Penny Ambertheson

@koshka

Hi, Koshka! I love this poem 😀 I visualized it being sung by a captive like you said it would be and think that that works wonderfully:) It felt wintery and mysterious and sad and hopeful. I especially loved the last stanza and how each line in it was its own yet completely tied together. So I think that’s beautiful.
Hmmm, the only t…[Read more]

@koshka

Well, if you ever need a beta reader, critique, or anything else in the future, I am always available if you ever want. I hadn’t been critiquing or reading for awhile (very busy) but I’m happy to say that I can once again critique or you know, just give general thoughts or point out flaws and strengths that I see. But that is of cou…[Read more]

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

You’re hilarious XD (100% better than a comedian)  That’s devastating…

Hmm, I guess everyone may or will have different advice for you here, but I’d say the best way to keeping writing and hold onto those protein shakes, is to club your keyboard.

I mean force stuff out of your keys on spare minutes and write fi…[Read more]

@elfwing

Yes, I absolutely think it is amazing!! And that sounds awesome 😀
(I’d definitely recommend watching the film, it’s incredible:)

@koshka

Okay so first of all, I love this! The prologue was very poetic and although it wasn’t evident that the characters were wolves until the line of wolfish pride was mentioned, I thought it was very good. (Love that line btw).

Alright so here’s a weird thing I love looking at in fiction: the weather. I adored the weather and the aes…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you so much:)

@lydia-s

Thank you! 😀

@elfwing

I’ve been enjoying everything I’ve read so far:) Like, I love in your second character article where you talk about temper and impatience, (it sparked up a new scene idea for my villain. Even though he is on the more nonchalant side of things, he still has anger blowups). And it was fun and relatable reading from your perspective on thi…[Read more]

@Jodi-maile

Thank you! It’s great to be back around on KP:)
You said all that beautifully and I’ll never be able to stress it enough on how much of a relatable struggle it is. But that’s right, you have to write the story that you would want to pluck off your shelf and read. Or else, what’s the point? If you don’t enjoy writing it, the reader wo…[Read more]

@Joy-caroline

I know that I’m going love TAS. I already do:) But it will be so amazing to be able to actually hold it, the pages solid paper, print in black ink and- I get pretty sentimental about that sort of stuff too XD 🙂 It’ll be awesome.

Thank you! It’s great to be back:)

@koshka

Oh, good! I always love explaining this, so a wolf biography is basically just that. A wolf biography is written by people who observe and record a wolf’s life or a part of that wolf’s life. Which I think is super cool since like you said, wolves get a bad rep a lot of the time. People always hear about them attacking people when rea…[Read more]

@precious-y

Hi! I saw your post and though it is most likely too late to reply, I did not want you to think I ignored it whatsoever, sadly quite a few of my replies never appeared on the posts and unfortunately this was one of them. But I definitely thought your idea was a great one. Fun facts from your research would be an excellent writing…[Read more]

Hi *waves* 🙂 S0 author keeping author’s promise; here is a refreshed link to The Lost Manuscript, which does include all four, to-date installments, (I just never posted a new link which *facepalm* was stupid on my part). Anyway, just a reminder that my offer to completely ignore this post is valid, and you may want to consider taking the offer s…[Read more]

@elfwing

Oooh, that’s an excellent idea!:)

@elfwing

Yay!! I’m so happy to hear that, girl!!:) 😀 😀 I know exactly what you mean about how frightening posting writing can be, but I’m glad you are ‘cause you got some pretty awesome stuff to share!:D

@koshka

Sorry, that post turned out way longer than I thought it would be.

@koshka

Yeah, sometimes that activity board -honestly I’m not sure what its called- doesn’t always work the best with replies and stuff. *Shrugs* Oh well, this works perfectly and I won’t tell him you said that XD 🙂

That’s so cool that you love wolves too! I don’t know a lot of people who are huge fans, so its always great to meet a fellow fa…[Read more]

@Joy-caroline

If you can forgive this late reply, I most certainly have some recommendations for you!

Fiction Writing Master Class    By: William Cane

Shut Up and Write! By: Judy Bridges

Author in Progress    By: Therese Walsh

Are three titles definitely worth checking out and have been super helpful to me:)

@elfwing

AH! I’m so late in reading this, but my goodness! Those excepts most Sartain lay brung a smile to my face! It’s fantastic and I just have to say I LOVE SATHOR! He’s so cute and I laughed all through Tyroll’s awesome prank. Like I could just SEE it all happening so clear, Sathor groaning and looking at his sleeve and mortification on his…[Read more]