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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Soldier
“Do you guys want a cheese stick?” Mel asked.
I stopped looking through a stack of paper on the table (it was a boring stack of paper anyway) and looked up. “Cheese stick?” I repeated. “Where?”
She gently pressed one into my palm. I bit it in half. Delicious. All too soon it was gone.
I shoved through the…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Mel
The kitchen was small, with vinyl flooring and fake marble countertops. It was connected to the living room by a large doorway. In the living room was a couch, an armchair, a bookshelf, and a tv. Toys and comic books were scattered around on the carpet. Some were forced into the living room as the group crowded…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
KP no longer tags me, so I just have to think of checking.
I LOVE THAT IDEA!!! You could make that scene SO COOL!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper not me trying to figure out whether or not my characters would recognize the name “Colorado” because the Spanish language and the name of the river (although it’s largely localized to one state/planet instead of multiple) both exist in their universe
in the end I decided not to bring it up lol
Huntress
“Can we g…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Did that leave you with more questions or answer some?
That answers enough questions. Although I guess I have one more. Is all this worldbuilding and character stuff new? I’m curious to know how the novella is coming along, what with this recent disclosing of information.
Yeah, it’s cool how many different ways the…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Lucille
Lucy started, looking from Mel to the door. It had changed without the rest of them noticing. The stains of mud on the door made it look as if it belonged outside, pulled from a backyard or a porch.
Food sounded good. Lucy’s heart felt tired, in a good way, but that meant her body was tired too. She was a l…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Wait, what scene is this? Is this a scene where he almost dies in the middle of the story, or is this the end of his story?
What?! I wanna know!
I was going to say if it was his ending and you decided to bring him back, maybe he loses his connection to the wind permanently and that’s his punishment rather than dying. But idk if that…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Yes, me literally killing Baron isn’t very cool, but the realization about the Elementals that resulted from it is cool!
I can see what you’re saying. It’s fun to come up with specific details, and have them seamlessly click in your head like that.
I do believe you’re just mentioning the chest compressions to pacify me, though.
Oh. Actuall…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
So maybe we – the labyrinth people – helped you realize Gabriel should be an older brother? :-p
Thank you! You probably know what it’s like to have a character who keeps stealing your attention. This little guy is my attention thief right now.
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
Little tangent to the conversation. I’m not sure if you’ve seen this new character art, since you’re not on the royal rp. And this is the art topic. So I’ll share! :]
This is the Moth Prince. He’s my fav and I’ve enjoyed writing about him recently. By recent, I mean the past six months or so.

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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
If any of my guy charries were to be mistaken for a girl, honestly it’d be Baron rn. He’s very slender, and when his hair is long, it’s absolutely gorgeous!
I can see that. It’s funny to sometimes realize that a character is androgynous from someone else’s perspective. I have a few who are rather androgynous, but that’s because I have a bad…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
In the early concepts of Gabriel’s story, the news reported that they thought the new Protector was a girl…Gabriel, upon hearing this, was positively both offended and amused.
Maybe the Protector role will be passed down to a girl someday, so I can see why people would speculate about that. But that probably made Gabriel question his app…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
After all, the life of a Protector can be a lonely one as you aren’t supposed to let many people close.
What is the reason for this?
Gabriel: “Yes. She loves me.” *He pauses, seeming to remember something and looks away slightly as if embarrased.*
Lucy: *Supportive, curious, and disgusted at the same time* *Doesn’t know what else to say* *G…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Cool little thing.
That’s… cool. Yeah, very cool. SO cool. 😐
Girl, I don’t think you know what the word cool means.
*Grabs Baron, ties an evacuation label around his neck, stuffs him into a train, and sends him a thousand miles away from your WIP*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@rae ooooh interesting lore!!
also the adhd bit makes me think of how we decided that Scout canonically has adhd lolllll
wind charmer Jeremy would certainly be something but it actually really fits him tbh
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Mellissa
“Can we go to the kitchen now? I’m hungry.” Mel pointed to the door that they had come in from, but it had now changed. It was wooden, and had sun bleached paint that was starting to peel. The bottom had an unused cat door and a few splashes of dried mud from the rain. Mel recognized it. It was the door into…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Your thoughts make sense, don’t worry.
Instead of just fighting them like a soldier would, a Protector is meant to learn every type of monster, every strategy, every venom, every poison, every antidote. They are meant to study behaviors and take notes on them. All in hopes of not only saving lives, but finding a way to stop the monsters fo…
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
LOL hearing the slang in Lucy’s world from her is cute.
😛 Many of the people living around Lucy are young men who work in the factories or the fields, and she sometimes talks with them when they’re in the soup kitchens. I still haven’t decided how different the Outer Fields teenage culture is from the more populated city areas…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@rae Soldier’s old roommate was a world-destroying ancient being who is now supposedly a ghost that lives in a brick (that he brings everywhere and considers a part of the family) so I’m pretty sure he would be completely chill with his kids bringing another one home lol
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Not to mention he’s been abused by the people of his own home that he’s more willing to trust a complete stranger not from the island than a villager from it.
Yeah that makes sense.
Why can’t Gabriel leave the island? Are there crazy storms that make it impossible to sail away? Or is it the demon monsters that get in the way?
It’s a fun coi…[Read more]
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