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@joelle-stone

thanks! oh, by the way, I love your profile picture!!

The quote is from Spirit: Stallion of the Cimerron one of my favorite movies.

Yeah, life is crazy here too, we happen to be moving halfway across Canada, from Alberta to Nova Scotia. XD

Yes! I wish they would have put Gildor in there; he’s so cool, and instead, they have…[Read more]

@gracie-j

oh man! that is epic! Filled with threat and mystery and danger and possible adrenaline rush for fleeing for your life *says all this in one breath and then finally breathes in *, oh… and maybe even romance? Wild guess since you said you love romance hehehe XD

@lydia-s

you’re is so funny! I love it! XD

@iluvhim18 Haha, who knew that all of our lines put together would create a mini story?!?!🤣🤣

@kathleenramm

“Oh, yes!” she exclaimed, bouncing up and down in the corner where she was sitting on a green bean bag. “Come see! You haven’t gotten to that level yet, have you?” she didn’t wait for an answer but continued to gush about….

haha, sorry for the awful grammar.

@r-m-archer

Thanks, it was cool!

that was fun to see people’s writing styles, I mean, it’s not so evident since it’s one sentence and mostly dialogue, but still, it was fun!

@abigail-m

Hi!!!

I like Elfwing, but either one is fine!

Thanks! I have relatives with the last name Griffin, which was partly my inspiration for the inclusion of the creatures in my fantasy novels. what is your WIP about? or is it top secret? *looks around suspiciously

And YES that movie is EPIC!!! it is by far my favorite movie that I…[Read more]

@iluvhim18

hahaha! That’s funny! We’ll have to do it again after everyone else is done, yes.

@elfwing Haha, I love that!!!!!🤣🤣

so I took the liberty of combining all the sentences into a scene. I found it funny, but then again I have a dry sense of humor;

I was relieved that it was a mime instead of a traditional clown, then I wouldn’t have to be caught up in some unfunny joke that he wanted to play on me. She would show everyone that she was more then just a puppet. “…

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@kathleenramm
Ok, here is the last line I’ve written:

I abruptly turned away so he wouldn’t see the tears stream down, and then I ran back to the castle.

This sounds fun!!! I’ll tag some more people: @writerlexi1216 @imwritehere1920 @buildsbygideon @nanisnook

@lydia-s

yeah, poor Daphne… alas, Klaiom’s true love must die. XD so sympathetic of me

yeah, well it’s all for the sake of the novel, they do not die in vain, at least XD

yes, you all were very helpful, thanks!

see you around! 🙂

@kathleenramm

okay, I gladly accept! Though it will make absolutely no sense! XD

“I was saving lives, Mythia, and I smacked her lightly with my reins, which I regretted, because she was jumpy for the entire next day!”

@gracie-j

Phew! I am reassured, thank you! I feel more confident about the other ones I’m planning to write lol

I will say that if that kind of proposal appeared in my work it means someone else was writing for me and I will be hunting them down XD

Thanks! yes, I need to work on emotions in scenes to be sure, thanks for the feedback!

@gracie-j
I average around 500 to 700 words an hour so that’s not much different. And I’m a perfectionist too, so all I can think about right now is how terrible my WIP is. Not to mention my WIP is SO unorganized that it’s killing me!😬 I’m trying to remind myself, though, that I can edit and fix it all later, but it’s so hard!

How long does it…

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@gracie-j

okay so I am trying to figure out a really good way for my male MC to propose to the girl he loves… I wrote the proposal a while ago

*backstory;  Faeda (main character) is an orphan living on an island under attack, and there is literally a war about to explode at any second, so she’s seeing the troop about to leave (she doesn’t…[Read more]

@joy-caroline Oh my goodness, that is absolutely GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!😍 I LOVE it!!!!!!!😃😃 Thank you SO SO much for making it for me!!!!!! You did a fantastic job and I love the pictures you chose!!!!!! Eeekk, I’m so happy now!!!!!! Thank you, JC!!!!!!!😃💗😃💗

@lydia-s

yes, she’s amazing with writing, truly gifted!

Yah, I wrote that part about a year ago, and I just went back and read it while listening to ‘The Eagles’ from the Return of the King soundtrack, and made myself cry… “why, Daphne? why did I kill youuuuu?” XD

haha no you make total sense! It sounds epic!!! betrayal of a family… oof its…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Yeah, guys crying makes me emotional XD  I haven’t actually seen it in real life very often, but I didn’t think they were sissy for it.

Lol yessss a good scene with people crying adds sympathy to the hurting character, totally. Someone I know is writing an novel, and the MC’s best friend said, “Crying isn’t weak. Or at least… I hope…[Read more]

@anika123

So I also read your chapters you posted, and I find the plot very intriguing!! It’s well made as far as the actual story, I found it exciting and curiosity invoking!

for improving the sentence structure, I would say to add more motion to the characters, wide eyes can be used for surprise or fear, and raised eyebrow for skepticism, gasp…[Read more]