@orielle21
Active 1 year, 7 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic The Differences between Villans/Antagonists? in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
But what do y’all think makes the difference between an Antagonist and a Villain? 😉
Interesting discussion. I agree with you on what you said there.
When I think of a Villain, I think of someone who is evil through and through….one who intentionally is looking out for ways to hurt and harm people. Their very nature is wicked a…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Trapped in Library of the Kingdom of Pen — Author RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
This sounds like a ton of fun! Sorry I’m coming on board a little late. My life has been a little crazy.
Do you want me to wait to describe my character? I was trying to decide if people were already doing that or not. And like @felicity I’m EST. I am still deciding on what character to be…do we have to be human? Sorry for all the…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic January Hill (WIP idea) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
anyway I’m sick with COVID-19
So sorry to hear. Hope you get better soon!
Your idea sounds super cool and I love the character names!! Can’t wait to read it. 😉
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @sarafini @madelyn @arien @mineralizedwritings @koshka @booksandbeakers @lewilliams @princesachronicle22
@devastate-lasting @gold_hummingbird @charityanne @gwyndalf-the-wise @c-j
Story Two in my Journey to the…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Idea Poll in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Hey…am I too late for the poll?!
Both ideas are awesome but I like the Civil War time period better. 😉
Definitely tag me if you post it!!!
I write historical fiction….it’s one of my favourite genres. 😍
In MY humble opinion, a bit of romance always makes the story better. 😉
*waiting for any slight outbursts.*
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Getting interesting. I do need to refresh my memory on who Roger is. Sorry…I’ve been super busy the last few days
Please pardon this outburst. I had 2 shots of espresso at 6-7 something, and now at 2:30 am it is starting to wear off. 🙂🙃🙂😐😔😴
Lol. Love it.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Please hurry and help her!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So, I take it there are three MC’s? I do like the different perspectives. Good job. I felt everything. And I also like reading and writing first person.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Here’s a little teaser for you from my JTTP Hobbit fan fic story. It has over 22,000 words. LOL. I started it in March of 2019 and finished it in January of 2020.
Main Characters: Eugene, Meadow, Rowena, and Alfred
Eugene: tough, ready-for-anything, strong, handsome seventeen-year-old
Eudora: strong, determined,…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 10 months ago
Hey! And welcome to KP. (That rhymed. lol.) That must be super fun to be writing a novel with a friend!
A little about me….I’m a full time barista (glad to see you like coffee!!) who loves people and birds (and writing) and is learning Spanish. I saw you said that your brother is trying to get you into disc golf….I have three…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
You got a type? XDXD
Lol. So, most of these stories I wrote when I was 16-18 years old….all that to say, yes, I do have somewhat of a type but it has changed dramatically since then. XD That is super neat that you picked up on that….good to know. From your experience, is it good to have patterns/similarities in writing or…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
I like it! I am slightly confused, though… Is this a time-travel story or the character was daydreaming about what this town would’ve been like or something else entirely?
Sorry I wasn’t clear about that! Yes….it is a time travel story. So, all the stories in this series that I plan to share are going to begin with a cha…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
because I totally shipped James and Maria….. 😭
I know. I apologize about that. Don’t worry. James will find another Maria in his world.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Thank you! So if I go start posting my story on here would you like me to tag you? 🙂
Yes Please!! I see you did already. Lol. I’m going to read it tonight and I’ll let you know what I think.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Lovely! And you mentioned woodpeckers. 🙂
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
@booksandbeakers @lewilliams @otherworldlyhistorian @princesachronicle22 @devastate-lasting
@gold_hummingbird @charityanne @gwyndalf-the-wise @c-j and anyone else that I missed.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
More tags. 🙂
@wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn @arien
As always, enjoy or ignore. 🙂 And if you don’t want me to tag you, let me know. I won’t be offended. 😉
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Orielle2023 started the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin
Hello KP. I’ve decided to make a forum on sharing my Journey To The Past (JTTP) series stories. This is the first one I ever wrote. It’s pretty short and funny, but I think it’s cute.
Would there be interest in…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Awwww. I so love Tauren and Lesli. You did a great job and I am worried about Layson. Also, very interested in the voting thing….wondering what they are voting on. 🙂
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello, Humans of Planet Earth! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 10 months ago
Hi! Nice to meet you! I’m fairly new here too! I love your name!
I’m currently a full time barista, bird and people loving home school graduate who is learning Spanish.
Some questions for you:
1)What is your dream job?
2)What is your favorite bird?
Hope you have a great time on here! Looking forward to if you share your…[Read more]
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