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Esther replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
My favorite character to write is probably one of the main characters in my current WIP, whose name is Obsidian Gray. He’s pretty easy to write, but hasn’t been a point-of-view character yet, so I don’t know for sure.
Ok awesome!!
What’s your current WIP about? If you’re posting things about it on here, would you tag me?
So, it’s a tr…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ok, so life has been really busy, but I should be able to write another RP tomorrow. 🙃
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, that makes sense! That’s kind of what I already have been trying to do, but you put it in a way that makes more sense, lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 11 months ago
Anybody else love fall? I love the colors, the temperature and best of all, fall=pumpkin spice lattes, pumpkin pie blizzards from Dairy Queen, pumpkin pie, apple pie, chai tea lattes…..there’s a lot of things!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I get that. My parents also made the decision to not kiss until their wedding day, and it’s amazing how they were able to follow through, especially in today’s society. I think Albert’s part is fine, because he is a lot like the boys in my school, how he teases Libbie and stuff like that. So I think you should leave it in…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
I grew up a really sensitive kid though.
Yeah, same! I used to think scenes from veggietales were scary! XXXXD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
You’re good! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I thought the same thing as hybridlore, lol. Otherwise, great!
That whole thing about Albert wanting to kiss Libbie and Bert actually kissing Clara made me cringe (which is a good thing!) because how awkward would that be???? AHHHH! But it’s good! I like it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic AIO (adventures in odyssey) RP!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
OH MY GOSH I LOVE ADVENTURES IN ODYSSEY!!!!
but i probably won’t join….because I would rather just rant about Odyssey in general. So should I make a post thread where we can just “argue” about conspiracy theories, the way things “should have gone” (we’d be kind while arguing, of course, haha) or just talk about all things Odyssey?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
It’s totally fine! Don’t feel bad! (Now I feel bad for making you feel bad! lol)
It does kind of sound like her though, so I see where you’re coming from.
Yeah, I really don’t want the romance to be the main reason for the abuse, because that just sounds “cruel” to put my characters so much for the sake of an unhealthy…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Great advice!
Ottoline from “Character Party” isn’t the one I was asking the question for, though, it’s an entirely different character. (If you check out my WIP page on KP, you’ll see it.)
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh my word, thank you so much!!! That means a lot!! 🥰 I actually emailed in the story to him, but I haven’t gotten any reply yet. (Which doesn’t surprise me. He’s probably busy. 😉 ) But I actually got to meet him at a conference I went to at the beginning of September. I was able to get a picture with him too! It was pretty aweso…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
My favorite character to write… do you mean characters that I’ve created and am writing?
Yep! Any character of your own creation!
I love homeschooling because I have more time to invest my energy in doing things I like to do and learning about things I enjoy.
Yeah, awesome! I would agree. 😉
As for cake or ice cream, ice cream wou…
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings
Oh yeah, whoops. 😅
Ok, well, then I’ll reconsider adding her in. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic Paradise Lie recreated in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Alrighty! I’ll be sure to pop in!
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Esther replied to the topic The Paradise Lie in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
If this is the whole first chapter (which I’m assuming it is) my first critique would be to hint in some way at the actual plot. I felt like it was missing something, and maybe that was it. I’m not entirely sure. Because to me, unless this whole story revolves around Ben and his forgiving his father, I see no indication of the plot dev…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Actually, I don’t think those questions have been asked before. Congrats!
Sweet. 😎 *high-fives myself*
Who is your favorite character to write and why? Nahim Alfred Nayhelm, last of his family-clan. I know him as well as if he were my sibling (except whether he would like vanilla or chocolate ice cream, as far as I know, he’s never had it.…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
That’s a great idea! The problem is, on my google account I have, it’s my school account and the docs I make can’t be shared with anyone else that has a non school account. I will, however now post the link to my “reedsy” account, (it’s like google docs, but no one can edit or comment.
h ttps://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ Copy and paste…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]
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Yess, the leaves, the weather, the smells, and apple pie!
I had my first apple pie yesterday! My grandma and little brother picked all our apples from our trees, and I helped make the pie (i’m not a fan of baking, but I helped because I wanted to later help EAT the pie, lol).
Lol! Ooooohhh, fresh apple pie is probably amazing… I’ve made apple crisp with fresh apples before, but usually I just get it at the grocery store. But you normally have to wait until October/November to get it there, lol.
Apple crisp is amazing! I love it, my grandma usually makes it every fall.
I don’t think we’ve ever bought a pie from the store, haha! My grandma is the type that makes EVERYTHING homemade, especially deserts. Her bread/rolls are LEGENDARY, lol.
Ohhh, gotcha! That’s awesome! Yumm, lol. Ikr, it’s just so good… I’m kind of obsessed with that kind of stuff, lol. I made apple crisp for my 12th birthday instead of cake XD
@hybridlore
I wish I would have asked to have pumpkin pie for my birthday or smthn, but I didn’t 🙁
Aughh, there’s always next year XD
Plus, you’ll probably get some on Thanksgiving… maybe?