@starofthenorth
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Felicity replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Congrats on 1000 words! Every bit counts! Right now it’s been taking me about a week to write that much… 🙁
Yeah, good idea Asher! Pour the whole bottle of hot sauce in!!
Bobby Roberts is a perfect name for a bully. I like villains who have names like Bill Williams, Jimmy James, Tom Thomson, etc. Their first names are the…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Overall I really liked it! Thanks for sharing it with us!
About the general dynamic, I don’t know what you have planned for the future, I thought the ending scene with the hot sauce didn’t make a lot of sense. It’s only for revenge, and I think pretty much all abused kids (whether emotional or physical) would not react that…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness!! Sweet PAXTON!!! Awww, he opened up to Matthew!! That is SOOO SWEET!!!! Oh, yes, I know they will bond over their shared stutters ❤️😭. I love their little dynamic so much already ❤️❤️!
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Light replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
aww poor kids! I like it!
I know!! We put our charries through so much 😭😅.
Luv Asher obviously 😂 their sibling relationship is so sweet!
Haha, yeah, I knew you would!! Aww, thank you!! Yeah, I love writing sibling dynamics❤️😊.
Thank you so much for reading ❤️😊!! Do you have any suggestions for the writings style, dialogue,…[Read more]
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Light started the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Okay, so this is my new WIP with Asher and Iris. I’ve written 1000 words!! Lol, I know that’s not that much, but for me, it is. Please tell me what you think about it. Thank you!!
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @felicity @orielle21 @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @eli…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Where we live (Ohio) we typically get snow in November, barely any in December, then more in January and February.
Similar story here, although we have already gotten a good amount of snow this month. We are finally getting a white Christmas this year…I think. Unless all the rain that is coming down decides to melt everything. *feeling…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Heh, as my pastor said, we have four seasons: almost winter, winter, still winter, and road construction.
Good one!!!!! 😉
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Hola! Beautiful name!!
My problem with Spanish is the opposite of yours….I have a good accent and can speak and read words but when it comes to comprehension, I get lost. I get discouraged at times. But I am going to a women’s Bible study and some of the ladies only speak Spanish so I get to exercise my listening skills then.
My…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Hola Amiga! Mucho gusto. Super fun to meet another Spanish learner and violin player. I love Biblical fiction so looking forward to when and if you decide to share!
1. Favorite school subject?
Well, I’ve been out of school for a few years but while I was in school, I would have said History, though I liked English too.
2. Chocolate or…
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6
Hello! Nice to meet you and I appreciate the welcome. You would love my yard…there’s a creek running through it and I have to cross a bridge to get to my garden.😍 Now for the questions1. What’s your favorite song or music artist?
Ooo…favorite song changes a lot for me but right now it is Stand by Newsboys. Besides them, I…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@sarafini
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Light replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
You’re so welcome!!
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Light replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
And the best part is, we can analyse these boy’s actions and romantic gestures, recording them ever faithfully to use for literary purposes…
Because we’re writers…
No other reason…
XDXD Yep!! No other reason…none at all….XD
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Light replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh thanks a ton! I’m going to go check it out!!!!
You’re so welcome!!! 😄
OH WOW!!
I was not expecting that! It’s totally amazing!!!! <3<3 One of the best plot twists ever!
I promise I’ll keep it secret. 😀
Yeah!! @godlyfantasy12 has some great plot twists!! Okay, good!!
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
These two are so friggin cute!!! I love Matthew so much❤️❤️❤️❤️
IKR!?!? Omg SO CUTE!!! Awww, thank you!! *Tells Matt and watches him blush* Anyway XD
Aww, Pax!! He is SOOO CUTE!! Thank you for waiting for me 🙂
Haha, Tauren was ready to go check out that dragon XD. Thank you for waiting for…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
OH WOW!!
I was not expecting that! It’s totally amazing!!!! <3<3 One of the best plot twists ever!
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Felicity replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh thanks a ton! I’m going to go check it out!!!!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Id love to hear your ideas! But if you want to save them and share the draft later, thats fine too!
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MineralizedWritings started the topic Title for a type of work in my WIP? in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @theloonyone @loopylin @esther-c @keilah-h @whalekeeper @koshka @arien @starofthenorth @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone! @folith-feolin
Hullo,
I have problem. My oc layson at some point in the story has this job. Idk what to call it, but it has a name. It’s a bit dangerous, it’s basically free-lance work to help bunkers that are…[Read more]
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