@starofthenorth
Active 3 years, 8 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Yup! I’m pretty proud of that plot twist XD
Yeah, on one post the italicizing wasn’t working, so you had to pay extra attention to the flow to separate the narration from the thoughts.
Good question! I haven’t put much thought into it because I have quite a few mc’s, so I might never get around to developing that. Owen is not a…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic My Senior Project! (help me) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh, 0k! Are y0y homeschooled? That’s pretty cool to get to do that for a senoir project!
Here’s some random ideas:
- Maybe there spaceship connects to something underground, and if so, piosonious gas from underground is a concern?
- What jobs do the other aliens have? Maybe there freelance wok is considered a low job, or kinda savage ect. making…
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @sarafini @madelyn @arien @mineralizedwritings @koshka @booksandbeakers @lewilliams @princesachronicle22
@devastate-lasting @gold_hummingbird @charityanne @gwyndalf-the-wise @c-j
Story Two in my Journey to the…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Idea Poll in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey…am I too late for the poll?!
Both ideas are awesome but I like the Civil War time period better. 😉
Definitely tag me if you post it!!!
I write historical fiction….it’s one of my favourite genres. 😍
In MY humble opinion, a bit of romance always makes the story better. 😉
*waiting for any slight outbursts.*
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Getting interesting. I do need to refresh my memory on who Roger is. Sorry…I’ve been super busy the last few days
Please pardon this outburst. I had 2 shots of espresso at 6-7 something, and now at 2:30 am it is starting to wear off. 🙂🙃🙂😐😔😴
Lol. Love it.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic ✨Memes✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Lol the snatching the character one 😂 @godlyfantasy12 stole Kaine awhile back, still waiting. -_-
And the cinnamon roll one XDXD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh, ok! This will be interesting! Looking forwards to seeing how that developers, and can’t wait or Ev to open up. Seems like that will be a moment for them.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Woah, your new pfp is so cool! Is that one of your oc’s?
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Light replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
YOU CATCH LIZARDS TOO!??!?!? (Haha, okay, sorry for yelling.)
That has been literally all I do when I’m outside ever since I was 5. I’m a professional lizard catcher XD. I actually caught a green anole this past summer and named her Lizzie. I tried to catch a male so I could release them at our woodpile, and have a little community of…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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Felicity replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@kattheWriter @power @loopylin @freedomdreamer @E.M.Trepke @theloonyone, @landric @kathleen @elishavetpidyon @elizabeth @orielle2023 @gold_hummingbird @freedomwriter76, @folith-feolin @microphage6032 @cj @otherworldlyhistorian
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Felicity replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@ladric
Hello and welcome to the world of the KeePers! I’m glad to meet another sister in Christ! I’m a home school graduate, a want-to-get-published-soon authoress, and a homesteader (think gardening, canning, etc..)
Your co-authored book about the two sisters sounds very interesting. I’m currently trying to finish book two in a medieval…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh yeah!! That would be fun. Matthew is probably gonna be so freaked out at any of the rooms haha.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
You are so good at the subtle romance between Ev and Ami, it’s really cute!!
If you are just sharing and not wanting critiques, that’s ok feel free to let me know, I just love giving them XD
Sometimes in various scenes with Ev and his Dad, with the whole forgiveness arc, I feel like there isn’t a distinction between forgiveness and…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Hello, Humans of Planet Earth! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
(Ps we only get notifications you replied to us if you tag us, I’m @mineralizedwritings )
1. My favorite theme for books is action and adventure, sprinkled with humor.
Nice choice!
2. Yeah, I like snakes! Some of them look awesom!
Yeah, snakes are the best. 😃🐍🐍
3. Boom, by Italobrothersmusic, the German kind.
Cool!
How…
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Felicity replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@sarafini @booksandbeakers @whalekeeper @charityanne
Do you think we’re allowed to post the link on here to invite other people?
On the Announcments page they said:
If you have any writing friends who aren’t a part of CWW yet, remember that it isn’t too late for them to join! The additional boost they can give your teams may be what you need to…
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Please hurry and help her!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So, I take it there are three MC’s? I do like the different perspectives. Good job. I felt everything. And I also like reading and writing first person.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Here’s a little teaser for you from my JTTP Hobbit fan fic story. It has over 22,000 words. LOL. I started it in March of 2019 and finished it in January of 2020.
Main Characters: Eugene, Meadow, Rowena, and Alfred
Eugene: tough, ready-for-anything, strong, handsome seventeen-year-old
Eudora: strong, determined,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
@oreille21
Lol yeah! Let’s see what my rank becomes!
Yeah, I did pick up on it but some of that is because of some random comment you made about writing guy characters awhile back.
Also, I’m pretty aware of that happening because it shows very much in both my sister and I’s writing, it’s a major teasing point for us.
TaurenXD
Like you…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey! And welcome to KP. (That rhymed. lol.) That must be super fun to be writing a novel with a friend!
A little about me….I’m a full time barista (glad to see you like coffee!!) who loves people and birds (and writing) and is learning Spanish. I saw you said that your brother is trying to get you into disc golf….I have three…[Read more]
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