@savannah_grace2009
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks, I’ll take a look at those. One additional difficulty is that I’m working with a series, so plotting that is a bit different.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Have you maybe already done a post that’s the same in this thread? It doesn’t let you do duplicates.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
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Allison posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
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I think that is what I’m going to go with, her almost dying, and her realizing that she actually likes him. 🙂 -
Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Fynn
“Y-you would look g-good in navy b-blue,” Chase commented to Fynn as they entered the store.
Fynn titled his head and nodded. “Yeah, you’re right. I could see that.” He turned to Lukas. “What do you think?”
“I no nothing about style except for the fact that you don’t have it,” Lukas replied, holding up his hands in surrender.
Fynn…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
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Oh, gotcha! XD Aw, yeah. Feedback is hard but your story will benefit from it! I’m glad it’s going well! -
hybridlore posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ugh, I’m sorry! Doubting yourself is the worst. 15k already? That’s really good! Why did you decide to start over?-
@hybridlore
I had a mentor tell me that my plot was all over the place. He “didn’t see where I was going” and it was “too depressing”. After reading that, I was depressed XD but then I sort of realized he was kind of right (as much as I hated to admit he was right lol), and decided to start over. It wasn’t completely starting over; I kept the same…[Read more] -
@savannah_grace2009
Oh, gotcha! XD Aw, yeah. Feedback is hard but your story will benefit from it! I’m glad it’s going well!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character & Background Yard Sale in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Looks cool! I’ll have to see about adding some of mine on here.
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
Hi! How are you?-
Hey! Thanks for asking! I’ve been good. I’ve been struggling to find motivation to write, and kind of doubting myself, so writing’s slow. But otherwise, I’m great! I WAS at 23K….but then I HAD to screw up everything, so I started over and am now at 15K. How are YOU?
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@savannah_grace2009
Ugh, I’m sorry! Doubting yourself is the worst. 15k already? That’s really good! Why did you decide to start over?-
@hybridlore
I had a mentor tell me that my plot was all over the place. He “didn’t see where I was going” and it was “too depressing”. After reading that, I was depressed XD but then I sort of realized he was kind of right (as much as I hated to admit he was right lol), and decided to start over. It wasn’t completely starting over; I kept the same…[Read more] -
@savannah_grace2009
Oh, gotcha! XD Aw, yeah. Feedback is hard but your story will benefit from it! I’m glad it’s going well!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
I have been meaning to post in this forum for a while now.
I mean, I would assume it’s Ottoline’s, since her picture is on it… Oh, wait XD it’s Ottoline and Hugo!
I was like, wait why are there skateboard pictures there?
Here’s what I would do with those eyes.
- Copy everything around the eyes, but not the eyes…
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Allison replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
AHHHHH!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lolll!
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 7 months ago
Awww! I love it!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@acancello @savannah_grace2009
“I’m not sure,” Kari replied. “I think it started sometime after the newest girl- is her name Carrie, too?- left the dining hall, but it seemed like a bunch of soldiers showed up right after the fire began, so it’s most likely that they started it to cause chaos so that we wouldn’t be able to stay organized and…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Hugo
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Ottoline wasn’t to mad, thats good. As a matter of fact she seemed relived. Hugo gingerly touched his hair and was relived to find that it was still on his head, his arm hair though, was singed badly.
He sat up and took a few more deep breaths, and coughed up a bit of smoke. He was lucky to be…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
I always have multiple WIP’s… I bounce around depending on what I have inspiration for.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Kari
It was a relief to be outside, away from the fire and fighting. Kari spotted Hugo and Ottoline off to one side, next to a horse (I think Marcurious was in the form of a horse most recently, am I correct? If not, @jonas can change it in the doc).
“Hugo! Ottoline! I’m glad you two are okay!” Kari called as she hurried to…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ooh! I love it! Cant wait for the second chapter!
His blonde hair shone in the sun, his blue eyes matched the sky overhead. And me, being twelve, wondered if he was the one.
I cringe, remembering my old feelings. Eww. Gross. Not Sake.
I was one weird twelve year old, that was for sure.
Lol!!! This is great XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Chase Duke
“I’m sorry, I didn’t know.” She paused for a moment. “I’m sure we can find a store that isn’t so busy, if that’s what’s bothering you. You should probably help Fynn find a suit if I’m not available to help him. Because he lacks… an eye for style.” She smiled and let out a small laugh.
Chase didn’t…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @beth-torres
Now they’re outside.
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@acancello
I can’t wait for that scene! It’s going to be sooooo adorable!!!!!!!!!