Just wanted to pop on here and let everyone know how everything is kinda looking. Writing is going fairly well…[Read more]

I have another update on Freedom’s Fire!!
The formatting for Freedom’s Fire is officially finished!!!! 🎉🎉🎉
I…[Read more]

Heyyyy….so I remember that you were helping me with writing at one point (and I’ll admit I wasn’t the most open to criticism, so I apologize…I was going through a hard time of doubting myself, and getting frustrated that it wasn’t good enough)

I was wondering if you’d like to take a look at it again, since I’m kind of…[Read more]

Sooo, y’all know I’ve been a little more inactive on KP. The hiatus has been good,…[Read more]

Maybe there’s some form of serfdom? Like the very rich who can afford the Vital subjugate the poor populations by creating superstructures out of it and forcing those who seek it’s shelter to work for them, threatened by being tossed to the elements if they disobey?

*Stokes chin thoughtfully*

Hmmm, yes, yes. That does make sen…[Read more]

Yes, yes, yes!! Those are all wonderful questions that I definitely need to be thinking about! Thanks so much!!

I think it would be interesting if he was fighting as a Gladiator not because he wants to, but because it was his only option in some way — maybe his social class was too low for any other high-paying job? I also think i…

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ahhh, I’m sure you learn a lot that way! 😂 my first novel is WW2, and it’s just my favorite thing to learn about honestly, other than God, of course🥰

(it feels good to know y’all know other WW2 nerds out there XD)

Here’s some questions :]

Angus and Lenora, have you always been immortal, or were you born as a common mortal and then were somehow magically given immortality?

And also, Angus, what’s your dog’s name and can I pet him?

Here’s Lois’ explanation from earlier “In our realm, there are two kinds of magic users: spell weavers and spell casters. Weavers naturally generate magical energy, but aren’t able to use it themselves. We have to give our magical energy to casters instead, by making a spell. Spells are just symbols drawn on a caster’s skin that…[Read more]

This is a section of chapter two i’m finally happy with, so now I’m posting it here so you all ca read it/critique it. enjoy!

“Nahim. Nahim!”

Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old friend’s hidden face. Nahim brushed Mandi…

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I suppose I refer to death, eternal life, ect. in the trilogy more than actually happens. My characters get in some tight circumstances (like pretty much every other character out there).

There are only two deaths which actually happen to important characters (no MCs die in this series, although one is getting pretty close to it.…[Read more]

Thanks!

the one on the far right really reads as sci-fi,

Oo yay the strappy thing worked

@whalekeeper

You’ll ruin my mysterious flAir.

Ehehehehehehe my evil plan is working >:D

ok but really you’re so sweet thanks 

What do you guys think? Any favorites or suggestions?

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Okay…part TWO of the sad scene…

Lilitu walked briskly down the dimly lit streets, Sef’s emaciated form in his arms.

Though his foot pained him, he could barely feel it now.

His body thrummed with adrenaline.

She was so weightless….his stomach turned. He could feel every bon…

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Here’s a chapter I just wrote…I’m pretty happy with it but it’s SO SAD!!!

“Sef!”

She heard the door crash open upstairs, and her heart plummeted to the soles of her feet.

It was late.

Very late.

The odds that Ive…

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I Love both of those movies!

my current WIP is a Star Wars Fanfic.

I LOVE graphic novels, and I’m working on one on the side!!! I love that concept!!

Hi! I’m @scoutfinch180!  Nice to meet you!

Interesting to hear you write fanfics about Ghibli and Star wars, I sometimes listen to What if videos on Youtube. What kind of fanfics do you like to write? And I can totally see a Ghibli fanfic working, I’ve sometimes wondered how a sequel to Spirited Away would go. My favorite Ghibli…[Read more]

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The point is to not get an explosion card, otherwise you’re out of the game. You have all sorts of other cards you can use to reshuffle the deck, skip yourself so you don’t need to draw a card, or peek a few cards down to see if there are any good (or dangerous) cards.

