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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Lukas
“That’s probably a good idea.” Lukas reluctantly stood up, gathering up their trash and shoving it into a nearby garbage can.
He glanced at his watch. “Actually, I think the lessons are over now. If you’re headed back to school then I’d love to have you join me.” He offered a gentle smile.
I know some people ar…[Read more]
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Trailblazer started the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I’m creating this topic for the purpose of sharing what God is doing in our lives! I love hearing from others what God is teaching them, what He’s done in their lives… anything big or small! Hearing about His faithfulness in someone else’s life always encourages me that He will be faithful to me, too, and stirs my faith to believe He will…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Lukas
“Yeah but… it really helps when you finally talk about it…” His mind wandered to the special conversations he had had with Ev before whenever he angry or sad.
Easton
“So what about you? if you don’t dance then what do you do for fun?”
Easton couldn’t help but notice how she had quickly shifted the atte…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
He’s kinda talking about both of them.
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Lukas
“Yeah,” he said softly. “It’s like you’re afraid of what they might think of you…”
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Trailblazer started the topic Mystery ideas in the forum Mystery 2 years, 3 months ago
I had an idea -and I don’t know if I’ll actually get to writing much of it or if it’ll just become one of the many started projects- for a series of mysteries. Each mystery would take place in a national park, featuring a set of characters I’ve used in previous mysteries I’ve started. I have bits and pieces of inspiration from a trip my family…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Sara thank you for saying that, it’s kind of a good feeling when my writing is relatable to others
and yeah I know what you mean, cause I’ve felt it before
but also sorry if my RP made it sound like Ev is the bad guy or anything, it’s definitely not his fault or anything, him and Falon just don’t have chemistry…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @jonas @savannah_grace2009
Nae
“‘Saying you’re fearless means you are scared to admit you’re really afraid.’ My Da says that a lot to Alpha. Excuse me, impolite sir.” She nodded her head to him, then turned to Riker. She kissed his hand. “And you, Sir Riker. Duty calls me.” She smiled at Ruler, then slipped her hand out of his…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Idk…all I know is this hurts me to read lol XD
Ahh, don’t worry!! Ev is kinda oblivious rn. In this AU, he seems to be denying his feelings for Ami much more than in his actual story. But Ev will notice real soon and talk to Falon and make sure everything’s okay. 😊
Lukas
“It’s not wrong to be emotional… It’s okay actually,…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
also, Rae, Franz is prob not ticklish, and even if he WAS, he wouldn’t let anyone get close enough and he’d probably push/shove them away, heh.
Okay, just very random thought. Thanks for replying!
I’m gonna go with popular vote.
At some point, I think Nae is gonna hop over to Sef.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Ariac
“Then maybe you lack self-preservation instincts,” Ariac snapped manifesting another sword in his other hand. “My patience is running out. You better explain what you want with us, or. Get. Out. Now.”
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Um, do you think we should change the turn order, because the way we’re doing it seems disj…[Read more] -
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper That scene with Marcel was really cool
@jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009
Felicity
The demon growled and gurgled in frustration.
Felicity snapped out of her trance in time to realize that her distraction had worked. She blinked a few times. Then she slowly began to walk forward. The magic around her still slowed down her steps and…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks, they really are 😊
Thank you!!
Yeah, that’s fair. I use more description later on. I imagine my characters pretty vividly in my head, but I don’t always write it out. Typically I sprinkle in bits of description every now and then. Like, I think in the next chapter or so, I mention Ami has blonde hair. For the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Yeah, it is really cool! Not everyone likes to use it, but I find it really helpful in the beginning stages of developing a character.
Lukas
“W-well, I guess… I guess we’ll all just have to make the best out of the time we do have together.” He smiled softly. “And you could always visit Aletheia. It’s not in its best con…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
So, this RP has a weird history. It started out pretty normal. The characters were trapped in a magic house and forced to have a party. Then it was decided to completely change it into an adventure RP. They had a lot of cool adventures, but eventually the RP started to die out. We decided to restart the adventure as a separate RP,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @rae @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @grcr
There was a mechanic in Resonancy that I had in it originally but kind of faded put without me realizing it.
It would make things more interesting, but I don’t think it will really fix my problems, because it probably wouldn’t really come into play in the first boo…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 yes she does, XD
Nae
Despite her innocent looks and questions about the meanings of words was a Nae that seemed too rarely to come through. She could sense Riker’s fear, sense the commanding, rude presence of his father, sense the quiet, scared nature of the girl in the corner. She stared up at…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Ariac
Ariac levelled his sword threateningly at the stranger.
“I’m going to make this very simple for you,” he said. “You will promise not to hurt any of us here. …Or I can kill you right now.”
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Ariac is bluffing of course, since he can’t deliberately kill.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks!! Me too 😊😁
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
🤣 I love that!!!
Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)
Lukas
He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]
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