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hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone want to critique my plot? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 9 months ago
Great job on the outline! I know it’s hard XD I’ve tried to outline my stories before, but tbh I never really got a complete outline.
I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelse Hi! I was wondering if any of you do classical conversations? We’re thinking about doing it for next semester. If so, do you like it?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
That’s really funny! Good job on 2000 words though XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Nice! Is this a new draft? It feels different from the version I’ve already read.
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hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c Hey! How’s Amir’s story going? I have a few songs on my writing playlist that reminded me of him, and I thought you might want to listen to them! They’re from some kind of Middle Eastern show, I think.
The names are Nadir Anlar, Ana Tema (Keman Versiyon), and Keder.-
Hey! Thanks for asking! It’s going pretty well. A *big moment* just happened. I’m really close to the end. Only about 3-5 chapters left to write! And I’ve promised my parents a second draft by the new year, so I have to get started on that as soon as possible. XD
Oh ok! Those look cool! I’ll have to check them out. (:-
Wow! That’s awesome!!
Oh okay! XD Yeah, they’re good!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww!! That last line is my favorite xD. So sweet!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 9 months ago
Good idea! I’ll be praying too!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c I love that!! 😭
@freedomwriter76 Aww, cool!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic A Poem I Wrote ❤️ (Hey… got any ideas for a title?) in the forum Poetry 2 years, 9 months ago
Ooohh… I really like it!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Auuggh, that’s going to be so sad! XD But it sounds like a good ending for the story and the character arcs, it’s just… 😭
Anyway, I think if that’s what feels right to you… then do it. It will definitely be more powerful and emotional if Amir dies in Dabir’s place, but personally I feel like a government that would allow that is…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Me too!!! Abe is so sweet!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww, cute!! Layson is so sweet with little kids xD
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hybridlore replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Thanks!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Okay! I’m not sure if I’ll do it, so you can just count me out, but I’ll let you know if I change my mind and randomly start writing one xD
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hybridlore replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Wow, that’s great!! So exciting!!
It’s a science fiction mystery about the crew of a ship that crashes on a jungle planet. The main character is the daughter of the ship’s pilot, who died in the crash.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww, they look great!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I didn’t really do it either, but I did start a new project on Thanksgiving XD. I’m glad it went so well for you! The chapters you posted look good!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hmm… Strivings Within by Mitzi VanCleve is pretty good! The first half is more about the author’s personal experience with OCD, anxiety, and panic disorder, but the second half goes into a lot about how to handle it. Another one I’ve read is The OCD Healing Journey by Mark DeJesus, which is also good. It’s definitely more about how…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Well…hello again ;))) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hey!! It’s great to see you’re back, I missed seeing you around! I’m glad you’re doing better! What have you been up to lately?
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I have heard of it, but I dont think we ever did it. Sorry I couldn’t be more of a help 🙂
Very late answer XD I would recommend it! Every system has its weaknesses so expect to see some, but the teaching methods foster a lot of thought and perspective.
That’s ok! Gotcha, yeah. We ended up enrolling for this semester and I really do enjoy being part of a group like this, but the homework is sometimes a lot.