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@nova21

lol I may or may not feel very similarly about some of my characters… 😉

@nova21

I’m late (this is a theme in my commenting life rn… *facepalm*), but here are a couple of my MCs’ first lines. As a side note, BRILLIANT idea.

These two say their first three lines in the same scene and to each other. First, there’s Trevor, a moody, brooding bully (cinnamon roll type guy, though he doesn’t know it at the moment). Then,…[Read more]

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@nova21 @devastate-lasting @daisy-torres @lewilliams @elfwing @joy-caroline

Oh my goodness, all of you have been so sweet and super helpful!!! Thank y’all so much for the advice, it’s really helped me figure out the next steps to overcoming burnout and I feel SO much better now. *sighs of relief* Thank you guys so much, you’re the best! I’ve…[Read more]

@akbaer, fancy seeing you around here. 😉 Let me tag some people to come say ‘ello.

@writerlexi1216 @kathleenramm @abigail-m @faith-q @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @nova21 @ariel-f @nanisnook @scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams @ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon @devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18 @jodi-maile @daisy…[Read more]

copy-pastes a bunch of…[Read more]

@nova21

This looks so much fun! Thanks for tagging me 🙂 Here’s the first three things the protagonist of my previous WIP, Ilio, says. He’s a sweet, shy, academic boy who also happens to be a werewolf.

1). “Why am I naked?” Hmmm…I promise this makes sense in context.

2). “What has happened to me?”

3). “No.”

Interesting…

@nova21, ohmygosh, thank you so much.

(I’m glad it’s publishable, as it’s supposed to be releasing Spring/Summer 2022)

@kathleenramm Those lines sound amazing XD

@nova21 Bahaha sure thing! Only, you maay have to jump into the future at least 90 years XD

@devastate-lasting Haha thanks! I’m sure she’d love to be yours as well!

@nova21 Yayy! Glad I could help!! And listen, if you eeever need a beta/whatever reader, I’d love to assist XD

@nova21, sent it last night! let me know if you got it!

@nova21

Oooo this is SUCH a fun idea!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! And I LOVE Dylan’s dialogue. The first one was just kinda funny without the story’s context. XD It was awesome!!!!!

So my MC is a sixteen-year-old girl named Layla. I just started this new story, so I don’t know a lot about her yet, but from what I can tell she’s stubborn, competitive, and…[Read more]

@nova21 I like this idea.

My MC ain’t the most exiting character, but here are her first out of context lines.

“Isn’t there a meet today?”

*action of eye rolling* “you’re a terrible liar.”

“No, please. You know I don’t like those.”

Lol it sounds so strange out of context considering her character in the book.

Omgoodness…[Read more]

@nova21

I’m flattered. Anytime!

@nova21

So fun! These are from the messy first draft of the story I’m writing with my siblings

“Geez, Ted, I thought you were a superhero.”

“We climb onto the roof and break into the skylight. You unplug the freezers and smash all the ice cream cones, and I’ll find the secret recipes and vault. Got it?”

“Did you bring the grappling hook and ha…

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@nova21

Ditto what @gracie-j said… @elfwing nailed it!!! (GO DYLAN, by the way… I have a soft spot for guys like him)

@nova21 AHHH I LOVE THIS!!

Okay, since my book actually starts off with a prologue from the antagonist’s POV, I’m gonna put her first three lines and my MC’s (That takes place in Chapter 1 at a totally different place and time)

Corvina-

“Master? (Omit) Master?”

“Yes Master.”

“Ah!”

(Yea….lol. There’s a lot more inner dialogue then actual…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting lol thanks!

@nova21 Hahahahaha cinnamon rolls! That’s great! XD

@nova21 XD Plenty of adventures to choose from!

I love your lines as well! Dylan sounds like he’d be quite hard to work with.

@writerlexi1216 Felicity sounds like what you described her as. Nice job!

@daisy-torres I’d want to be Catherine’s friend!

@lewilliams I want to meet Horace, like, right now. He sounds so proper.

@elfwing She sounds…[Read more]