Andrew McLaurin

@jonas

Well time to get Rosemary separated so that she can spiral down a life of hatred and anger, just for her to realize the many errors of her ways, and all the harm she has caused. But knowing she can never get forgiven ends up disappearing! You know, the little thing. (BTW that is not actually fully what will happen…)

Rosemary and Jirah…[Read more]

@liberty

OOPS! I almost forgot about the animal character we were making! I am SO SO SO SORRY! uh ummm a name! dang! what would be a good name?

@rae

*Stares you dead straight in the eyes* You will never know…

lol

@the_lost-journal

Tell me or I’ll start collecting dragon pics again!!!!!!!!(Old Character Party people will understand how horrible that is)

Jk. I was only curious, it’s not need to know. You can keepyour secrets.

@rae

How many potatoes pfp do you have? Lol

Ha, ha ha ha… ha ha ha, HA HA HA HA HA HA! HAHAHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA! that is truly hysterical! Like I would tell you that life or death secret! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA AH!

Wow! @rae, you are ever so funny! Man, I love how you made that joke! Ha ha ha, “How many pfp do you have?”…[Read more]

@liberty

Oops, grammar mistake! It should be *your* not *you’re*.

lol, “You are secret is safe with me!”

Don’t worry, I make that mistake ALL the time, lol.

@raxforge @grcr @loopylin @whalekeeper @jonas @ellette-giselle @hybridlore

Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Pain. Brutus moaned as he lay on the ground, regretting greatly his decision to use that attack. Tears pricked at his eyes. The last time he had been hurt this bad was when he fought Max, but then, then his father was beside…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

How many potatoes pfp do you have? Lol

@raxforge yay!

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore

Baron (Brutus)—with group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus sighed. Why did he even care? Here his body was tearing itself apart and he wanted to go back to help Flare and Ben and the boy.

Mustering his strength, Brutus got back up from where he lay, gritting his teeth as he…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

 Forth section:

Joseph looked up at Darrien. His face was white, and his finger’s tightened on the door frame. He used his other hand to gently push Joseph back. “Please, the children had nothing to do with it, nor did the women. I was the one who hid him. Take me but leave the others.”

This felt unessasary. Julian only said t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Poor Linus. You’ll have so much catching up to do. Sorry.

Yeah, yesterday was rather busy. Oh well. I have time today.

(By the way, I should let you know that I’m not bothering to read the  feedback others are giving you, so if anything has come up that you want more thought on, please let me know.)

Feedback for the third se…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Feedback for the second section:

Don’t have too much to say about this one. Joseph kind of falling back to where he was before, but it is easy to see why.

He could hear Noah and Sabina praying together, and for a moment he thought Aaron was captured, for this was how it had been.

This is a nice peak back into what they were all…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

NEXT SECTION!!!!!!

Okay, that’s a lot of exclamation marks. You know five exclamation marks is a sure sign of madness, right? But you couldn’t settle for five, you went for six. (But who am I kidding, we’re all authors. Madness is sure to come with that.) Ellette, what are you doing to Joseph?

Feedback for the first of those…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wooph! Got a lot to catch up on! Let’s see how far I get before I have class…

It was actually not Betsy. It was Corrie and Betsy’s Niece, Peter and Reuben’s brother, and it was Peter and Reuben who were under the table because someone had seen them with the Jews and informed on them. (At least, that’s what it say’s in Corrie’…

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@loopylin

Oh no! that is awful! I will be praying!

Oh, wait, I only read it for five hours…still totally worth it!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

So…I started reading and couldn’t stop.

I found myself really enjoying the story, and I forgot about critisims until now. My only mental note is it was pretty obvious that Spy was Huntresses and Scouts father from the point that Huntress entered his room and saw his stuff. That and sometimes it feels like the scenes are too short,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks for sending the link!

I started reading it (just got to the part where Huntress sneaks into Spy’s room) and so far I’m really enjoying it! Thank you for letting me read it!

@the_lost-journal

Wow, and I thought 5 siblings was a lot.

@loopylin

I’m praying for him.💛