TheArcaneAxiom

@mcmuffin

Hi! Yay! Another gamer!! I loooove Halo (and portal, have you played portal?) Anyway,  I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I am homeschooled and in 10th grade. I love dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I am writing a dystopian and post-apocalyptic thriller novel now. I’m so glad…[Read more]

@rae

Ellis

Ellis scrambled to his feet and grabbed the green stone off of the ground as Nahim tried to restrain Zash.

Ellus hesitated, not wanting to leave Nahim to fight alone, but then turned and ran. He had to get the stone to Fennin.

Zash

Zash managed to get some of his knives under the armored warrior pinning him down. With a heave, the…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith

Hello! I’m Jonas. Nice to meet you!

I write fantasy, especially creating magic systems, and I am working on a shared fantasy universe with my sister, @highscribeofaetherium.

I’m bad at asking questions, so I’ll leave it to others 🙂

Ellis

As Ellis was running forward, the stone came flying towards him, knocked away by Kate.

He lunged for it as it flew by. His fingers grazed it, interrupting its flight, but failed to catch it. Ellis hit the ground and rolled towards where it landed.

Just then, something crashed into him. It was Zash again. How could he recover from a st…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22

This is my full dawnshards theory, if you’re interested. So, between Dawnshard (the book), Oathbringer, and Mistborn Secret History, I’m pretty sure I’ve figured out what three of the dawnshards are: Change, Unite, and Survive. (And I’ll note that other people came up with this before me, but there is a surpr…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

No problem! I did post a lot of stuff here!

The main thing is do you think there is anything particular overpowered in this magic system? I don’t think any of the individual powers are particularly OP, and nobody can have more than one, but by having people team up, there might be some OP effects that could be achieved.

@princesachronicle22

Yeah, the sleepless are interesting. That reminds me: I was surprised to see a sleepless in Edgedancer. That was one of the few things that surprised me.

I liked how he continued the trend of Lopen accidentally swearing his oaths after the action is over XD.

@jonas

Yeah those theories definitely make sense!

I agree on the fact that the Dawnshard was the most interesting aspect. I also thought it was interesting seeing how the Sleepless communicated, and more of what their goals are.

The rest was more simply entertaining in the Lopen-is-great sense

@princesachronicle22

I had mostly similar thoughts about Dawnshard. It was more enjoyable, than Edgedancer, for me, because the events weren’t things that I had already figured out based on later books. As I said before, I didn’t avoid spoilers for this book, so there was nothing shocking. The information about dawnshards is what interests me mos…[Read more]

@jonas

I’ve read them both, and enjoyed both, what were your other thoughts?

@hybridlore

Yeah it is, actually. 😂 I didn’t want to write about someone getting married so I chose adoption instead. XDD

Oh and for those of you wondering, Ami’s type 2.

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @anyone-else

Sooo… I was working on some “character-building” the past day or so, and I’ve fixed my MCs’ character arcs/internal conflicts to tie into the theme more and so I can write them better/more accurately. (With a l…[Read more]

@smiley

Ack! Sorry I’m late, but I finally found time to read this. M’kay…

So the one big thing that I noticed was a lot of telling and info-dumping. I could handle the information, but it’s not always enjoyable to read a bunch of backstory. Stuff like that should be sprinkled throughout. Besides that, there were a few places where things…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Of course! (:

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @anyone

Ok, so I have bad writing, but my worst writing I deleted years ago!!! 😭 There was three chapters of a book I wrote on my parents computer when I was like 7, I tried to start a few books when I was 9/10/11, I had an almost completed book around 11, but I still have a book I…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I think so! You can go ahead and RP first if you want. 🙃

@hybridlore

Aww it’s cute! I actually like it! For some reason it reminds me of “A Series of Unfortunate Events” books. Idk why XD

@highscribeofaetherium

I was laughing so hard!!! The plunger gun…ahhh that was great! hahaha!

Mr Mwahaha…that’s hilarious!!