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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Burnout/Struggling with this Draft in the forum Plotting 1 week ago
I’m also…just struggling sometimes with this book. The concept, plot, characters, etc are good. I like it…but at the same time at points it feels flat…It needs more, I already have notes for things I need to add but its a little overwhelming…
I really wanna get it to the point I feel comfortable letting someone else read it and critique…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Burnout/Struggling with this Draft in the forum Plotting 1 week ago
Hello gang it’s me again!!
Wasn’t sure where to post this so put it in plotting lol-I wish we had a Drafting section…kinda weird we don’t lol!
So as the title states…I’m struggling a bit and just wanted to chat with some fellow writers I know. This month I had MAJOR burnout in every area of my life. Work, spiritual, mental, physical, and…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
@whalekeeper Thx @loopylin @keilah-h
Gabriel
“This is where he found me.” Gabriel stood, walking to the window and throwing back the curtain. Outside was a sea of delicate white flowers with pink centers, the origin of that sweet scent. “I had been bitten by a hydra, he stumbled across me looking for the person who was killing the monsters in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
No worries. I like the response.
who says he’s leading a rebellion…..
Wolfgang
He nodded eagerly, then eyed the sword with a critical glance. “I like you’d snap my rapier in two with that thing. We don’t use swords like yours nowadays you know. I wish we did,” he added with a longing glance toward the sharp sword…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Lol. He might need to learn to notice details if he’s going to lead a rebellion.
Also don’t remember if they already talked about family. Maybe I need to keep better track of details.
I kind of spoke for Wolfgang, but I tried to write it so you could change his lines as you like.
Wilhelm
“Reinhard is…?” Wilhelm looked back…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Wolfgang is far too scatterbrained. If anything he thinks it’s a costume or interesting traditional clothing. That boy doesn’t stop to breathe, let alone think things out like this.
Wolfgang
“Wining the Olympics is one of the highest honors! I would love to fence in them, but I’m not sure that I would be skilled…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 1 day ago
I’m so sorry that happened.
I have a few thoughts, but I want to shoot you an email because I’d rather say what I have to say off-line.
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 1 day ago
It’s late/early depending how you look at it and I had the sudden urge to post this here.
I think I told you guys about my presyncope which is basically the fancy term for getting lightheaded and falling over without passing out.
Well, Friday I had a bad day where I felt occasionally dizzy, my head feeling like I had been hanging upside-down.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
For those interested, this is an anonymous poll for who you’d like to see me draw/redraw next.
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
@ellete-giselle thank you!
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Much happier
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h
I feel like changing my rp, but I can’t edit it, so please accept this alternative instead.
Gabriel Mai
He didn’t like things mysteriously appearing, especially not here. He moved closer to the girls, primrose eyes watching the pathway warily. He knew Soldier would try the door.
“You two stay here,” He comma…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
I’m amused that Wolfgang hasn’t connected the dots, especially considering Wilhelm’s 11th cent clothing, rooms, and culture. XD I know he thinks it’s impossible, but something should be tickling his subconscious by now.
Wilhelm
Either this boy was confused or Wilhelm was. Or perhaps both. The idea that knights were antiquated…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Wolfgang
A bright ringing laugh burst from him. “Tournaments are for knights, like in King Arthur’s day! We don’t have knights anymore. Well, the Brits do. I always wanted to go to England. But no, the Olympics is a huge competition that the best champions from every country in the world come to compete in. There are all…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
love it!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 2 days ago
ahh! Thank you!!! He looks great!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 2 days ago
those are so cool!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 2 days ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h
Gabriel
He didn’t like things mysteriously appearing. He moved closer to the girls, primrose eyes watching the pathway warily. He knew Soldier would try the door. He’d rather he himself scouted it out first.
“You two stay here,” He commanded the girls, pulling up his mask and drawing his blades. He approached…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 2 days ago
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