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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Ok, so on my WIP. It always feels kinda hard for me to know where to start, because it is a multiverse. So what would you like to hear about? Some lore, languages, cultures, races, the seven eras of my world, stories, characters the math, ect?
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Oooh those are some good ones. I kind of guessed the Isaiah one lol 😄
There is a group that decides what is and isn’t legal. I’ll get back to you later, because I have some schoolwork to get done lol. I agree that it is very optimistic, and I’m probably going to work on a better system, too.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
Thanks for all the great advice! 😄
For your first point, that makes a lot of sense, and I’ll look into it.
Second, yes, there are earth-like creatures in my world, but I think I’m going to add twists to some of them (not quite sure what that means yet lol). Rina, though she can’t remember the name, used to live in a town called…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Ahh, I have not!!! 😭😮😔 So sorry about that!!! Will/Ev were going to find a frozen dragon or something…right??? 😅
Naw, you’re good. 😊
Sure! Lol XD Whatever you want do. 😁
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else-I-missed
Is there any group for Destry, Fyn…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
Hello and welcome, @kyronthearcanin!!
(Somehow I missed it when @thearcaneaxiom tagged me. : )
Anywho…
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, homeschooled, amateur writer!!
My WIP is ya dystopian, but I have tons of ideas for stories in other genres!
Fantasy sounds really awesome!! I tried fantasy a whi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic No Boring Scenes?? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 2 months ago
I see what you mean. That’s a really good point.
For my situation specifically, I may have to change the chapter a bit. It is in my second draft and never existed in the first draft. In the first draft, they learn this information over time, but it’s unnatural. In the second draft, they learn a little bit at once, but it see…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
No problem! 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
Rina discovers her power when she heals a Falcor on the planet Aavian. She is only able to stop the pain at first, and thinks he might never fly again, but by morning he is magically healed. That’s when she kind of starts to realize it, anyway. She’s actually unable to heal herself for the most part, and if she does, it has to be…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
I will admit, I probably don’t have enough figured out for a kind of sample, though I will be continuing work on it. I’ll post a sample once I have enough words figured out lol.
When the book starts, the language is a fairly new thing, which is why it has been able to stay a secret. It would be rough to decrypt because the…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
For anyone who’s interested, here’s chapter 1 of my WIP, Healer. It’s sort of long lol
I’ll tag some people just in case you want to read it: @freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @artsy-dragon @mineralizedwritings
Sorry if I forgot to tag anyone who was interested! I’m fairly sure I got most of you 😅
Chapter 1
I can still…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
@princeschronicle22
Nice to meet you! And thanks about the profile, I actually made it with an AI lol.
Healer is all from Rina’s perspective. There are five races, basically based off animals, and they each have their own planet. Serpenree are based off snakes/lizards, Felisaro are based off cats, Lupinari off of wolves, Falcor off of birds, and…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
Thanks!
Turns out I’m back early, so I’ll go ahead and answer your questions!
1.I’m not sure on favorite dessert, but I’m chips over sweets anyday (yeah, I’m weird, I know)
2. Spanish because we’re getting a lot more Spanish-speaking people in our area, and Hebrew so I could study the Bible more easily.
3. Random fact? I play…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
Ooh that riddle made my head hurt lol. Also, I’m playing around with a secret language for one of my races.
Sorry about that! I’ve gotta go for now (youth event), but I promise to get back to you tomorrow morning! Sorry again!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
Nice to meet you! Love divine truth, have kind of an interesting relationship with math lol. It’s so cool you’re writing with your sister! I write sometimes with my friends, but just for fun.
Thanks about the art! Can’t say I’ve heard of StarFox, but it sounds like it would look like my drawing haha.
1. Worldbuilding…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom
Thanks for the tag!Hi, nice to meet you! =)
I really like your art style! The detail is cool.
I’m also homeschooled and a writerbecause that clearly isn’t obvious XD
Oh and I guess I’m supposed to tell you about myself as wellUh I’m also an artist, I write fantasy (my current WIP is a fantasy/mystery but my…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
Alright, sounds good! Is that to add friends or what? Sorry kinda new to this haha.
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Esther started the topic No Boring Scenes?? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @sarafini @keilah-h @loopylin @felicity @elishavet-pidyon @gwyndalf-the-wise @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper
Ok… So I’ve heard that you aren’t supposed to put in your book what you were bored writing.
I don’t think this is exactly true… For example, I just finished writing a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Cool! You can be vague if you want. I am curious, but for the sake spoilers, I can be patient.
Alright! 👍
I’m really bad at that, when I’m asked about something about my worldbuilding, even though it would be a spoiler, I just kinda dump it all out. I need to work on being more vague.
Lol XD
Yeah. My siblings don’t like it when…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Ok, yeah that makes sense. Thanks for clarifying! I would love to hear more, because you make it sound man made to a extent, but it’s also clearly a magical or beyond technological structure, so I want to understand the lore you got going now.
That’s a really good question… because I’m still figuring some things out. XD
I know wh…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Worldbuilding Topic Suggestion! in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 2 months ago
I’ve noticed that there are lots of writers on here who worldbuild. We’ve discussed worldbuilding things a lot, but it’s always been under “General Writing Discussions.” I think it would be helpful if we had a topic for worldbuilding. 🙂
Let’s see here… KP’s world builders…
@thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12
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