Orielle2023

@keilah-h @esther-c @charityanne @elizabeth-hearten @orielle21 @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @landric

Okay, sounds good!! I choose Fridays too :).

@keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @charityanne @elizabeth-hearten @orielle21 @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @landric

Alright.

It looks like 3 has gotten the most votes. But I know that everybody can’t do that. So I like what @elizabeth-hearten said. Some of us could do Fridays and the other half on Monday. That would probably work better.

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@esther-c @keilah-h @charityanne @booksandbeakers @elizabeth-hearten @orielle21 @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @landric

Seriously any time. So whichever one wins is great.

@esther-c @keilah-h @charityanne @booksandbeakers @elizabeth-hearten @orielle21 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @landric

Hmm, number 3 is best for me. I have dance practice on friday’s

@esther-c @keilah-h @charityanne @booksandbeakers @elizabeth-hearten @orielle21 @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @landric

I vote for #4. 

Fridays are when I don’t have as much school.

@keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @charityanne @booksandbeakers @elizabeth-hearten @orielle21 @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper

So let’s take a poll. (All times are ET)

1. Mondays 4-4:30pm

2. Fridays 4-4:30pm

3. Mondays 3:30-4pm

4. Fridays 3:30-4pm

I vote for #1.

Okay, so my plan for this is to have mostly third person, with just a few journal entries from my protagonist for this story. See what you think of this (rough draft) beginning! I’ll tag those of you who commented on it. 😉 Also, name suggestions are welcome!

@power @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @orielle21 @sarafini @booksandbeakers @elizabeth-hearte…[Read more]

@orielle21

I’m glad you like them! yeah… what happens to Layson… You might never find out XD As the plot gets more finished I want to have less and less of it out on the internet, in case I get published.

I believe it was already said, I didn’t emphasize it a lot though. Just some foreshadowing.

@orielle21

Its not too late! Thanks for your input! I will probably start working on both of them, and if I post the Civil War story, I will tag you!

And I 100% agree. Nothing beats just a touch of well-written romance. 😉

(ahhh finally getting to chapters that don’t make me cringe on every single sentence. Get ready for Roger pain 🙁

(Tw- hallucinations/memories of lost loved ones, mentions of murder)

Chapter 8

Roger

I kneeled there, almost frozen in shock until she fell asleep. I felt numb, and tingly as I slowly rose to my feet. My legs felt stiff as I…[Read more]

@orielle21

So neat to see that your grandma was an RN! Mine was too, and yes, that’s my major in college 😉 So my dream job is actually being a midwife, which is what I hope to pursue with further school (and you know, an author some day!).  I honestly don’t know if I’ve ever been asked my favorite bird! I think maybe a falcon. Hope to read some…[Read more]

@orielle21
I like it! The very first part is giving me Pevensie vibes. XD

@orielle21

Sorry I wasn’t clear about that! Yes….it is a time travel story. So, all the stories in this series that I plan to share are going to begin with a character in the present. They will then be transported back in time to some historical event. Whether they return to the present is for the reader to find out. 🙂 I don’t focus much on how t…

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@orielle21

Loved it! Was kinda disappointing that ship didn’t work out…

Speaking of which, I think I’ve noticed something about your writing. 😂

James and Jonath… act really similar.

🤔🤨

You got a type? XDXD

@orielle21 Very nice! I felt like it was real.

@landric

Welcome, welcome!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, amature writer!!

As for my writing, I dabble in a bit of everything. My WIP is ya dystopian, I have written the first book in a fantasy duology, and I have ideas for a his-fic, contemporary, and 2-4 ideas for biblical fiction s…[Read more]

I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.

I thought he had changed.

I thought he cared.

He did it.

The thing I never thought he would do.

I felt like I was in a haze.

The noise of chains met my ears.

He said he understood.

He helped me.

How could he?

I staggered and gripped the bars harder.

He said he…[Read more]

@orielle21 Thank you! So if I go start posting my story on here would you like me to tag you? 🙂

@freedomwriter76 Thankkkksss ^-^ I’ll tag you when i do soon!

@gwyndalf-the-wise That’s totally okay, whatever is chill. Chapter 4 is the one that makes the sensitive ones a little uncomfortable (very detailed of X392 being beat up) but on the…[Read more]