@orielle21
Active 1 year, 7 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Hey! I am totally interested in your story!!! Your mood boards are amazing! XD
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
kinda sad it ended XD
That’s the rough thing about writing short stories…you develop the characters…too soon the story ends but at the same time you want them to live on. 😃
Thank so much for sharing this with us, and best of luck on your future writing endevers!
Appreciate your encouragement! Next week I want to share…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
And yes, I am the type of person who loves epilogues. Without them, I always wonder…
Me too!!!! 🤩
I think overall you did a great job making the characters realistic, a hard feat for sure!
Thanks a ton! 😍
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello there. Greetings and salutations. Other forms of 'hi.' in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 10 months ago
@gwyndalf-the-wise
Hello. Nice to meet you and welcome to KP!Do you by any chance read or watch Tolkien? Just wondering what inspired your name. 😊
I’ve noticed we have a lot of mentally ill/disordered/disabled characters on here (particularly with PTSD & C-PTSD, depression, anxiety, and autism), do y’all think making a topic on that would be…
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Very nice!! 😍
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 10 months ago
Hi!! Welcome to KP!! You have a lovely name and dancing??!!! 😍😍😍 Do you have any poems about birds?
I’m a homeschool graduate. Right now I’m working full time as a barista but I am still trying to find time to write. I write stories mostly but every once in a very great while I will get inspired and write a poem. I find I have to…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello humans (I hope) in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 10 months ago
@c-j
Hey. Nice to meet you! Welcome to KP! Are you planning to share your stories?I’m a homeschool graduate, full time barista, Spanish speaking (still learning) birder who loves people. I write historical fiction for fun. If you are interested, I posted a story about a pioneer girl named Annie Adams here on KP. I have a book and want to wr…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Biblical Fiction Ideas!! in the forum Biblical Fiction 1 year, 10 months ago
@esther-c
SIMON!!! XD XD XD 😍😍 (BTW I’m really nervous about him right now. Can’t wait for episode five of season three to drop on Sunday.🤭)You did a great job with the mood board.
I love biblical fiction. I have at least one story going in that genre but haven’t looked at in a super long time. I was writing it about Barabas and his life befor…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn @arien @booksandbeakers @lewilliams @otherworldlyhistorian @princesachronicle22 @devastate-lasting
Anno…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Yo Ho. Hi! Nice to meet you. I’m one of the newbies here on KP. My sister @felicity told me about KP and I have been motivated again to pick up my pen and write. It’s hard finding time now that I am adulting. 😉 I’m a home school graduate, currently working full time as a barista. I love people and birds and play violin and am…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
*pouts in corner* Lol sometimes I wished I had a reason to dress up 😂
I know….me too. 🥺
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
When you mentioned the violin and the fiddle, you used them interchangeably. Do you (or anyone) know if there’s a difference? As in, could somebody who played the fiddle able to play the violin?
Great question!!! So basically as I understand it, violin and fiddle refer to the same instrument. The only difference is how it is p…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic WIP Idea (still making outline) for Kharvia Anthology S1B1 in the forum Sci-Fi 1 year, 10 months ago
I really need a map but all my attempts (which is like 2 tries for like 15 minutes each) haven’t turned out how I wan’t.
That’s okay. Good things take time. ☺️
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic WIP Idea (still making outline) for Kharvia Anthology S1B1 in the forum Sci-Fi 1 year, 10 months ago
Karpenta is located in the main part of the eastern continent between Vapoka and Naijin. To visualize I think it would be somewhat like if you looked at just Spain, France, and Germani’s locations. In this Vapoka would be Spain, Karpenta would be France, and Naijin would be Germany
Gotcha. The reason why I asked if K…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Hi KP friends. Part four is here!!!! As always, enjoy or ignore! If this is the first time you’ve seen this story, I suggest you read the first three parts first! 😉
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishav…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Really enjoyed the chapter! I love that you are adding a taste of the politics, you portrayed it really well. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Glad to hear. Thank you!! Going to post more right now. XD
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
So… Jonath and Ned are having a little strife. I don’t know your plans for the story, but are you thinking about whether it will effect the MC’s relationship with ,Jonath? Haha, I’m really picky about these things… sorry. I tend to think in terms of plot lines, so you don’t have to fix us much in the drafts!
Good question bu…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Amazing picture!! 🤩Nice job.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic WIP Idea (still making outline) for Kharvia Anthology S1B1 in the forum Sci-Fi 1 year, 10 months ago
WOW!!!! That was super interesting. I can see how that would have taken much time and effort to develop. You definitely have me hooked.
So the entire series is actually a group of serieses that all happen at relatively same time and which I am planning on writing in waves (as opposed to going all the way through one…
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