Stepheroni and Cheese

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Winston

The demon boy took some time to absorb the sight. The sun warmed up his scales, and he periodically closed his eyes to soak it in. When he could enjoy it no more, he walked west, towards where the evening would be the brightest.

Every time he came to a hilltop, he ran his hands over the sheep, as if running…[Read more]

Y’all, I’m also sad that the pictures aren’t working, because I have memes and comics and fanart, but none of it will come through. My passion is temporarily deflated.

@freed_and_redeemed

Oof idk, I feel as if I don’t know enough about your story to give ideas 😅 Maybe give him scenes where he’s missing meaningful moments with his family because he’s looking back instead of forward (you know, reliving his grief)? He could miss a child’s special event, or forget a promise he made one of them.

@loopylin

Dante deserves his own personal planet of cuteness

Sebzter

“Yes.” The boy stopped smiling.

“You obviously enjoy it, but -“

“Yeah, it’s warm and fuzzy, but it hurts. I can’t help myself, and my friends begin to wonder.” Seb blinked and tipped his hat over his eyes. “Am I a pyro for the sake of it? It is entertaining. But…[Read more]

@keilah-h

there’s a character in one of my stories that’s terrified of the baby shark song

🤣

@loopylin

Sebzter

Inside the classroom, moments before being snatched, Seb’s inner dream shrieked for dominance. He turned around, and for a split second, he could see a complex diagram of his and the crowd’s movements, like shimmery white ghosts. With a tug of the plot strings, he yanked himself forward, and warped through the crowd. The doo…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

So glad y’all are safe!! Yes, God is so amazing!! 💕💕

@loopylin

Splendid *offers Dante a butterscotch scone in thanks*

Sebzter

“After a precursory kick of inappropriate nature, I made a face.” Seb yanked at his lower eyelids, and his squishy smile widened in the overwhelming white light emitting from his eyes. The rhythm was strong, and he held it back in order to talk sensibly. “Now they want…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Waves* 😝 Heya. You probably already know how you want the characters to end up, but I’d also recommend plotting out what to do in the middle, or at least have bullet points for each chapter.

Having some kind of outline helps the pacing a lot, which I can see you’re worried about rushing or slowing. Leon’s alcoholism and R…[Read more]

@loopylin

She’s so cuuuute XD Hey, and she has my hair style too!

@loopylin

*Snorts* Just imagining someone with a pet goat around the house –

@rae You got that right @loopylin

Sebzter

The best part about the whole thing was how, in utter confusion in the darkness, those in the halls joined the bullies in a tidal wave of people. They had no idea what the rush was about, but followed quickly.

The leaders, however, were perfectly aware of what was happening, insomuch as revenge was…[Read more]

@rae

Okay 😂 Um, I took the prompt “fairy tale” and went for exactly what Winston would picture as a fairy tale.

Winston

When Winston woke, he found real life to be all the more unrealistic.

The young demon-born rolled onto his back, and rubbed grass clippings out of his hair. Around him green hills rustled in the breeze, and a blinding blu…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve read some more of your book! I think I stopped at chapter 16.

The only big thing I’ve noticed so far is that Sef’s expression of her grief feels a little unrealistic. Of course anyone would be devastated if their only family they had left was taken away, that part makes sense. I just felt that her hurting herself reall…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I’ll pray for you!

Wyoh, may your crush never like you back. Don’t eat this.

Wyoh, may your cheese always be warm and soft and squishy and weird.

Or at least stop bugging us or we will report you to the authorities…

die wyoh