives for Ch…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Haha, I like it! And as @mineralizedwritings said, it’s pretty good for old writing. Just those couple of spots of over-description. 😁😂
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@mineralizedwritings
Here’s some, but there are far more from where it comes fromI realized that not all of them have a baret, but they all have a very curly mustache
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
I’ve written without a plot before, I just find myself better at the coming up with the story part than the actually writing it part. Like I can imagine it the words are just bad. I’ve definitely gotten a lot better, though. Practice!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Elissa (I didn’t actually think about how old she was exactly 🤣 but she’s around the same age as Milo, so 26)
Elissa woke in a massive, dusty bed. Very dusty. She sat up with a sneeze and looked around the room. The bed she was laying in had dark red blankets, sitting on a dark…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Sadly I have discarded the really old stuff, I’m curious what it was. I shredded my diary in like 4th grade, really disapionted I wanna know what was in there 😭😭😭 Like I wanna read it again sooo bad. Just imagine the pure cringe of younger me writing about a crush like I want to read it!!!
Haha, yeah, it’s always sad when t…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
😀😁😂🤣😃😄😄😆😅😉😎😎😎
This is so much fun
🤣🤣🤣😛😛😛Thanks! I’d wanted to write for awhile before, I simply had no plot. I did like hearing my sister tell me about her story though and I’d give little ideas here and there. I could always do descriptive writing, but never had a plot.
I’m kinda the opposite. I have a lot of ideas in my…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Yeah practicing on drawings you don’t like is a good idea 🤣
Lol, yeah 😁😏😏
Like open a window they are pretty bad 😂
Ohho, this is not the time of year for that 🤣😂 I’ll just put on a sweater and let my family suffer
The blending marker I’ve used is a prismacolor marker, and although it doesn’t have the same effect as a blendi…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76
Hey, could I meet up with Kaine and Julius? Elissa is just wandering the halls right now.
She has Eastern-Asian features and is most definitely an extrovert. She’s also from the same WIP as Milo and Cammie.
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Bunnyland lol.
Yes. Bunnyland. 😂 (I just realized that you can italicize emojis. the things I’m going to do with this…)
🤣😛😣 🤣😛😣
I only started writing this year so I don’t have any 😭
You only started writing this year and you’re already this good!? 😲😲😍
Oh yes. Perhaps I could share old art here 🤣
Oh yessy yes. *cue mad sci…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
I use a ohuhu 48 set of alcohol brush markers and a warm grey artist loft for shading. The ohuhu skin tones are too dark, so I have a couple random ones from micheals I use for that and then use the ohuhu for shading.
Ooh, I’ll have to add those to my Christmas list! Or I suppose I could just buy them myself, but…
(idk w…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
ok, thanks!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Ooh, I love your drawing! They drew them really well, and how did you get the color to look so good!?
(One of the autocorrect suggestions for Fairchild is Brainchild –umm what??)
Well, yeah, they’re your brainchildren. It sounds weird, but it’s true.
Do any of you know where the gang of b…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@felicity @mineralizedwritings
I did it. I found the original. It’s even four chapters (we’re going to ignore the fact that each chapter is about a paragraph long). (I’m also keeping my atrocious formatting) Enjoy.
Chapter 1
“Race you to the boat” called Kate as she ran across the dock. Her brother Liam still stood on shore as he called back to…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Ooh, this is a really good start! I understood the setting, appearance, etc. My one question is why the Dickensons were so cruel to them. Is it just because they are a burden they didn’t want? And this definitely isn’t something that has to be answered in the first chapter, I just know it’s important that all characters have motives. I’m…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne posted a new activity comment 2 years ago
Oh, that’s so cool! I love the meaning, too! 😊
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Oh no!! 🤣 (That must have been adorable tho…)
Haha, yeah! I don’t know why, but kids are just weirdly morbid. I know I haven’t completely grown out of it, nor have others, cause my friend and I realized that we both like having terrible things happen to characters. I don’t know what’s up.
Oh yeah, sure! It’s always easier laughing at som…
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