Erica

@freedomwriter76

I’m sorry girl, I would’ve responded sooner but I’ve been at yoga with my grandma and then went to eat lunch.

OH MY GOODNESS, GIRL!!!! I’m in love already!!! Oh my gosh that first chapter my heart was breaking for Leon😭😭❤️❤️❤️! Riker!❤️❤️!! Ughh!!! Sweet Riker and Leon. And Ezra!! Poor Ezra❤️😭. This is SOOO GOOD!!! I need more!…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww, thank you! I sometimes feel like it’s not, even though multiple people have told me how good it is, lol.

Yeah lol! Listen to them 🤣 it’s good!

@freedomwriter76

Lol congratulations. I am thoroughly conffuzled.

@freedomwriter76

Oh! Also I’m not saying you should tone it down. I think it’s important to represent what people went through! Also I feel like your story effects me more than other history stuff because your characters are so good! 😂 Keep at it! Like I’ve read history stuff that had sad scenes in it, but it didn’t effect me as much because I…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thanks for the heads up! If I stop responding at some point don’t worry about it 😂 I’m just really sensitive.

Hmm.. I’m not sure about Riker… 🤔 This is confuzzleing

@freedomwriter76

Yeah! Leons personality really shows. But with that, it gives me an immediate opposition to Riker. Curious to see how you’ll change that 😄

yeah check it ou! It’s a great book.

Oh also I always listen to music while I’m doing anything writing related, and I just happen to be listening to “Fight on, Fighter” By for king and…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @loopylin Sorry if i forgot somebody!

Kaine

Kaine’s boots scrape down the rough wall as he tries to climb up higher. Pulling on a small crimp in the wall, he heaves himself up a foot higher, bringing his body in close to the hold. His hand holds tight to the edge on the large rock, but he feels his fingers slowly…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh my heart! 😥

You have some really good tension build up! I gotta say, you really do a good job of portraying how awful the location is. I can almost feel the place’s… “Moral Stench?” is that a thing?

I’m not really feeling for Riker your sweetheart yet 🤣 but I can see your subtle hints that he doesn’t want to be doing what…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

• Yeah! Feel free to tag me if you do post it! (I can’t promise I will read it, I can be      really sensitive with certain topics)

@freedomwriter76

Thank you! 💛💛💛

I’m so happy! Lol your too nice. I feel inspired to work on the next part now!

Oh yes, but I must do school first 😑

@freedomwriter76

BRAVO!!! I love this story and it’s keeping me intrigued, oh, and…

yay! Glad it has you intrigued! I’m going to try hard to avoid a slow middle… that’s what makes me drop a book.

…you brought tears to my eyes, which always means its a good book for me. I love books that stir my emotions. 😉

REALLY!? I can’t tell you how happy…[Read more]

@theloonyone

 

I watched some smoe nova, he was very entertaining!

Lol yeah 🤣 It’s been a long time since I watched his stuff, kinda glad you said that, it made me revisit his channel!

🤣 Yeah, interest is pinterest Thanks! 😊 The three heads are characters from Unordinary, one of my webcomics.

Oh cool!

😁 I want to try digital art someday, but I…

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@folith-feolin

Nice online arts. Art is always so cool! The best I can do is ai art generation which is more about just inputting specific stuff and hoping you get something you want out of it.

Thanks! Yeah digital art is kinda hard 😅 I find that I can’t learn anything new with it, I have to learn it traditionally first, and then it carries over.…[Read more]

@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings

Matthew

”Oh yeah?” Kaine said, looking at me, brows furrowed. I knew he was wondering why I stuttered so much. Quite frankly, I wasn’t sure! I always got nervous when I was around new people, if I’m around a pretty girl, or if I’m afraid something happened to Lyla. And when I get scared, I stutter.…[Read more]

@folith-feolin

Whoa this is so good!! I like the kind of low haunting melody that you sang it in. Also u have a very good voice! Yes, I agree with @kathleenramm, I think it would sound really good with Guitar.

@folith-feolin

Oh, you’re fine! That happens like all the time on here. Thanks for the advice! It really helped😊.

@whalekeeper

I’ll pray for ya 💛 I’ve been going through something like that myself.

Lol thanks. Why do I always think it’s just me? 🤣

I’ll pray for you too! 💛

Also, awesome story! 😃 Please tag me for updates?

Thank you so much! I definitely will! 😃

I will attempt to do it in the correct order… I’m not so great at that 😅 That’s all I have for…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yes XD.

Yep! He’s very sweet.

Thank you!! Okay good. I always feel like I say things in the stupidest ways😂🤦🏻‍♀️.

@wilder-w @freedomwriter76

Awww Hope!! I’ve been cheering on the Hope and Rueben romance 😊. They’re just so cute together!!

@wilder-w

By the way, I really like your profile pictur…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Girl, you are totally not alone!! I do that with like all my characters😂. Except Matthew. Matthew is a fictional version of one of my best friends (who is a boy…not my boy-friend, just friend that is a boy😂😜.) My character Lyla is a lot like me. She loves animals and her brothers. But she is fiery and will not hesitate to d…[Read more]