The art is hilarious…[Read more]

Yw! Exploding Kittens is a hilarious card game (the humor is sometimes kind of crude and juvenile, but over all it’s a fun game 🙂).

And I love your sketch!

Thanks! I think it’s currently my favorite drawing of him.

I love AtLA so much I need to rewatch it again.

Exploding Kittens is a really fun card game that has really weird art XD

In the Young Writers’ Workshop, they don’t roleplay a lot, but they have this activity in the character forum called character interviews. Basically if you have a new character, who you want to get to know (or even an old one!), you can ask people to interv…[Read more]

Pls pls pls never apologize for the fact you’re still trying to find your style!! I know it takes time and you shouldn’t feel bad about that! Also, chibi style guys is a challenge.

Yeah I get it, I just can’t help but apologize for ruining some people’s mental images, I guess 😅 And I am trying to redraw the character anyway.…[Read more]

I could not help but think of Combustion Man from AtLA when I saw that 🤣

Wow. That unicorn looks like it belongs in Exploding Kittens XD XD I love it.

XD oh my gosh that’s hilarious I love it

Meet the friend-turned-traitor from my WIP!

Uncanny valley…..yeah, plenty of my drawings have gone there. Since I mostly draw fan art, I can tell when I got a character so wrong it’s not even funny.

and LOL about the marrying Legolas part. Y’know, I’ve never found him hyper-attractive. Like, he’s the kinda guy that I can think “Wow, the female elves…[Read more]

I’m not at that point in digital art yet….

Thanks!

@scoutfinch180

Is this meant to be a regular outfit?

Yes, for now. She also has her spacesuit that she wears sometimes. I’ve been struggling with trying to make a outfit that looks sci-fi but is also cute and playful and fits her personality.

Whoa those are really cool and have really pretty colors. Is it Artemis and Apollo?

that’s super helpful, actually. Thanks!

Wow, you’re really good at backgrounds :0

Thank for the suggestions 😛 I do still like Ransom and I will use it somehow, whether or not it’s for this character. I’ll let all these names simmer some more. Right now he will go by Ben, until something sticks.

Also completely random, but I really like him as a character now XD I named him…[Read more]

I like it!

Personally, I’m more worried they’ll ruin Tron right off the bat when they pick it up again. I’m not afraid of them overfranchising it, yet.

I feel like the reason Star Wars has done okay but Marvel h…[Read more]

This link works for me! Unless you want all our comments to be separate. I’ll try to start reading it next week once our schedule’s back to normal after Christmas break and all that. 🙃

Okay!! It doesn’t really matter to me XD It’s up to you!

@scoutfinch180

Yeah, Marcurious is an…interesting character XD

what is the Meglena scene if you want to talk about it?

Oops, sorry. Meglena is a planet that is covered in fog so thick that you cannot see someone next to you, unless they are literally touching you. It gets creepier when there are these glowing things that race around in the dark (think Speed Stinger things from httyd (Google it…[Read more]

It’s completely fine, no rush on how fast you give me feedback! (: I understand we all have lives outside of writing and KP xD

I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps.

Actually, I would prefer if you gave your opinion on the first few chapters of my WIP and kind of go…[Read more]

Yeah, pics have recently been attacked by Wyoh. Old posts too I guess.

I’ll make a full reply later since I’m angry at myself rn, and when I get angry, most ppl think it’s at them. Same with disappointment.

Rn, just a few things…

• There is no possible way I can combine Alpha’s and Nahum’s stories. It would overwhelm both…

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Also I forgot to mention…I don’t have all the exerpts from my WIP here on this forum. I will post them for you on here if you agree to help me. (because I didn’t want to take up a bunch of pages on here for no reason haha)

@scoutfinch180

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So, this is a short story i just revised after a year of leaving it in it’s awfulness. A couple spots are giving me trouble, so I’m gonna…[Read more]