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July 31, 2026 at 11:40 am #213111
“Standing in the gap”
What a beautiful and evocative metaphor!
July 31, 2026 at 12:00 pm #213112A character who blocks/fills a hole/breech with themself. Over by dead body. You will have to go through me.
Does anybody have any characters like this? 😎
July 31, 2026 at 12:49 pm #213113July 31, 2026 at 2:02 pm #213114Kinda like the prince in The Light Princess?
I’m afraid I don’t have a character like this…yet.
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
July 31, 2026 at 3:03 pm #213115
I did another character chart last nightAny paint can be finger paint if you don't care enough
July 31, 2026 at 4:08 pm #213116so that’s kind of cheating if it’s for a survival project lol.
Yeah, cheating is fine sometimes, but it’s satisfying to find other solutions when you’re building something in survival. My brothers keep telling me to cheat when I’m trying to find materials for something, but can’t find it, and I think that’s so unfun.
I started dying a bit XDXD That is really funny.
:-p I was a little inspired by Thumbelina. And Pride and Prejudice, come to think of it. The troll family is a bit like the Bennets, except they live in a cave and probably eat people.
This is gold.
Moth is not going to shoot a girl down just because she’s a troll.
I feel like the arrows are great for showing how he varies depending on circumstances/mood.
Yep. Since he’s supposed to get sadder and more bitter as time passes, the chart didn’t seem complete without some arrows.
But not clothes in reality? XD
Uh… not really. XD Lots of the creatures in his world don’t bother. He has enough fur that clothing isn’t necessary for decency. Cosmo suggests he should wear warm stuff when the weather is cold, so he might wear huge knit sweaters and a bunch of wool. And whatever else he got from raiding abandoned houses.
Now I’m looking back and, while not tempted to make it lighter, realize there’s a lot more pain involved than I thought. Especially now that I actually like his family and friends lol.
I’m afraid to ask what this means.
What if those oaths are actually binding him to something wholy different from what he thinks? 👀 *dramatic gasp*
*Gasp* Oh no, Wilhelm… What if his entire life is upended by this revelation? He doesn’t deserve to have such a thing happen. Or does he? I don’t even know. Character development stuff.
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July 31, 2026 at 4:15 pm #213117Cool little thing.
That’s… cool. Yeah, very cool. SO cool. 😐
Girl, I don’t think you know what the word cool means.
*Grabs Baron, ties an evacuation label around his neck, stuffs him into a train, and sends him a thousand miles away from your WIP*
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July 31, 2026 at 4:17 pm #213118July 31, 2026 at 4:58 pm #213119My brothers keep telling me to cheat when I’m trying to find materials for something, but can’t find it, and I think that’s so unfun.
Oh yeah no. That is no fun.
:-p I was a little inspired by Thumbelina. And Pride and Prejudice, come to think of it. The troll family is a bit like the Bennets, except they live in a cave and probably eat people.
That is awesome XD I somehow didn’t know who Thumbelina was. She did sound a bit farmiliar. But I used Google and I have the knowledge now lol.
Kavan hit his head so hard once that he dreamed he was a loaf of bread.
July 31, 2026 at 6:24 pm #213121I think it’s interesting that Thumbelina keeps getting into unfortunate situations where she might have to marry someone she does not like. I wonder if the fairy tale is inspired by a societal problem from the time it was made up.
By the way, is your flu feeling better now? And are you doing any writing these days, or more focused on other things?
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July 31, 2026 at 6:56 pm #213122I wonder if the fairy tale is inspired by a societal problem from the time it was made up.
Huh. I didn’t even think about that. That seems possible.
By the way, is your flu feeling better now? And are you doing any writing these days, or more focused on other things?
Yeah, thanks! I just got a cough now. I think I accidentally spread it to my mom though. And I have been writing a bit! I finally finished the first draft of my WIP in June. I’m working on chapter 8 of draft two currently.
Kavan hit his head so hard once that he dreamed he was a loaf of bread.
July 31, 2026 at 8:40 pm #213123That’s… cool. Yeah, very cool. SO cool. 😐
Girl, I don’t think you know what the word cool means.
Wait, wait, let me defend myself! Yes, me literally killing Baron isn’t very cool, but the realization about the Elementals that resulted from it is cool!
Btw, chest compressions save lives! Even in fiction.
*Grabs Baron, ties an evacuation label around his neck, stuffs him into a train, and sends him a thousand miles away from your WIP*
Nuh-huh! Not until you give me Sebster Gangster and Hugo!
Give Baron back! He’ll be fine!
…eventually
Pfp drawn by Surpent on Unvale. I'm a little obsessed so it's over here now.
August 1, 2026 at 2:49 pm #213128AHHH! Felicity! She is such a fun character. I like her chart.
And I have no other coherent thoughts at the moment. Ummmm…
Would she like sky-diving?
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August 1, 2026 at 3:03 pm #213129I said hello and then was immediately distracted, sorry. XD Your Minecraft ship sounds splendid.
Since he’s supposed to get sadder and more bitter as time passes,
I grow sadder and more bitter just reading that lol. His story does have a lovely ending though, right? *squints through my ProtectionsquadTM Sunglasses*
Cosmo suggests he should wear warm stuff when the weather is cold, so he might wear huge knit sweaters and a bunch of wool. And whatever else he got from raiding abandoned houses.
We love a royal dumpster diver. XD This is great. What would he think of thrift/second hand stores?
I’m afraid to ask what this means.
😁
*Gasp* Oh no, Wilhelm… What if his entire life is upended by this revelation? He doesn’t deserve to have such a thing happen. Or does he? I don’t even know. Character development stuff.
His life is definitely upended, but sometimes that’s a good thing. As much as I like his family and culture, it’s got a dark side that smells suspiciously like deceit or maybe even treason.
He never stops being a super zealous knight though. I think he grows up to be a knight errant, traveling into dangerous places in the world to offer hope. And he gets on very good terms with the angelic folk he saw in his mother’s garden as a kid.
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August 1, 2026 at 3:48 pm #213130Would she like sky-diving?
Uhhhhhhhhh
I don’t think so. She doesn’t like feeling out of control of her circumstances. She likes being up high in trees and things because it’s calming and the view is peaceful. It makes her feel safe. She’s not thrill seeking. (I very much overthought this question)
Any paint can be finger paint if you don't care enough
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