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Power replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae here is a critique from the tactical geek. 🫡
“one teen who didn’t know the skill of at least one weapon well”
“He had no weapons”
“and not able to do anything for lack of a weapon”
One of the important principles in fighting knowhow is that everything is a weapon. From the belt and shoes on your body, the phone of computer you are r…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Fantasy Maps in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
In my long (and normally annoying/disappointing) searches for a decent online map maker, I finally found a treasure. This map maker is awesome!
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Power replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 7 months ago
Mayhap, it is not common knowledge (Though I believe the contrary) that when people run into a wall, then they’re cranium tends to experience much pain and woe. What concerns me is the query, why would an individual run into a wall every 5 seconds? I have come up with 3 (what I deem) logical explanations.
- The poor person is blindfolded and…
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Power replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 7 months ago
It b my imagination r do I c a newbie¿
Greetings earthling.
I b the ◼️ Mongoose.
Welcome 2 KP 🦑☄️🎷
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Power replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 7 months ago
I have arrived! The great magnanimously stupendable Black Mongoose himselfes!! Bee hold!!! (You might get stung, so bee careful.) Fear and tremble!!!!!
Bwahhaha!!!!!
Oh, and what up @rae
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Power replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 1 year, 7 months ago
I think one of the best ways of writing uncomfortable/painful or possibly edge subjects is to merely state the facts and then be done, that’s how the Bible does it. (Perhaps, look at similar instances in the Bible and see how they are written.) You don’t need all the details. Sometimes the most powerful things said, are the…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 1 year, 7 months ago
Twas not a ball of steel
that pierced my fleshy heart
A Blast and blaze of fire
Or burn that did smart
Weren’t a silver sword
or bent blade that did prick
that caused my chest to bleed
and my blood now to drip
Traitor tales hurt me not
Nor are why I have wept
You ask the reason why?
It’s due to your reject.
I offered you my…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 1 year, 7 months ago
May,
1 Dear Day
you Smooch a Frog,
and it NOT
POOF into a Prince!
We Now have 4
and need NO MORE
Feeding them
is Such an EXPENSE!
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Power replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 1 year, 9 months ago
I feel it’s my due duty to attempt to attempt to resurrecting this corpse of a page (Which hasn’t breathed a breath for approximately 9 days.) (I know, such a tragedy travesty.) “But why?” you ask? Why? I’ll tell you why!
- It is past midnight, so I tend to act slightly touched in the head. This isn’t twitterpation or cowwittedness, but in the…
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Power replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Apparently, I somehow missed your newest chapters. 🤨
Bwahhaha!!! The plot thickens!
(On a side note, aren’t bow magnificent weapons? The farther away you are from your opponent, the less likely you are to end up with a knife in the ribs.)
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Power replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 1 year, 9 months ago
Come Cupid fly fast
Come Cupid fly fine
Cupid’s your target
Lovers entwined
Or at least their fingers
twisted and tied
desiring together
but still trying to hid
Great Cupid shoot straight
Great Cupid shoot soon
That there old lady
is the romance goon
a blush she will bring
a bash to the heart
crusher of dreams
comments that…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 1 year, 9 months ago
I shall now preform the proper guy response to this post. 🎭
*Clear throat and nose* 🤧
*Crosses eyes* 🥴
Eeeewwwww!!!!!! 😩
Yuckkkkkkk!!!!! 🤢
Uuuugggggghhh!!!! 🤮
*Collapses upon the floor and starts retching and gagging.* 🤪
She just wants to steal your bubble gum!!!! 🍬
She just wants to give you cooties!!!! 😷
She just- Oooooo. . . CAKE!!!…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
The Gentleman’s Dilemma
My shoes!
My shoes!
Oh where did I put my shoes!
They disappeared and vanished.
How I am so confused!?
Here?
or there?
Where did I put that pair!
How can I go out to the dance?
I have my hat, shirt, and pants,
but my shoes-
my shoes. . .
. . .
My Shoes!!-
. . .
Or,
one of them.
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Ava Blue posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
to whomever sees this, I will probably not be online til the 23rd (Sunday) because I’m gonna be at a youth conference. aka nothing’s going to change and I’m going to continue to be really great about replying to people 💪😎
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Anyone want their characters' outfits drawn? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@smiley lol I’ve run into that exact problem before too. I’ve found that it helps to use a very dark charcoal grey for the main body of the boot, so that it looks close enough to black but you can still shade it with pure black. However, I typically use colored pencils and it looks like you might be using markers, so it may work…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Anyone want their characters' outfits drawn? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@smiley AAA THANK YOU! That’s perfect! You got the colors spot-on, and I like the way you drew the collar of the coat better than how I do it, I might actually update her design hehe
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Power replied to the topic What website should I use? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
If it has tons of pictures, you may want to look into a Snapfish photo book. They do a very professional job. . . but you do get to pay for. that.
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Anyone want their characters' outfits drawn? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@smiley Ooh, I really love those examples! Lovely lighting and color choices.
If you so choose, might you draw my lady November’s outfit?She’s not a villain, but she definitely has some sass. She’s very sarcastic and sly; she can be charming when she feels like it and abrasive when she’s in a sour mood. For physical appearance, her hair is cut…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@fab UGH I am so flattered that you like her Ilwyn 😌🤍💙 Is he not DARLING
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Ava Blue replied to the topic When Worlds Collide: A Crossover Fanfiction ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I LOVE IT 👏 I was so very happy to see Batman in there <3 and I love the snappy dialogue! 😀
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I noticed this wayyy to late but yeah, continuing being great Ava, you do that 🫵👁️👄👁️