Scoutillus Finch

@scoutfinch180 finally another person who gets it! I’ve met two or three others on here, which is great.

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This link works for me! Unless you want all our comments to be separate. I’ll try to start reading it next week once our schedule’s back to normal after Christmas break and all that. 🙃

Okay!! It doesn’t really matter to me XD It’s up to you!

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Yeah, Marcurious is an…interesting character XD

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what is the Meglena scene if you want to talk about it?

Oops, sorry. Meglena is a planet that is covered in fog so thick that you cannot see someone next to you, unless they are literally touching you. It gets creepier when there are these glowing things that race around in the dark (think Speed Stinger things from httyd (Google it…[Read more]

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It’s completely fine, no rush on how fast you give me feedback! (: I understand we all have lives outside of writing and KP xD

I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps.

Actually, I would prefer if you gave your opinion on the first few chapters of my WIP and kind of go…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Ooh, this is really interesting! Haha, I noticed that about @scoutfinch180 too, it was very thorough!

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Yeah, pics have recently been attacked by Wyoh. Old posts too I guess.

I’ll make a full reply later since I’m angry at myself rn, and when I get angry, most ppl think it’s at them. Same with disappointment.

Rn, just a few things…

• There is no possible way I can combine Alpha’s and Nahum’s stories. It would overwhelm both…

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Also I forgot to mention…I don’t have all the exerpts from my WIP here on this forum. I will post them for you on here if you agree to help me. (because I didn’t want to take up a bunch of pages on here for no reason haha)

WHY IS THIS NOT WORKING?!?!

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So, this is a short story i just revised after a year of leaving it in it’s awfulness. A couple spots are giving me trouble, so I’m gonna…[Read more]

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Also, what is the end goal of your plot? Reuniting the galaxy and reversing what Grathmere did while working with him? I recommend making Grathmere somewhat morally relatable (think Edmund Dantes from The Count of Monte Cristo)

I honestly have never thought about it. I think the most good Grathmere can do is to destroy his allies…[Read more]

Sorry had some trouble andd it posted for some reason. @scoutfinch180 the rest.

After GA, the Wondians did mix some of their blood with aliens from other planets, but there are still

Those of pure Wondian blood. For instance, most the Dwarves are pure since don’t often accept others into their small circles.

For the sake of sci-fi and stories,…[Read more]

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OH ok, I read Alin as Aelynn, sounding more like a girl’s name in my head. Also, What Alin says there does sound a little feminine in a way,

XD I’m sorry, but it’s just funny to me, cuz that is how Alin’s name is pronounced! In fact Nahim’s oldest brother, Knihan, had to have the spelling of his named changed because “Nihan” is a g…[Read more]

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That is very helpful, thank you.

My latest idea for Returns has a similar theme as Nahim’s stories, where Alpha must forgive and reconcile with his father, or Grathmere will die. Kinda like if Luke was the one with hatred and trying to kill Vader, but Vader is still the bad guy. And then Luke forgives him and a happy ending w…[Read more]

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The theme is only for Book 1. Book 2’s is flicking between a few. Book 3’s is forgiveness, loyalty, and a few others I’m juggling with. I know forgiveness will be in it since Nahim has to forgive his greatest enemy (surprisingly, it’s not Grathmere). Book 4 has a bunch of stuff that I haven’t decided on, and Book 5 has basically…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 oh! You’re from SE too! I joined there like…idk…two months? Maybe? Before they shut down! Actually, I was under the same username I use here, had a Friesian PFP. Did you know you can still log in and get to your profile, and to your subscribed topics?

Okay…sit down and take a deep breath…I usually loose most my friends in…[Read more]

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Oh dear…I think I have failed as a writer.

It’s currently around twenty two o’clock for me, so I can’t fully reply rn (and dont have much energy or will either) but I will say that a few of your edits are mistaken…and it’s totally my fault!

I can’t believe I really liked this chapter!

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That’s fine, I’d rather have you take a month than five minutes. Quality first 😁

Wyoh! Can’t I edit things without you deleting them!?

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Chapter 2 part 2

Evening came, leaving the Banorian landscape lit by flickering torches under a deep blue sky. The trees still rippled in the wind, but they were now just dark shadows.

Nahim walked away from where he had left…

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Chapter 2, part two

Evening came, leaving the Banorian landscape lit by flickering torches under a deep blue sky. The trees still rippled in the wind, but they were now just dark shadows.

Nahim walked away from where he had left Mandin, the Ward in the annual meeting at the…

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