OrangeArmadillo

@rae

Hi!! Sorry, I would’ve gotten to this earlier, I just didn’t even see it. Do you know how to tag people already or did you just not know who to tag?

It seems interesting so far! I think the biggest thing I noticed was that your paragraphs are really long — I think it would be easier to read if you split the paragraphs up, but that’s sort…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Yess!!! Read and reread them, they’re amazing. My family might be starting the first one as a read aloud, too! 😁 I’ve been trying to get my siblings to read them forever. Who’s your favorite character?

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t really know much about abuse effects or anything like that other than I’ve read in books, thankfully. One thing I would ask is, is it absolutely necessary to the plot/character? Because I think that can really easily become a cliched, sort of stereotypical in books, so if you’re just throwing it in there to make the…[Read more]

@hanako

Hi Nevaeh! It’s nice to meet you!

I’m hybridlore on here, or just Hybrid, a Christian, violinist, and sci-fi/dystopian writer. I’m also a homeschooler and enjoy doing lots of things! 😁

Okay, maybe you can revive the nonfiction section on here… I don’t know exactly what’s going on over there, but I don’t think it’s used very often.…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Yeah, I definitely like viola better, because of the sound, I guess. I don’t really know, but it just fits me better.

Yeah, I get that. It’s really similar to violin, just a little deeper, right? I don’t think you have an E string.

My inspiration for my WIP was a bunch of different books and one of my friends, who loves to imagine a…

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@sarafini

The Trinity is such a beautiful and essential thing, which… really, is still a bit of a mystery XD I believe the Trinity is Three in One, Three Persons, One God, equal in power and glory.

I can’t think of a bunch of verses off the top of my head. But a proof I love is in the very beginning!

Genesis 1:26: Then God said, “Let us make m…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

A few of your questions sparked some thoughts, so here ya go 😝

Do we discern truth based off of what feels right, or what has more logical substance? (More and more Christians I meet seem to prefer the latter in the form of Sola Scriptura, but many others say we should also judge by the Spirit, so I thought it would spark an…

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@sarafini

High school drama, new aspirations, all the funsies. Hopefully we can both stick to our goals 😜

@sarafini

Hello Sara!! How have things been?

I am LITERALLY listening to Abbie’s new Preptober episode right now 😂❤️ And I was gonna start a topic! You’re so faaaaast… 😂

I think my plan is to write a rough outline/script for my project, and probably continue write some of the actual draft until I’m excited enough to jump into a November. 40k words would make me happy. Honestly I haven’t…[Read more]

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings

So good!! 😍 I loved the use of color in both of your pieces!

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin

I don’t have the mental capacity to respond to those tips individually right now, but I read them, thought about them, and I really appreciated you girls taking the time to say something 😊❤️ Thank you both!

@keilah-h

He hasn’t seen his friend Everest in a long time, and she just showed up in the school, so he’s a little overwhelmed 😂

Ofc! We’d need a reason for them to stick together for a conversation, though. Any ideas?

@thearcaneaxiom

Wow, I really love this!! The concept is definitely something I could never pull off, so great job there. And the characters were completely relatable. You’re very good at conveying emotions in your writing – something I still struggle with a lot, because I don’t do it well irl either lol. Anyway, awesome job!!

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, here’s my advice. Plotting works for some people, but for the rest it doesn’t. If outlining kills your creative process, then don’t worry about doing it. I think it’s a lot of just experimenting and finding out what works for you. For me, I’m more of a pantser, but I usually know a few events that are going to happen in…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Hi! Saw this topic and wanted to check it out! It’s really interesting so far!

I think in the beginning, the style of the writing was kind of confusing. Overall it does give the idea of like, very choppy thoughts, sort of less established, so if that’s what you were going for, then great job. I just think that it might throw…[Read more]

@spinner4him

I’ve been playing viola for one year now, but I started playing violin when I was eight, so I usually say I’ve been playing a ‘stringed instrument’ for five years.

Awesome! I actually had a different friend who switched to viola after starting on violin, too. Do you like viola better? You probably do XD What do you prefer about it?
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Seb update ❤️ If anyone wants to interact with him, feel free. I feel like he’s been in his own little bubble since band practice.

Sebastian

Seb lay on his stomach on his desk, a shiny new phone clutched in front of his nose. He waved one arm wildly over his head, as he almost rolled off onto the floor. “You NEVER tell me things. Seriously. When…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks for the tag!! (:

@spinner4him

Hi! I love writing fantasy, as well as sci-fi.

Viola sounds so cool! I play guitar as well as a bit of piano and cello. I’ve never been out of the states lol, but I think it would be cool.

I know some people that go to Nicaragua on a regular basis, and they’ve invited me to come in the future,…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Darn, let me know if this shows up twice… I posted and then tried to edit Euodia’s tag, and then it deleted it, lol.

Anyway, it’s nice to meet you! I’m hybridlore on here, a Christian homeschooler, high schooler, violinist, and science-fiction/dystopian writer.

Awesome! I’m also the oldest child in my family. 😁 Okay, cool! Fanta…[Read more]