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@issawriter7

REALLY? I can read any of your stories?! 😀 *jumps up and down and runs around the room with excitement* Seriously, I want to read all of the stories you are willing to share!!!!!!!!!! You’re welcome!!!!!!! I’m so glad I made your day. 🙂 That makes me very happy. And, oh, I think I can read your chapters soon because I don’t have…[Read more]

@issawriter7

*fails* I am so beyond excited to read this!!!!!!!!!! I really wanted to read this since the first time I’ve heard about it and now I get the chance to read some of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’m so excited right now. It is such a treat!!!!!! I can’t wait to read it!!!!!!!!!!! I also will take a while to get around to read it, but I will read…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

You’re welcome! I’m so glad they were helpful! I’m fairly new at giving feedback, so it’s good to know that I’m fairly good at it and I can be helpful rather than just plain critical. It was my pleasure! I loved every second of your lengthy chapters!

1. Are my characters likable? I just wanted confirmation that Caira was, in fact, interesting.

Yeah, all of them are (so far). Yes, Caira is interesting! I enjoyed being in her head. 🙂

2. Is the story engaging? If you were in a bookstore, would you keep reading? Does it keep you hooked?

100%. I would definitely keep reading!!!!! YES, the s…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver

I hope you can see my post. It does still exist, just not here. Let me know if you can’t see it and I will to try to repost it.

Oh, what the heck, my post disappeared again! -_- I was just trying to edit it!!!!!! You are allowed to do that, right?!

@e-k-seaver

Okay, before I get into your questions, I do want to add some other things first. I do agree with other comments that your MC is pretty passive. Every single action that has happened was directed toward Melia and Celeste only ever observed anything. To be honest, her POV is kinda of boring save for these moments into her backstory. At…[Read more]

@nova21

1)  Is this engaging?  Did it hook you?

Yes and no. The first scene was unclear and a bit confusing, but it was still interesting. Just would love to have more details of the setting and more information about MC herself in that part. But the part right at the end of the first scene was the part that got me hooked. And the second scene j…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms

A dystopian about a young male cyborg who is struggling to live after the war.

@writerlexi1216

Oh, I would love to this! But where do I find the first chapter?

This is just cool and inspiring for my current WIP.

@nova21

Oh my goodness, thank you so much for thinking of me to read your story!! I haven’t check my notifications in a while so this is why I haven’t replied until now! I will read your chapter soon!

Ohhhhh, that sounds like a really good reason to hide your real name. O_O

@scripter-of-kingdoms

*offers a hug*

Here’s another one:

@writerlexi1216

I know right? WHY IS IT SO ACCURATE?!

@issawriter7

XD XD XD XD XD XD That last one…. I’m so hard laughing right now! *hides Smoke somewhere you never find him* XD XD XD

I have another for you guys.