SeekJustice

Oh, and I hope you don’t mind me tagging you, but here goes…

@gracie-j, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @kathleenramm, @lydia-s, @godlyfantasy12, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @abigail-m, @joy-caroline, @seekjustice, @jodi-maile, @joelle-stone, @anyone + everyone, @all those I forgot to mention.

Okay, I understand this might not be helpful and you probably already have a ton to read… but here are my suggestions!

First, I agree with The Hidden Hand, The Viking Quest, and honestly a ton more on here…

First, nonfiction. I’ll warn you, though, I am a great lover of autobiographies and biographies, so this list might get extensive.     …[Read more]

Hi, @scripter-of-kingdoms! *clears throat*… do I have permission to call you Kads?

I have to say… I agree! I love my name (and I’m not biased, of course!) 🙂 And Grace is beautiful too! Seriously, I’m not just saying that. I love the name Grace.

Oh, interesting! Is it difficult learning Japanese and Korean at once? How similar are they?

I’d…[Read more]

And @joelle-stone, 660 words is amazing! I don’t know if I’ve ever gotten that much in one shot, let along editing… Good job!

Short sprint, but enjoyable 🙂 I finished with 270 words. Thanks, @nanisnook!

Sorry, I didn’t see this until now. Sure, I’d be happy to sprint for a bit! Starting at :05.

@typewriter77

I think the right theme would emerge once you have a general idea of the characters and how the plot should go. For a short story, perhaps you might want to avoid some of the bigger themes which would require an entire novel to do justice (pun intended).

Since your story is to be a mystery/thriller, one idea that came to me is to…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Oh yes I love it when the antagonist and protagonist mirror each other thematically.

I like unexpected villains (e.g. killer being a child or sweet old lady). I’m also fascinated by villains that have unique and interesting motivations because the power-hungry, petty-jealous-rivalry, s…[Read more]

Done! I got 412 words done on a fantasy novella/novel I’m writing. Thanks for the sprint, @lydia-s!

Hey, thanks for the sprint! Definitely not five hours, but maybe 3o minutes. See ya around! Oh, and it’s almost 1:45 my time.

Yeah, I was able to see it. I just offered my suggestions in comment form instead of on the document itself 🙂

@lydia-s,

Yup, I’m definitely homeschooled and I wouldn’t change it for the world!

Yes! Or even better, PODO HELMER FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!

Ooh, I wanna hear more about the acriters…. 🙂

@abigail-m,

Yes, boredom is definitely a privilege. Sounds weird, I know, but it’s true… how old are your siblings? *high fives back* 🙂 I don’t really know what kinds of poetry there are. Umm… poetry that rhymes? 😛 I don’t usually write free-form poetry. Life must have structure!!!!!!!!! *clears throat and straightens dress* Well, anyway.…[Read more]

@nanisnook,

Your writing is really, really good! I enjoyed the fast pace. Ember and her brother are certainly very likeable, and the first person perspective is very clear. But I think I agree with @jodi-maile. You may need to pause a bit more a reflect on what’s going on in Ember’s head instead of focusing entirely on external things. Besides…[Read more]