@starofthenorth
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Felicity replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Don’t worry about it! 😁 Different opinions are fine XD Better to be honest about how you feel!
Yeah, that’s true. Thanks for understanding!
This is all dependent on you and what you want your book to be. Everyone’s going to have differing opinions, and it also comes down the tone of the book 😊
Agreed. Sometim…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
And I wrote some stories about my stuffed animals. Later I tried to write a novel about a cowgirl. *hides in shame* I was a horse-crazy 8 or 9-yr-old, okay?
Don’t hide! That’s really sweet! 😀 My sister is nine and horse-crazy too!!
I started writing because I had stories to tell. Even before I knew how to write, I made up stories in my…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I think I just threw the hot sauce part in there, because they are really afraid of their foster parents, especially Iris, And I don’t think they would actually do it. But I’m struggling with just how violent and abusive the parents are. They’re enough for the siblings to be afraid of them, but I don’t feel very comfort…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 (Helping you mom with Christmas is great! Maybe Matthew and Lyla will just quietly follow the group for awhile Xd)
Lesli and Tauren
Lesli listens carefully to the conversation about magic and dragons.
“Woah!” She looks over at the crystal in Lunas hand. “Does that do something?”
Tauren stands…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Ok, you’ve never heard a Tauren Wells song?! 😲
Here’s a great one:
( @orielle21 have you heard hills and valleys?) (And sorry to invade your start here topic, she had to hear one right?) XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Title for a type of work in my WIP? in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
Thanks! I’ll keep it in mind! I think I need to develop the history of people who have done this before Layson, and maybe I’ll use one of there names in combination with the stuff here.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh! Fun topic, thanks! 😀
I started writing this past July, but had been involved with writing for a bit longer. My sister has been writing for a long time, and I liked to talk stories with her and help her come up with plot ideas. I thought it was super cool, but didn’t have a story of my own. Previous to that, my sister and I would make…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings
I’m not gonna be able to RP much for the next few days, (I’m helping my mom get ready for Christmas!!) so, y’all can make Matthew and Lyla just do whatever. I trust y’all. Or you could pretend that they disappeared, or maybe you could have your charries  get separated from Matt and Lyla. Whatever…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Title for a type of work in my WIP? in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
How about Liberator? I just looked up synonyms of release (thanks @felicity )
Afterthoughts of a Liberator. I don’t know if that’s what you’re going for. It sounds a little like something in The City of Ember. XD
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Arien replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Yay, good job! Glad you didn’t have to call a tow truck.
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Arien started the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
For me, I can’t even remember why I started writing. I was bored, I guess, and I asked Mom for a piece of paper and started writing a rip-off of a Boxcar Children book. I got a few chapters in, then abandoned it. I was maybe 8 at the time. And I wrote some stories about my stuffed animals. Later I tried to write a novel about a cowgirl. *hides in…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Hello! Nice to meet you and I appreciate the welcome. You would love my yard…there’s a creek running through it and I have to cross a bridge to get to my garden.😍 Now for the questions
Whoa!! 😍 That sounds Heavenly!
Ooo…favorite song changes a lot for me but right now it is Stand by Newsboys. Besides them, I like listening to For King…
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Light replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
XD
I’m fine, I’m wrapped up in my blanket and sitting by a fire, so now I’m warm! Thanks all the same! *shoves coat under chair to wait until next time shivers strike*
Okay, good!! 🙂 We’ve got a nice toasty fire going too! Me and my brother just went outside, and we have a kiddie pool that was filled with water, and it’s frozen solid…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
That’s cool about your character name! Maybe I’ll name a character Asus. Or Intel. (just reading labels on the laptop lol)
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Arien replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
I wish I were in your position right now. Im trying to figure out how to fix a car (It wont start at the moment)
I’m sorry, that doesn’t sound fun! I have no clue about cars . . . my advice would be start taking parts out and putting them in again until it works. XD Or calling a tow truck 😂
Good luck!
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Arien replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah. It’s just that Messenger’s elves can’t even compare to Tolkien’s, and she implied that Tolkien did the imitating. Not that she meant it, obviously, but I don’t know. It bothered me.
Me too! Tolkien’s Elves are so much more . . . Elvish. They don’t act like people with neat powers, just like Elves. Personally, I don’t see how T…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
ah I didn’t think of that. Doesn’t bother me really, as I’m not gonna be breaking rules anytime soon but I totally see ur point!
but it helped that their rules were totally stupid and I was rooting for her the whole time XD
Hm, yeah. Rooting for characters to break the rules, even stupid ones, is something I’m not comfo…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
You are very observant about @felicity and I having lots of siblings. I have a secret for you… @felicity and I are sisters. *looks up at @felicity, who is typing on her laptop* 🤣🤣🤣
No way! Which one’s older? 😉
But wait . . . Felicity replied to you after you joined and asked you questions like normal . . .
@felicity is this true??…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Que es tu cancion favorita tocar en el violin?
Me gusta mucho la música de J. S. Bach, especialmente las Sonatas y las Partitas. ¿Y tu?
Thank you so much. It’s a combination of an elvish name and the oriole bird. 🙂
Oh, cool. I wondered. It sounded like Tolkien but I couldn’t think of any characters named Orielle. 😊
Eowyn…she’s my favo…
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Arien replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
You need that jacket girl!! You’re cold! *Grabs thickest, warmest, coat of my closet and shoves it into your arms* XD
XD
I’m fine, I’m wrapped up in my blanket and sitting by a fire, so now I’m warm! Thanks all the same! *shoves coat under chair to wait until next time shivers strike*
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