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So…I wasn’t quite sure what to put this topic in, so I just chose a random one. Yesterday, my mom showed me a picture of a precious 7 year old little girl. She was murdered a few days…[Read more]

MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago

@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @whalekeeper @loopylin @arien @felicity @starofthenorth @anyone

Pretty short chapter here, I listened to the interstellar soundtrack while writing some of this, loved it! It keeps your attention enough so that you don’t feel bored, puts you in the zone for writing another world, and still lets you…[Read more]

Light replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago

@freedomwriter76

GIRL!!!! Again, THANK Y’ALL SOOOO MUCH!!!!

YOU ARE SO WELCOME, SISTER!!!!

Tell him, sister!!! XD

Yes!!! My goodness, Riker is an absolute angel! (No one can say that too many times XD)

AHHHH!!! THANK YOUUUUUU!!!! I LOVE THEM TOOO!!! Certainly one of my favorite couples. 😉

YOU’RE SO WELCOME, GIRL!!! OH YES!!! They’re one of my f…[Read more]

Light replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago

@felicity

Yes!! I loved it! You’re so welcome! 🙂

Oh okay! Yeah, I was wondering how much you would write of the war, –since there are two sides to the story, and we’re not sure who’s right, –or as you said, how it affects the people.

Okay!! Thank you for explaining!! 😀

Light replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago

@starofthenorth

That’s so cool! I think that would be illegal for me to do where I live . . . lol.

Aw, bummer! Yeah, me, my brothers, and friends do that in the summer. I don’t think it’s illegal here…I’ll have to check.

If you wanted to do that, you probably could! It might not be illegal as long as you don’t capture any creature that’s rare o…[Read more]

Light replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago

@arien

Hello and nice to meet you!

Nice to meet you too :D!!

Thank you! Arien is a kind of obscure character in The Silmarillion, and when I found it, I thought that’s cool, I think I’ll make that my pen name! 🙂

You’re welcome!! Oh, cool! I haven’t read the Silmarillion yet, but I’m gonna try and work up the courage to buy it and…read it XD.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago

@freedomwriter76

Finally caught up a bit on this! So glad you’re making such great progress!

Oh that was really sad 😭 I got a bit teary eyed lol.

Really good though! And yeah, that last line is PERFECTION! Like it fits perfectly, helps us understand Rikers conflict, and it just… 🤩?

Great work!

Light replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago

@starofthenorth

1. The only thing I don’t like about my pleco is how much it hides! Sometimes I don’t see it for days at a time lol 🙂

1. Oh, yeah, lol. I had a baby bluegill that I caught in the wild, and he would stay hidden all the time too! In the summer, I’ll catch fish and maybe a salamander, and I keep them in my outside aquarium, and obs…[Read more]

Light replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago

@mineralizedwritings