SeekJustice

@godlyfantasy12

That’s alright, KP sometimes takes the line breakers out of posts and the paragraphs get joined, (it’s happened to me several times, but I’m not sure what causes it).

Number one, -I consider this the most important part of my thoughts on this- I loved your poem! Especially where the narrator refuses to put the mirror away and…[Read more]

Oh, and I hope you don’t mind me tagging you, but here goes…

@gracie-j, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @kathleenramm, @lydia-s, @godlyfantasy12, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @abigail-m, @joy-caroline, @seekjustice, @jodi-maile, @joelle-stone, @anyone + everyone, @all those I forgot to mention.

Okay, I understand this might not be helpful and you probably already have a ton to read… but here are my suggestions!

First, I agree with The Hidden Hand, The Viking Quest, and honestly a ton more on here…

First, nonfiction. I’ll warn you, though, I am a great lover of autobiographies and biographies, so this list might get extensive.     …[Read more]

Hi, @scripter-of-kingdoms! *clears throat*… do I have permission to call you Kads?

I have to say… I agree! I love my name (and I’m not biased, of course!) 🙂 And Grace is beautiful too! Seriously, I’m not just saying that. I love the name Grace.

Oh, interesting! Is it difficult learning Japanese and Korean at once? How similar are they?

I’d…[Read more]

And @joelle-stone, 660 words is amazing! I don’t know if I’ve ever gotten that much in one shot, let along editing… Good job!

Short sprint, but enjoyable 🙂 I finished with 270 words. Thanks, @nanisnook!

Sorry, I didn’t see this until now. Sure, I’d be happy to sprint for a bit! Starting at :05.

@typewriter77

I think the right theme would emerge once you have a general idea of the characters and how the plot should go. For a short story, perhaps you might want to avoid some of the bigger themes which would require an entire novel to do justice (pun intended).

Since your story is to be a mystery/thriller, one idea that came to me is to…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Oh yes I love it when the antagonist and protagonist mirror each other thematically.

I like unexpected villains (e.g. killer being a child or sweet old lady). I’m also fascinated by villains that have unique and interesting motivations because the power-hungry, petty-jealous-rivalry, s…[Read more]

Done! I got 412 words done on a fantasy novella/novel I’m writing. Thanks for the sprint, @lydia-s!

Hey, thanks for the sprint! Definitely not five hours, but maybe 3o minutes. See ya around! Oh, and it’s almost 1:45 my time.

Yeah, I was able to see it. I just offered my suggestions in comment form instead of on the document itself 🙂

@lydia-s,

Yup, I’m definitely homeschooled and I wouldn’t change it for the world!

Yes! Or even better, PODO HELMER FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!

Ooh, I wanna hear more about the acriters…. 🙂

@abigail-m,

Yes, boredom is definitely a privilege. Sounds weird, I know, but it’s true… how old are your siblings? *high fives back* 🙂 I don’t really know what kinds of poetry there are. Umm… poetry that rhymes? 😛 I don’t usually write free-form poetry. Life must have structure!!!!!!!!! *clears throat and straightens dress* Well, anyway.…[Read more]

@nanisnook,

Your writing is really, really good! I enjoyed the fast pace. Ember and her brother are certainly very likeable, and the first person perspective is very clear. But I think I agree with @jodi-maile. You may need to pause a bit more a reflect on what’s going on in Ember’s head instead of focusing entirely on external things. Besides…[Read more]